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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Lovely update Aruhi! So Kalpi helped Avantika when she was not well and later to bag the project. She in turn took Kalpi to Dubai, where she got her life back. The scene where she met Ashu was funny. She's a vibrant girl. Loved how Ashu changed Kalpi's mood when she was upset. After reading the diary Raghav is able to understand her better. Loved how Kalpi asked Raghav 'are you going'? and he said I won't go if you don't want. Tiya and Darsh are so funny. Pumpkin aunt. ...lol.

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Lovely update Aruhi! So Kalpi helped Avantika when she was not well and later to bag the project. She in turn took Kalpi to Dubai, where she got her life back. The scene where she met Ashu was funny. She's a vibrant girl. Loved how Ashu changed Kalpi's mood when she was upset. After reading the diary Raghav is able to understand her better. Loved how Kalpi asked Raghav 'are you going'? and he said I won't go if you don't want. Tiya and Darsh are so funny. Pumpkin aunt. ...lol.

right kiara..love the name pumpkin aunty nd ashu nd raghav also joined them🤣

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#503

I just loved this that Raghav found Kalpi's diary and he is about to read it!

What better way to know Kalpi who had kept herself away frm him. Now once he reads her diary he will atleast feel he had been through whatever she has been through. He will realise what all she had to suffer due to his misdoings! Raghav on a guilt trip is good!

Then he will feel like pampering Kalpi all the more! Yes I want him to pamper her a lot! More than she could have thought of! Ofcourse that would not nullify what she missed all these years but hopefully she feels better and Raghav makes himself trustworthy in her eyes!

Hope the children help their daddy in this mission!

Great job! Just keep writing! Dying to see my RagNa together spending some cosy time together!

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sharanya

@sharanya0011

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#504

wow aru its nice update..

dairy part was beautiful... kalpi feelings were beautifully writen..her relationship with ashu and avanthika was awesome..

loved it..

loved the way rags taking care of kalpi ..

continue soon dear..

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Aru its just superb how rags take care of kalpi n the diary part is good

U were underestimating yourself dear superb

Waiting for your next update

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#506

awesome update...waiting for another update...

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#507

res..

Unres

It was really fabulous one dear.. loved the way u wrote it with Raghav too feeling guilty and with his pov...The best one was Raghav getting angry on kalpi when he reads ajju waala part😆

Edited by appyK - 11 years ago

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sampa79

@sampa79

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Superb update

No words to express

Update soon next part

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#509

Really a very good update.U have written so nicely and smartly i had also started imagining that Kalpi is writing the diary infront of you.And the way the person mentions the details ,their inner feelings and expectations in the dairy were clearly updated.Awesome,you should also start writing a dairy at the earliest.

I am so anxious to know that whatelse are mentioned in the dairy.How is it going to help Raghav in convincing Kalpi?????????????.Will Kalpi come to know that Raghav had read her personal dairy???

How are you going to describe these situations??.

So so so eager to read the next update hopefully by tommorrow😊😉😭👏

NOTE: SMILE AND CLAP FOR PART 30. WINK FOR PART 31.CRY FOR NO UPDATE BY TOMMORROW