FF: Grits and Glory's Of Love *chap-14*last(Pg-16) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: aarushc

the update is good ...but keep Ragna together dear ...let them take revenge together ...do not separate them

ashwini



Thank you ashwini...shall keep that in mind :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Anjinie

so Paakhi is back, hopefully manda does some good and say to Kamala what she heard, when will Raghav learn the truth about his mother and I hope he and Kalpi never forgive her



Yeah she will :)
Thank you for reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

So r Gauri and Pakhi going to die , so then I think Sammy and Kalpi can tell the truth but actually Raghav should see the video. Update soon.



You will get your answers today.
Thank you cindrella :):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: premap

Eagerly waiting to see how you are 'spinning' this story. Enjoying myself. Please continue .


Heyee premap...thanx...thanx a lot...glad you are enjoying :):):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: InderAnoop

Continue... But give more frequent posts...


I will try Inderanoop.
I have a rough work schedule at times
Thank you for giving it a read :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: eishe10

Amazing update!!! It's not boring but it's different than the other stories. I do enjoy reading it. Continue to write more😉


Eishe thank you so much :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
so intertesting...dont end ...plzzz continue
nice update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
A heartfelt thank you to one and all.
Sorry if I missed out anyone on replying...hope you guys enjoy the update :):)





Chapter-11

The collision was so harsh...paakhi is thrown out of the car and hits hard to the divider parting the road...Guari trolls out of the car and gets awfully hurt...the air bag and the seat belt precaution supports the driver and he is one among hurt in least.The collision grabs the traffic police attention...crowd gathers...hooting sympathies , comments , bystanders get into shoes of judging and commenting about the accident...the traffic police checks paakhi's pulse...unfortunately it goes weak by each passing second...he even checks Guari's pulse shez fine but the bleeding makes her hurt awful...soon the ambulance reaches and drifting the victims to the hospital.

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Aai , baba I got a job offer...the wage is good and the offered perks are quite impressive as well...if you guys are willing then I'd give my consent to the offer...kalpi concludes.
Beta...go grab it...we always wanted to see you shine at your educational qualifications...and this oppurtunity coming from the organisation's side will fetch up your skills and it's honourable for us to see you excel and I know for my kalpi...sky is the limit...so happy that your talent and hardwork is paid and recognised...vittal ends.
Joyous kalpi hugs her baba...thank you so much baba.I will accept the offer...Elated she dails to the Employer and informs her acceptance...the employer requests her to visit office soon and process the further proceedings.

Kalpi visits Hi- tech constructions...meets the Employer Mr.Sudesh Pandey a succesful ceo in late 50's...!!

Mr.Sudesh Pandey - Kalpana I'm glad you accepted the offer , must say your skills are really exceptional..I look forward to work with young talents like you..my assistant would proceed you to further requirements.

Kalpi - thank you sir , Iikewise I look forward to work with your organisation.

The assistant says that she should be joining in week days time and asks kalpi to sign a contract bounding her to the organisation for a time period of 2 years...inwardly for a moment kalpi gives thought about Raghav...if at all things were to sooth down between us I would be working for your competing organisation...hope this doesn't bother you Raghav...after much thought process...she signs the contract and makes her way home.

Kalpi is happy that she can now become a woman of substance...she can fill her aai's dreams...the financial needs can be improved as well...she passes a silent thanks to God..!!
It's a heavy rain shez looking for a cab...but there is no sign of any...Raghav whose passing by pulls over.
Raghav - get inside kalpi...I insist...!!
Kalpi - considering the previous encounter , she gets in without any fuss...inwardly she feels happy that she saw him...
Raghav - thank you...kalpi...!!

The journey was calm...neither of them start the conversation...mean while kalpi watches Raghav heading towards sammy's place.

Kalpi - Raghav I'm still at my place...
Raghav - oh...I don't know that...no issues...I shall drop you at your place...!! He changes his directions towards kalpi's place...he breaks the silence...are you out on some purpose to this area...?? Let it be if you don't want to answer...he concludes.
Kalpi - looks at him and decides to shareherr happiness with him..Raghav I'was here to meet Mr.Sudesh Pandey...he is so impressed by my presentation skills...and he offered me job as well..I took it Raghav she ends ...eager to know about his reaction.
Raghav - oh wow...that sounds great...no wonder he is all praises for you in yesterday's meet...and you deserve it all...congrats kalpi...I'm really happy for your success. He ends with a genuine smile of awe and pride towards her.
Kalpi - thank you Raghav...an...d...she receives her baba's call...questioning about her whereabouts..she ends the call by telling him that shez on her way and almost reached.
She reaches her home gives an intense love filled gaze to Raghav...and thanks him for the drive.
Raghav - it's fine kalpi...tc.

Raghav was about to head back to his meeting venue...he receives a call..only to know that his mother is hospitalised due to accident.., worried Raghav heads to hospital.

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Doctor - Mr.singhania...your , mother had a major spinal cord injury...and a few other injuries and ruptures , time and proper medication might heal her gradually...that will be all to say...!!

Raghav - thank you doctor...!!

Raghav glances his sleeping form of mother...connected with a few medical apparatus...he feels equally hurt and sorrow at her condition.

A nurse comes and informs him that there is another young lady accompanying your mother...unfortunately she couldn't be saved and passed out at her way to hospital...we are sorry for your loss Mr.Singhania.

Raghav - what...can you please take me to her !!

Moments later he gets to see the dead , motion less form of Paakhi...though he dislikes her to core , he never expected the worst for her...not the death...she is ill-willed...but death...God you are cruel and mean...he whispers a rest in peace for her and moves back to his mother.he requests sammy to come to him..as he needs him the most now.

Sammy reaches hospital...to support his friend...don't worry Raghav..aunty will be fine..he pacifies.

Police come in...they say that the accident was pure fated...the drivers of both truck and car were hurt too..but there was no sign drunk and drive.

Sammy thanks the officer..!!

Raghav - sammy Paakhi is no more...inform to her family...!!



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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohh I m happy Pakhi is no more...thnx...hope kalpi will not be in trouble after signing contract...
nice update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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why i am feeling that kalpi wil get into new trouble😭????Gauri😡 shud get strong reality check
for wht she did for kalpi till now
nice update😊
Edited by dimpleagar - 11 years ago

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