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Posted: 11 years ago
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Meet..
Sneha Khanna..


Aryan Khanna..

Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Please read: The CV's killed the determined kalp...according to me the kalpi we see now is totally weak...she's become a fool in love..this ss being a continuation of ema's current track is showing a weak kalpi in this part..hope u guys understand..here's Part 2:

Vithal was worried about kalpi and was continuosly pacing...to add up to his bad mood was neetu's continuos bickering...A tired but smiling kalpi came in the house...

Vithal- Where were u?? I was so worried..both u and ur mother out of the house..
Kalpi- What aai is not at home!!!
Vithal- (in a dejected tone)Might have gone to meet paakhi..Leave that how was your interview...
Kalpi- It was good..they'll inform about the job in few days..

Kalpi went to freshen up...after some time kamla came back..she had gone to paakhi's house make her understand that what she's doing is not right...
After dinner everyone except kalpi went to sleep..

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She stood outside in her balcony looking at the sky thinking about Raghav...sneha's pep talk did bring a temporary smile on that beautiful face but the shadows of her sorrow soon engulfed the smile and her eyes were again clouded with tears...She was again falling weak...yet another ferocious battle had started and to add fuel to the fire she got a call from Raghav..She was not in the state of mind to answer his call so she simply put her phone on silent and went near the bappa's temple..Sat in front of the idol..

"Why bappa..why does it always happen to me..
First she snatched my aai from me now Raghav...Right from childhood I'm the one suffering...why??...everything that rightfully belonged to me was taken away...and now when i'm demanding it back that girl says she shared those things and that those things were hers...
When i was getting engaged to Raghav aai slapped me ... but when paakhi married raghav aai didn't say a word..later on she even did support her...
I can't curse her...she's my aai...but how long can i bear this pain...
I can't...i give up...i quit bappa...i quit..."

"Stop it", A familiar voice said...

"Stop behaving like a bechaari...like a victim of almost all evils in the world"..

It was Aryan..he had come back to hand over kalpi her purse which she left in the car...when he reached their he saw kalpi coming towards the temple...tears flowing from the beautiful eyes...he heard her conversation...

Wiping away her tears kalpi stood up..."What r u doing here??"

A-I came to give u your purse..
K-Thanks..

Taking the purse kalpi was retreating to her home only to be stopped by a strong hold..
"What do u think u r doing aryan ?",she said as she tried to free herself from his hold..
"I want to show you something...please come"..before kalpi could say something he continued,"Trust me"...the genuineness in his voice forced kalpi to agree...

They sat in his car and drove away..
K-Where are we going??
A-You'll see..

Suddenly Aryan stopped the car...getting out he held kalpi's hand and brought her to show her a group of beggars dancing on drum rolls..
A-"Look at them..not everyone there was as poor as they are now...their houses,land even their parents were snatched away in natural calamities...look they are still happy with what they have"..
K-"But..."
A- I'm not done yet..

He held her hand and took her to a bridge..on the other side there were call girls standing..

A-See there..these are called as victims...victims of their situation..they are the ones who suffer right from childhood..I'm sure kalpana your life is not this bad...just because a jerk ditched u...just because ur mother ignored u as a child does not mean that u should just quit...instead u should show those people what u r capable of...don't ask or beg for ur rights snatch them..if u r confident that u r right then do what u want to not what others want u to do..

Saying so Aryan just walked away...Kalpi followed him..
The drive from that place to kalpi's home was filled with silence..
On reaching her home...kalpi just got down of the car and went inside her house...She slept to wake up to a new morning...to a new kalpana..

Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww! Aryan is Mohit sehgal and Sneha is Ruhaanika Dhawan!
2 of my favourite actors! =)..
And I loved ur update dear! It's really nice!
Hoping for a great change on our Angel!
and Im falling in love w/ Ayan 😉
Edited by -HeyJude- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pm me please the like button aint working for me!! i lovwe your story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow really its wonderful and amazing😊
loved it..
Aryan and kalpi conversation was awesome👏
waiting for new and strong kalpi..
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update👏
Loved kalpi n Aryan conversation
Eager to read abt changed n strong kalpi
Continue soon n thnxs 4 pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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happy to see new guy for kalpi...kameena raghav dont deserve kalpi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome...and Aryan as mohit sehgal...vow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -HeyJude-

Awww! Aryan is Mohit sehgal and Sneha is Ruhaanika Dhawan!

2 of my favourite actors! =)..
And I loved ur update dear! It's really nice!
Hoping for a great change on our Angel!
and Im falling in love w/ Ayan 😉


Hope u love the change too..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: incredible96

pm me please the like button aint working for me!! i lovwe your story!


Sure dear...glad you loving it😃

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