Revenge over love ff part last pg 24 - Page 5

Originally posted by: 4eversara

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Wht tittle should I go for u suggest bt wnt to knw y should i change

Originally posted by: kulruch

i think change title means that when u update tilte ke yaha likhna updated

example...Revenge over love ff part 6 updated on page 6

oh silly me

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Part 7

Kalpi open her eye n cry n say bhai aur baba

A:uncle aur adi kya

K(non stp crying) unko plane crush ho gye hai, while hugging ajoo, wo theek toh ho gye na,I'm so worry..I want to go bak house...

A(crying too): doll they will be fine, v will leave for mumbai, gauri ma make her understand

K:gauri aunty aaj baba k birthday hai, n I thought to gift him that is best gift of this world...bt can v go to mumbai raghav sir...plzzz (looking @ him).

R:ya let go,arjun bring mom while I take Kalpi with me (in his arm) becuz she is can't walk in this condition..(she broke badly today after hears abt bhai, baba)

A:ok.

K:let off me sir, I can walk plzz

R:will u please shut up...look @ yourself,wht u done to ur self,I can't see u like this..got it..

K:thnx sir bt I dnt need ur help,ajoo is there for me...

N place her in car..n other come too sit in...n raghav drive while driving he is looking in mirror & get upset that Kalpi put her head on Arjun shoulder,while sleeping n he stp his car n say arjun can u drive plzz,I'm feeling tried, arjun ok fine u cn rest @ back seat with Kalpi bt plzz dnt disturb her..bohat Muskil se so he hai...raghav hmm nod his head n sit @ back sit with her n she put her head on him,raghav smile see that( thank god Kalpi abhi ur head is on my shoulder nt someone else), after while he felt sleep too, in meantime arjun & gauri stop the car to have food for shop.

In car Kalpi wake up n look raghav, she smile but then smile vanished n thinking(Kalpi he still hate u, im an idiot to think he will start loving u me one day,bt Asia kabhi nahi ho gaye)..she start to move out of the car when raghav stop her hold her hand n say

R:Kalpi please forgive me,I dnt knw how I believe neetu kapoor,Kalpi plz

K:sir!!! Please mujhe jaana hai,aur waise I dnt care abt it nw...n u dnt need to apologise, it's was my mistake to fall in love with u, n we both decide to sleep together...

R:Kalpi! Please I'm saying sorry na toh wht ur problem y can't u forgive me haan(pull her close to him)..

K:sir!!!! Please I dnt want to talk to abt this...

R(angry):ok fine Kalpi u wht go to hell (leaving her hand), after that arjun n gauri cme bak with food, gauri: chintu n Kalpi have something to eat...raghav take it bt Kalpi didn't, arjun: doll have something otherwise u will faint again.

K:ajoo it ok I'm nt feeling hungry.

A:doll have something, ok I will feed u wait (cme to Kalpi side) chalo no drama, open ur mouth..

K:ajoo srsly nt feel having something, bt I can't say no to u (open her mouth)..

A:good girl, have this na ur fav

K:thnx ajoo, I want to talk to u abt something.(looking @ raghav n gauri)

A(still eating): Bol na, doll.

K:no,actually want to talk to u alone, saying sorry to guari aunty n drag arjun with her..

Raghav wht hell she want to talk to him that to alone.we r nt strangers for her...he turn n they having argument abt something n five min later she hug him

R: koi bhi baat without hug k nahi kar sakta,get more furious that Kalpi is nt listen to him, n so close to arjun...

G:raghav beta did u say something

R:no,mom

Kalpi n arjun cme bak n arjun go to driver seat n Kalpi seat with raghav @ bak seat n arjun on the radio, arjun say my favourite one awari

Teri baahon mein jo sukoon tha milaa

Maine dhoondha bahut par, phir na mila

Duniya, choona, chahein mujhko yoon

Jaise unki saari ki saari, main

Duniya dekhe roop mera, koyi na jaane bechari main

Haaye tooti saari ki saari main

Tere ishq mein huyi awari main

Haaye tooti saari ki saari main

Tere ishq mein huyi awari main

(Instrumental Break)

Koyi shaam bulaaye, koyi daam lagaye

Main bhi oopar se has-ti par andar se haaye

Kyun dard chupaaye baithi hai

Kyun tu mujhse kehti hai

Main toh khud hi bikhra huya

Haaye andar andar se toota main

Tere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main

Haaye andar andar se toota main

Tere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main

(Kalpi start crying badly,while looking at raghav n trio start looking @ her)

Main jee bhar ke rolun, teri baahon mein solun

Aa phir se mujhe mil, main tujh-se yeh bolun

Tu anmol thi, pal pal bolti thi

Aisi chup tu laga ke gayi, saari khushiyan khaa ke gayi

Haye andar andar se toota main

Tere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main

Haaye teri hoon saari ki saari main .. ho .. oo ..

Par tere liye baazari main

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Arjun stop the car n goes to Kalpi side n hug her n say bas doll,Bas, u knw ur arjun can't see tear in ur eye, I knw the reason is (looking @ raghav) gauri notice all this bt didn't say anything,

K(sobbing):arjun u knw, y Mein abhi tak nahi toote becuz of u, thank you for being there for me all the time.

A:hey!! Ssshhh (placing his finger on her lip)bas kar, nw ghar chala. They all went to jadhav house, when Kalpi entry she see 2 dead bodies on floor, n she didn't gather the gut too, go further stay there like status...Kamla see Kalpi n runs to her n hug her.

KB:look Kalpi ur baba n bhai, left us, I told u knw they dnt care abt us(still hugging her n then sit on floor n crying badly, before Kalpi cn console her aai,paakhi cme there n hug her bas Kamla maa)look paaki ur vitthal uncle n adi bhaiya left us all alone,

Kalpi standing there us status,raghav (in mind:aaj bhi Kamla bai pooki matter to u nt Kalpi) he felt bad for her, he move to Kalpi n put hand on her shoulder she hug him thinking he is arjun)

K:that y I'm scared to love someone, first raghav left me n nw baba n bhai,y I have to be punished all the time..

R:bas Kalpi, I'm there for u (Kalpi look up n see raghav n push him, I told u before dnt dare to touch me..n walk away frm there, they took the bodies, after the while house got fire everybody run outside bt Kalpi n pooki stuck in,

Kamla where is my daughters,n start shout Kalpi n paakhi, n run toward the house, people try to stop her bt she want in, meantime raghav, arjun n rest of the mens come bk..RAghav n arjun worried see fire,n looking here n there thn arjun say where is doll n get worries n even raghav they asked some ladies they say Kalpi n paakhi stuck in fire bt Kamla goes to save them..

RAghav & arjun try to go in bt ppl didn't let them, inside Kamla scream Kalpi,paakhi, where ru

P:maa we r here!! (Kamla run toward the room n see fire everywhere)she go in n hold paakhi's hand let go paakhi, n pull her out of that room

P:ma aur Kalpi, go n save her..

KB:Kalpi is strong she can come out herelf, u come with me..

P:bt ma Kalpi.

KB: come out with pakhi n say I save my daughter while hugging her..

R & A: aur Kalpi kahan hai.

KB:raghav baba Kalpi is strong she cn cme out herself

Raghav run in to sve Kalpi,Kalpi where r u Kalpi,

Kalpi faint n vase on table fall so raghav heard the voice n run to that room.raghav goes to Kalpi

K: go away I hate unso much, I want to die, leave me here.

R:hogaye bakwaas, now shut up (picking her up in arm n come out)

----- precap raghav shouting on Kamla bai

Superb update yaar...Make Raghav more and more suffer... Burn him in jealousy...😆 Yaar you should have killed that Kakhi instead you killed Vitthal and Adi😭

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