New ff/ss on RagNa (AshNa):Love. Part 24 updated. 18/8/14. Completed - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

wow wonderful update ..

loved it..
kalpi and rags in delhi... so, ragna journey is going to be start😳
plz continue soon...


thanks a lot...
Yup its Ragna time...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragnaforever

Superb update yaa:)Waiting for every Ragna moments


You gonna get many of them😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diti96

It is so beutiful and refreshing
Plz update soon


Thanks a lot..will continue asap..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Good good good update!!!😃😃
Waiting to read what will happen in Delhi.😉


Thanks a lot...hope u enjoy Delhi romance...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dimpleagar

Kalpi nd Raghav in Delhi
W8ng for next part...plzzz update soon


Will update asap...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks a lot neha..


Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Interesting 👏 Please continue soon


Thank a lot..

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Awesome! Loving it! Can't wait for them to meet!;)


thank you..glad you loving it..😃


Sure dear

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Awesome...looking forward to ragnalicious romance in Delhi. Update soon pleaseee


Its total RagNalicious stuff now on..have fun..



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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks a lot guys for liking and commenting on my ff..
The flight scene is specially for you rani214...it wasn't a part of my update originally..
Anyone wishing for any Ragna scene in my ff is free to mention it in comments...I'll try to fit it coz i started this ff to fulfil some wishes like kalpi being richer than rags and paakhi and raghav being siblings...so do mention any of your wishes...all criticism and feedbacks are welcome...would love to see more comments..Here's part 7(a):


In plane:

Raghav was sitting working on his laptop...his phone rung and while recieving the call he looked up and his gaze fell at the entrance and froze their..

Air hostess: Ma'am there's your seat third on right
Kalpana: Thanks..

Kalpana and Raghav saw each other...There was a beautiful eyelock..

Air hostess broke their trance..
Air hostess: Ahem...ma'am your seat there..
Kalpana: Ah..ya..
Giving her a smile Kalpi went to her seat but suddenly tripped landing herself on Raghav...

Their faces a bit apart...Kalpi's silky strands hiding their eyelock..
Just when they looked at each other's eyes the world around them just disappeared...Along with the world their thoughts too vanished somewhere...neither of them thinking about anything else...they were just enjoying the feeling of being complete though it was for just a minute which for them was like forever...

Kalpi stood up composing herself.."Sorry Mr.Singhaania"...saying so she sat beside him..
Raghav-Ms.Jadhav its ok if u call me raghav...
Kalpana-(in mind) As if i care (loudly) You too then can call me Kalpana..
Kalpi's phone rang...

Kalpi:Hi Raj..
Raj:Hi KJ,aunty told me to inform u that apartment couldn't be arranged...
Kalpi: What!!! Where will i stay then ???
Raj: Chill..bhaiyya said he'll book a room in blue pearl hotel...he tried calling but your phone was unreachable...
Kalpi: oh...ok...
Raj: Bye take care and ya try to avoid being out at night...and call me atleast once a day...
Kalpi: Ok baba...i will...bye u too take care..(kalpi hung up)

Raghav: Boyfriend??
Hearing that kalpi gave him a look saying 'Aren't you being personal'...
but then replied ,"No just a friend" ..That sounded music to Raghav's ears..he left a sigh of relief which he too didn't know why...
Raghav: So...going to delhi for sight-seeing??
Kalpi Nope...New job..
Raghav: Oh..congrats..(Later in mind) Why doesn't she say something...Am I irritating her???...No way Girls love talking to me...They keep drooling over me...But she's different..

While Raghav was having his mind talk...kalpi was busy fighting with herself..
"Be polite and Talk to him"
"No need to talk to him...you can be rude at times"
"He's so sweet"
"Sweet??????? And pray tell me how u came to that conclusion.."
"He helped u that night and now too...he din't mention any of those to make it awkward for you...least u can do is have a polite conversation"...

Tired of those voices kapi finally spoke.
Kalpi: "What about you???I mean your purpose of visit"..
Raghav: Business..
Kalpi:Hmmm..(To the voice in her head) ho gaya bol diya..ho gaya humara convo..

Thereafter the two hours flight went in complete silence..

Delhi airport:
Kalpi was waiting outside for her car to arrive and her phone rung..

Kalpi: Ha bhai i reached..
Prem:Kalpi the driver said that he can't make it as its raining heavily and his area is flooded..
Kalpi:Chill bhai i'll go to the hotel by cab..
Prem:Are you sure?? U can wait in the airport..i'll try to manage something..
Kalpi:No bhai...it's ok..I'll text u after I check in..don't worry..bye
Prem: Ok bye..And ya aai said that she'll get the appartment as soon as possible..
Kalpi: Ok..

When kalpi was about to call for a cab, A white Audi stopped in front of her.. The glasses of backseat came down and she saw a familiar pair of dark brown eyes..
Raghav: Need help??
Kalpi: Mr.Singhaania aap yaha?? I thought u left..
R:Tumhara peecha kar raha hu..
K:Ya very funny..
R:Hum gaadi mein bethke bhi baat kar sakte hai..Come on in..its raining heavily from yesterday evening..you won't even get a cab..i'll drop u.
K:(in mind) Guess so i have no other option..waise bhi itni raat ho gayi hai..(loudly) Ok fine..
R-Driver madam ka saaman peeche rakhdo...

Kalpi sat on the backseat with Raghav..

R-So permanently yaha shift hone ka iraada hai kya??
K-No no..sirf five months..
R- Oh...By the way where u staying?? i mean where should i drop u??
K-Hotel blue pearl ..
R-Oh what a coincidence..i'm also staying there..
K-hmm..


Raghav's Pov:
And there goes Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav's famous 'hmmm'..code word for 'stop talking'...Achaanak kaafi happy lag rahi hai...why doesn't she smile always like that..doesn't she know she has the best smile in the world...And those eyes...her eyes looked like those of a curious young child ready to explore the world...O God!!!!Why is she so beautiful?..(he said while looking at her from the corner of his eyes)...And by the way bappa .thanks alot for fulfiling my wish of meeting her again...love the rains... hamesha sahi jagah sahi time pe..

Kalpana's pov:
Atlast freedom...free to live my life the way i want...doing the stuff i love to...no more people discussing business around me..free from that crappy world..
(when she noticed Raghav looking at her) Why does he have keep staring at me??? God aap mujhe apne hate list se kab nikaalo ge...pehle toh party mein Raj nahi tha toh uske wajah se inse mili aur ab iss baarish ke wajah se phirse... i want to stay away from him aur aap toh mujhe baar baar inhi se milva te ho...just stop doing that..
I had heard bhai and dad talk about the deal he is trying to make with dad..agar woh deal naa hoti toh ye kabhi mujhse baat bhi nahi karne aate ...and lagta hai iss baarish ko bhi mujhse koi problem hai...hamesha galat jagah galat time pe...

They reached the hotel and checked in...

Precap-
Kalpi- Get in quickly..(kalpi said pushing raghav in the room)..
Raghav- (in mind) first a great night and now an awesome morning..bet this can't get any better...but why is she here??? to meet me???(loudly) What are u doing in my room and...

Kalpi suddenly realised that he was in towel and her hand was on his abs...she just turned around quickly..😳
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Continue to write.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice dear:) The whole flight scene and the drive was beautiful... This update is full of Ragna... But I am more interested about the precap... GM is activating😳... Continue soon... Cant wait to know what happened in the gr8 night and what is gonna happen in the awesome morning☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragnaforever

Very nice dear:) The whole flight scene and the drive was beautiful... This update is full of Ragna... But I am more interested about the precap... GM is activating😳... Continue soon... Cant wait to know what happened in the gr8 night and what is gonna happen in the awesome morning☺️


A big soowwieee for disappointing u about the night coz the night was awesome just because of drive and flight and about morning... I hope its not disappointing..
Thanks a lot for liking it..

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