RAGNA: FF Mera Pyar Meri Zindagi Note 26/7/2015

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Kavya

@AriyaLilyOrchid

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hii frnds I m new to this form I recently started seeing ema five or six months back n I liked it but now the way it's turning up I m hating it kalpi is always shown as a punching bag or sacrificer n whenever they feel like it they can raise there hand n leave her in pain to suffer n her own mothers asks her to sacrifice happiness for her pakhi baby n not thinking abt kalpi's pain n her own father knows that she misses her mother but isn't strong enough to tell kamla abt it if he takes a stand for his daughter kalpi would got her mother's love long before n raghav he says he loves kalpi but cannot take a stand for her when the need arrives n kalpi's
brother he cannot take stand for his sister when something goes wrong with her so I m writing a new ff which focuses on kalpi n raghav n others in this kalpi is strong headed one n doesn't sacrifice what is hers n raghav is also a bit different in this he stands by kalpi in all the times like happiness n sorrows n the plot is completely different n revenge track to and kalpi's brother pakya is also strong enough to take stand for himself n his sister if u like it I will update tomorrow... 😊 😊

CS on pg 2
Chapter one pg 3
Chapter two pg 5
Chapter two hindi translation available on pg 6

Chapter three pg 8
Chapter four pg 11

Edited by AriyaLilyOrchid - 10 years ago

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 11 years ago

Of course , you should update. Would love to see a strong Kalpi and Raghav who stands by her no matter what.

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 11 years ago

I'm looking forward to read your ff
Plz continue soon

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rani214

@rani214

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sounds interesting looking 4wrd 2 read😊

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Kavya

@AriyaLilyOrchid

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Posted: 11 years ago

Raghav Singhania aka rags - Age 28
Rude,arrogant,attitude,shrewd,intelligent,handsome
Successful businessman n has many types of business in textiles,hotels,construction companies
But more than this loves his bunny(kalpi) more than his life can do anything for her happiness
Hates tears in her eyes n sorrow in her eyes
Fiance of kalpi,best friend of Sammy & Maya
Hates kapoor's n wants to destroy them completely for taking away his both parents life by causing a accident

Kalpana Jhadhav aka bunny - Age 24
beauty with brains,smart,modern,topper of her college n university n has her own business which is KR fashion house which located in all over world n in position 1 unbeatable fashion house
Hates pakhi for snatching away her mother n kamla for not caring abt her n giving her share of love to pakhi n doesn't care abt her mother n her dreams only cares for brother n father n loves raghav very much n fiance of raghav only carefree n bubbly naughty mischievous with raghav Sammy n Maya n to others rude,introvert,attitude,arrogant

https://img.india-forums.com/wallpapers/1280x1024/315848-ishaan-singh-manhas.jpg

Samar Raichand aka sammy - Age 28
CEO of Singhania group of industries,smart,handsome,happy go lucky,
Best friend ofraghav n kalpi n loves Maya Sharma in relationship with her from two years
Pillar of support for ragna

Maya Sharma - Age 24
Lovely,beautiful works as manager in kalpi's office n supports ragna all the time
Loves Sammy very much best friend of ragna and hates pakhi for having crush on samar

Pakhi Kapoor - Age 24
Fashion student,nice,dumb,sweet,thinks she is great n will get whatever she wants and has crush on samar
Loves her kamla ma very much n dislike kalpi for her beauty
In her jealousy tried to degrade kalpi in her mother eyes to get kamla's love which is kalpi's

Kamla Vittal Jhadhav
Loves only her pakhi baby n milk mother to her n doesn't know about her daughter's.success n always wishes to become rich n see her daughter as memsaab which she doesn't know that her daughter fulfilled her dreams long before n lives in Singhania crawl

Vittal Jhadhav
Loves his wife n both his children but sometimes cannot be strong enough to take stand for his children works in a textile company(which raghav owns) But when time comes he stands up for his children

Prakash Jhadhav - Age 27
A mechanical engineer,sweet,lovely
Runs his own business which is successful
Dislike pakhi for snatching his n kalpi's share of love from kamla
Strong enough to stand for himself n kalpi

The kapoor's are same killed raghav's parents in car accident n runs illegal business like fake property constructions

Will update prologue n chapter one tomorrow hope u like it 😃 😃

Edited by AriyaLilyOrchid - 10 years ago

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Eishwinder K Singh

@eishe10

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very interesting. Can't wait for the update😃

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Roshna

@RoshnA1

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice CS...Waiting eagerly for the next update😳

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

intrsting concept and cs

loved it

cont soon

witing

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Kavya

@AriyaLilyOrchid

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Posted: 11 years ago

NEW YORK

A guy sitting in his cabin working on a project just then
his secretary enters

KNOCK KNOCK...!!!!

Guy: come in

Secretary: sir your arrangements for traveling to India has been done

Guy: okay you may leave Lucy I will inform raghav

Secretary leaves

Guy goes to another huge cabin

Guy: raghav the arrangement to go India has been done...

Raghav: okay Sammy, I am leaving have to pick up kalpi from office

Sammy: okay see u at home

Raghav leaves

A girl comes out of meeting room directly to her cabin n walks to window seeing the newyork city
While thinking

Girl's pov
Tomorrow I m leaving this city which is my home for last six years I wish everything goes as planned seeing. said n pakhi will give me pain daily I can't stay in chawl I would meet dada n baba on weekends while she is busy in her thoughts some one enters her cabin n sees frown lines on her forehead n he goes n hugs from back keeping his chin on her
shoulder n says

Guy: what r u thinking???

Girl turns around in his arms n says I don't want to stay in chawl raghav n u know why

Raghav: who said u r staying there we're going live in our own house bunny

Kalpi: really raghav

Raghav: yes because I don't want to stay from you even a minute

Kalpi sighs n says love you n hugs him
Raghav: love you too bunny

Raghav 's pov
Even you stay there I won't let you because seeing your mother n pakhi closeness would hurt you n give u pain which I can't tolerate n I can't take risk with ur safety knowing about the kapoor's intentions
Raghav: bunny lets go home we have to pack things for tomorrow n kisses her forehead keeping a strand of behind her ear

Kalpi: okay

They both left the office to go home

Chapter one ends

Hope you like it... 😃

Edited by AriyaLilyOrchid - 10 years ago