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Wow aru it's good
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice story...i read it all chapter...i love it..even i dont understand any words in hindi but i still read it coz this story is interesting...may i ask you to write more in english please?
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Awesome update
I like how Raghav was teasing Kalpi
And she denying that she is not affected by him anymore was cute lol
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fabulous update.. continue asap..
loved how kalpi had booked the room as mrs.singhaania instead of ms.jadhav😃
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turypriya, eishe10, sweet1308, zindgidilse,shikha-aggarwal,sharanya0011, lolor ,Cinderella81, ragnasangle, lailabatrisyia, ...Natasha, appyKthank you so much all for liking my ff hope you all like next part also.@lailabatrisyia- i'l; try der to write in english more..
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Chapter 22 B

In chawl:

Morning: 11:00 Am

(kamala come from mandir)

Kamala- vitthal aaj ka din bahut acha hai ..pata hai aaj darshan bahut ache hue..aye ..le prsaad..

Tiya- and what about me???mera parshaad kaha hai???

Kamala- ohh..to meri nanhi si chidiya ko bhi prashaad chahiye...ye lo..

(manda come there)

Manda- kamala tai sirf gherwalo ko parshaad dogi kya?? mujhe nahi dogi.(kamala give prshaad to manda)..tai apko mana padega itne pakya ne itne paise kama liye hai but aap chawl chodkar kahi nahi gaye..abhi tak yahi ho chawl main..

Pakya- kyun aap kya chate ho ki hum chawl chodkar chale jaaye?

(kamala give a tea to vitthal, pakya & manda)

Manda- maine issa kab kaha???

Pakya- abhi abhi toh aap yahi keh rahi thi.

Manda- dekh pakya tu meri baat ka galat matlab nikal raha hai.

Tiya- mamu ye kaun hai?? aur itne jor se kyun bol rahi hai??

Pakya- ye manda tai hai..yahi chawl main rehti hai hamare saath.

(manda notice tiya)

Manda- ye kaun hai?? aur yaha kya kar rahi hai? aur ye tumhe mamu kyun keh rahi hai?

Pakya- apko isse kya ki ye kaun hai aur yaha kya kar rahi...aur ye mujhe mamu kahe ya kuch aur isse aapko ko kya??aap hmare gher se door rahengi toh acha hoga.

Manda- pakya tu iss tarah kaise baat kar sakt hai mujhse...hey deva ye sune se pehle main mar kyun nahi gayi..

Tiya- koi baat nahi ab mar jayengi..

Manda- matlab??

Tiya- matlab aapne jo chai bhi pe naa usmain maine rat poison milaya tha.

Manda- rat kya??

Tiya- rat poison matlab chuhe marne ki dawa..ab kuch hi der main aap chuheki maut mar jyoge.

Manda- kya??? ye kya kar diya tumne??? mujhe abhi doctor ke paas jana hoga...vitthal dada chalo mujhe doctor ke pass leke chalo..

Kamala- beta ye kya kar diya tumne...ab ager unhe kuch ho gaya toh??

Tiya- aap kitni panic hoti ho bilkul mamma ki tarah..kuch nahi hoga inko...main kuch nahi kiya..main toh sirf mazak kar rahi tha..

Manda- kya???

Tiya- haan...kal apne mere dost ke saath jo kiya ye uski saja thi..

Vitthal- tumhara dost??? yaha kaunsa dost hai tumhara???

Tiya- Mr.ped...(Mr.tree)

Vittha- MR.ped???

Tiya- haan..wo chawl ke mandir ke side main jo chota tree hain naa wo mera dost hai..uska naam mr.ped hai aur kal inhone uski ke daal tod di..not fair..isliye maine ye sab kiya.

Manda- haan..iska matlab tumne chai main chuhe marne ki dawa nahi dali thi??

Tiya- nahi but agli baar apne mr.ped ko kuch kiya naa toh main such main rat poison aapke chai main dal kar aapko de doongi..

Manda- nahi main usko kuch nahi karungi..pakka..ab main chlti hoon.

(and manda run from there)

Pakya- kya baat hai tiya u to good..

Tiya- haaahaaahaaa..thank you mamu...

Kamala- beta ye thik nahi kiya apne..ye sahi nahi hai..

Tiya-so sorry..age se nahi karungi..but such bolna aapko bhi maja aaya naa??

(kamala smile on this and all laugh)

Kamala- aacha ye toh batyo ki tumhara bhai kaha hai???

Tiya- kaun darsh..wo toh chinti (ant) se uska address pata karne gaya hai.

All three- kya???

Tiya- haan..thodi der pehle hum niche gaye the naa tab usne waha chinti dekhi and he want to see ant's house..that's why he follow that ant.

Kamala- what?? where is he now??if he gone out side of chawl then...vitthal tumhe thodi der ke liye kayal rakhne ke liye kaha tha..tum itna bhi nahi kar paye?

Tiya-don't worry..he is not going any where..wo chawl ke mandir ke back side main hai..jakar dekh lijiye.

(kamala,vitthal & tiya go there and see darsh watching ant's)

Kamala- what are u doing beta??

Darsh- hooo..app aa gayi...sorry maine apko dekha nahi..main inhe dekh raha tha..kitni cute hai naa??

Tiya- ohh..hoo..isko koi bhi cute lagta hai...parso wo garden wala frog acha laga tha..

Vitthal- kya??

Tiya- haan..apko nahi pata ye issa hi hai..chodo isko...i'm hugry now chalo na khana khate hai..

Kamala- haan chalo (to darsh) chalo beta..

Darsh- but ager ye...

Kamala- chinta mat karo ye kahi nahi jayengi..ab chalo

(all left from there)

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(its 5 hours left..kalpi avoid raghav from morning and raghav also not follow her...he doing his work on his room)

Kalpi (pov)- hey deva ya kya ho raha hai??? raghav ki preseance effect karti hain mujh per & i no that but main nahi chati ki ye baat unko pata chale..now i don't want that he enter my life again..unhone jo kiya uske liye main unko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti..unko laga ki maine wo sab kiya..how did he say that i trying to seprate him from his mom..he don't trust me that time..now i never forgive him for that...focus kalpi..focus..main yaha sirf kaam karne ke liye aayi hoon aur mujhe unta hi karna hai jitna ho sake raghav se door rehne hai.

(raghav in his room doing work on his laptap..his phone ring that time)

Raghav- hello..

Sammy- hey raghav where are you??puna pochne ke baad ke call nahi kar sakte the?

Raghav- sorry yaar main bhool gaya tha isliye nahi kar paya..

Sammy- haan..ab kalpi saath main hai toh humari yad kaha se aayegi.

Raghav- what??? how dran=matic sammy..and issa kuch nahi.

Sammy- acha..jhoote..btw where is she??

Raghav-i don't no...hogi apne room main.

Sammy- what?? iska kya matlab hai? wait...wait..wait...you fight with her again right??

Raghav- wrong..fight tab karunga naa jab wo mujhe milegi..wo toh subah se mere saath hide & seek khel rahi hai.

Sammy- what?? raghav means tumne jarur kuch kiya hai..what did you do now??

Raghav- sammy tumhe nahi lagta ki ye kuch jyada ho raha..maine kuch kiya hai ya nahi ye hamari bich ki baat hai so mujhe tang mat karo aur phone rakho.(raghav cut the call)(pov) ache se apna kaam kar raha tha isko kya jarurat thi kalpi ki yaad dilna ki..now kaam bhi nahi hoga..waise bahut time h gaya kalpi hai kaha??meeting jane ka bhi time ho gaya hai..

(raghav come out of his room and go to reseption)

Reseption-acha hua sir aap hi aa gaye..main abhi apko hi call karne wali thi.

Raghav- why?? what happened??

Reseption- sir wo mrs.singhanai apke liye ye note chod kar gayi

(reseption lady give the note to raghav..he read that note)

Mr.singhania,

mujhe kuch jaruri kaam hai isliye main jaa rahi hoon..app se directly meeting main milugi..don't worry about me..bye

(raghav smile read to note)

Raghav (pov)- so you run from me..no problem ye bhi try karke dekhte hai..

(raghav come to meeting venue..kalpi already there..she watch the view outside from window)

Kalpi- wow kitna beautiful garden hai..

Raghav- haan but tumse jyada nahi.

Kalpi- aap?? aap kab aaye??

Raghav- jab aap ye garden dekh rahi thi tab.

Kalpi- your are late.

Raghav- no i'm not late..you come early...cheack the time sweetheart.

Kalpi- awwo..you called me sweetheart...aapko toh main..

(one person enter that time)

Person- sorry sir, sorry mam but today's meeting cancel by mr.bajaj...he said he not come today..so meeting postpond tomorrow.

Kalpi- what??? no kal toh humain jana hai..kal meeting kaise ho sakti hai..that's not fair..plz do something and say mr.bajaj ki wo meeting postpond naa kare.

Person- sorry mam its not possible..its his decision and husmain hum kuch nahi kar sakte..and if yo any problem with it then we cancel this meeting.

Raghav- no..plz don't cance meeting.. we are ok about it..meeting kal hogi..hum ek aur din yaha ruk jayenge.

Person- ok so kal issi time pe meeting hai..plz don't late mr.bajaj ko late pasand nahi hai.

(say this the person go from there)

Kalpi- what the hell?? what he think about his self?? isa kaise kar sakta hai wo?? aur aap...app bhi kuch kam nahi hai..app kaise ready ho sakte hai iskeliye..

Raghav- kalpi hamare pass aur koi option nahi hai..jarurat hamri hai unki nahi.

Kalpi- whatever...main yaha nahi rukne wali..i'm going right now..

Raghav-(angry)- ok then go..maine umhe nahi rokne wala..tum samjahne ke liye tayar hi nahi ho toh main kuch nahi kar sakta...jaan hai toh jayo..

Kalpi- fine then jaa rahi hoon main...and don't follow me.

(kalpi go from there and raghav push the chair on anger...after sometime raghav come to hotel..all people in tension)

Raghav- what happened here??

Manager- sir

communal riot spreading all over city...People have gone mad and curfew has been clamped, police have done blockade at many places.

(

Raghav was tensed and he called Kalpi, moving his fingers over his hairs. Kalpi not picked up the call..he try again and again finaaly kalpi pick the call).

Kalpi- i not pick your call then why you trying to call me again and again..i don't want to talk to you.

Raghav-Are you gone mad or what? Where the hell are you? Do you have any idea what is going on the city?

Kalpi- ya i very well know about the situation but i want to go mumbai right now...so i'm going chahe jo bhi ho.

Raghav: Where are you?

Kalpi: I am not answerable to you. You are no one to me.

(Raghav was losing his patience,)

Raghav-ok fine i'm no one for u then i call kamala maa you answer her where are u?

Kalpi-

No! Don't dare to call aai..if you do that then...

Raghav- then what?? kalpi..don't create scene and tell me where are you..warna i call kamala maa right now..

Kalpi-no..i'm tell you..i'm on m.g. road...

Raghav-ok thanks..(and raghav cut tha call)

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(kalpi walking on street..ahe is angry on raghav)

Kalpi(talking to herself)- what he think about himself...who did he talk with me like this...his no right on me...i hate him..

(kakpi lost in her thoughts and suddenly she see a some group of people hit 1 boy (15-16 age) he wants to save his steert shop from this people and in this they people start hit him)

Kalpi- look plz its not right..why are you hit innocent people..they do not anything..punish those how do wrong with you but not do anything this people.

1 person- dekhiye madam hat jaiye yaha se aur humain apna kaam karne do warna tumhara bhi wahi ajam hoga jo iska ho raha hai.

Kalpi- look dhamki dene jaruart nahi hai..main nahi darti tum logo se..kya kar loge tum log...

2 person- acha abhi dikhate hai ki hum kya kar sakte hai.

( the person takes his hockey stick and want to hit kalpi...kalpi close her eyes in fear..raghav come there he see kalpi with that people..he see the person wo take his hockey stickto hit kalpi...he come between and stop stop the person and hit him..the person fall down..bcoz of this

The mens got angry and started to attack Raghav with hockey. raghav fight with them but some of them start walking towords kalpi..raghav see this and came between kalpi and those mens.raghav said kalpi to run from there)

Raghav- kalpi run...

KAlpi- no main tumhe yaha akela chod kar nahi jaa sakti..\

Raghav- don't worry about me..jsu go from here.

Kalpi- no raghav..

Raghav- kabhi toh meri baat maan liya karo..jayo...

(kalpi run from there..some people follow her but she hide behind the wall and they people go forword...then kalpi again where raghav was...kalpi see that the people hitting Raghav with hockey sticks...Those men were hitting Raghav very hard, he was bleeding heavily, and even his hands were shivering but his eyes were showing no pain but concern for Kalpi, that has shocked Kalpi who was watching Raghav through far..raghav see kalpi and his angry on her for again come here..kalpi read his eyes..there eyes met..raghav see the pain in kalpi's eyes and kalpi see the concern for her in raghav's eyes and also anger..kalpi run from there for find some help..she see 1 police fan come ..she stop the fan)

Police- what happened mam..its everytihng all right?

Kalpi- no.. some people hit my husband..plz help us..plz

Police- ya where are they?

(kalpi take the police where raghav was..police come and arrest those people..kalpi come close to raghav..he is not in his secnes)

Kalpi- raghav..raghav..open your eyes...look i'm sorry..i no its my fault..plz get up.

Police- don't worry mam..he is alright..its just that he is uncounsious bcoz of blood loss

Kalpi- plz help me to take him hospital..

Police- sorry mam all city is blocked and iss area ke pass koi hospital nahi hai..abh ke liye aap inhe gher leke jayiye aur first-ai kijiye inka..phi kal inko aap hospital leke jana...abhi ke liye aayiye hum apko aapke gher chod dete hai.

Kalpi- but we are not from pune..we come here for meeting...we saty in hotel White sea...

Police- ok no promblem hum apko apke hotel chod dete hai..aayiye.

(police drop kalpi and raghav to hotel...raghav not in his full sense..kalpi place his hand on her shoulder and her place her 1 hand on his waist and 2nd use to support him for stand..kalpi come close to his room...she stop there for second thought enter the room or not...raghav come in his full sense and his body start paining...he tight his grip on kalpi's shoulder..kalpi feel his pain..

brushing all the thoughts from her mind she decided to take him to the bedroom..he couldn't even walk properly...his left leg was injured too...she made him sit on the bed apply medicines his leg which was bleeding terribly..she see a blood on raghav's shirt...then she unbuttoned his shirt..both were a little uncomfortable..but for now she didn't cared about it and apply medicine on his wound... he was so much busy looking at her that he forgot about everything else..)

Kalpi- stop staring me..

Raghav- why?? your my wife and not donig anything wrong..

Kalpi- don't say this..i'm not your wife.

Raghav- ok agree..but then what about mrs.singhania..you ragister your name this.

kalpi- i don't think mujhe iss baat ka jawab apko dena chahiye..aur no more question warna main yaha se chali jayungi.

(she medicined a part of his chest which was also bleeding...then she stood up... gave a look to the bleeding near his lips..she moved closer to him..leaned down to him...took the cotton wet with antiseptic...slowly removed the blood...he was straight looking into her eyes...not feeling the pain...she could feel his gaze..but was more concerned about his injuries...she brought cotton which was dipped in water...slowly moved it near his wound..he was still looking at her)

Raghav(pov)- wow... how beautiful she looked..every time..i miss her so much in last 5 years..i thought she never come back in my life but she came...now main use kabhi jaane nahi donga..naa use naa tyia aur darsh ko..

(now..!!..she couldn't concentrate...she looked into his eyes... could feel everything..his love his passion his care... everything only for her..he moved his hands up & cupped her face..she closed her eyes...the distance reduced b/w them..they kissed..passionately..the hunger, love for each other..everything came out in that kiss..they lied down on bed..continuing their kiss...they slowly dozed off...hugging each other..as if to never leave each other...raghav and kalpi sleep that night in eachothers arm)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome update as always
loving ragna sequence at the end which shows kalpu's care towards raghav
raghav had shown his care for kalpi many time( Like in this update he took all injuries of kalpu on himself) but this time it was kalpi's turn to show it
and it worked..there difference was reduced by thier one kiss..hope ragna romance will continue
great job done by u..👏
Edited by zindgidilse - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just awesome... I really love your story.. Loved tiya's joke and darsh's finding ant's address thing..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW!!! Wonderful update!! Love the cute kids scenes and obviously RAGNA moments which was amazing and romantic in the end. Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a nice update. Can't wait for next part. Pls continue.

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