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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls continue soon dear...part 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dear friend i have updated part 2 please read it and give feedbacks ill be waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love reading it. Update ASAP 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely, could u please do an English translation because my hindi is very bad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys what u think about new artical i feel paki will try to break ragna relationship??what u feel plz reply


thats what we want right she has to become negative... how much she can try but our ragna bond will not break it will become more strong by that... i just want her to be negative so that she will not be around raghav as a friend...wt u think??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mounishree

guys what u think about new artical i feel paki will try to break ragna relationship??what u feel plz reply



Watever pakhi might try but ragna bond is not a bond to b broken easily...it is covalent bond dat exists in diamond..its hard to break but impossible for pakhi...

By last few days epi i feel like pakhi was sweet to kalpi nly in raghav's presence to be in his good books...but her disgusting looks says dat she hates kalpi close to raghav n he always chanting kalpi name...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3:
after listening evrything paki goes to meet kamla .. and on the other hand kalpi is in tension as raghav not picked her call so that time only she left to meet him even not thinking its night time..
paki reaches the chawl and shouts :kamla ma come out i want to ask u something..
kamla comes outs and asks her pyari paki..
kamla:what happened beta .. iss vakth yaha?
paki:kamla ma..and starts crying..
kamla:kya huva paki ..bol na mai hoo thumhare sath..
paki:kamla ma raghav aur kalpi shadi karliye hai... i need raghav ma.
kamla:beta vo shadi mai nahi manthi .. raghav sirf thumhara hai .thum uske pathni ho..
paki hugs kamla and says kamla ma mai raghav ke bina nahi jee sakthi hoo.. kalpi raghav ko mujse cheen lena chahathi hai..
kamla:nahi beta .. mai samjadoongi use thum ro math ..mai thumhe rothe huve nahi dekh sakthi..
paki:kamla ma .. kalpi ko samja do ki vo raghav se na mile.. i need raghav in any condition ...
kamla says everything will be allright she will not allow anyone to take paki's happyness..
on the other hand kalpi reaches kapoors house and as evryone slept kalpi went to raghav's room and sees that he is sleeping peacefully and goes near him.. she was happy as he is fine.. she kiss his forehead... and says raghav kash mai yahi rehepathi thumhare sath... mere sab kuch thum ho raghav chahe mai koi bhi rashthe pe chalu akir maine thumhare alawa kuch chaha tho nahi.. she wipes her tear and about to leave raghav stops her by holding her hand...
raghav:kaha jaa rahi ho?
kalpi:raghav thum theek ho na bas muje aur kuch nahi chayiyee..
raghav:thum mhje dekhe shanth huvi mera kya...and he hugs her and says kalpi jaise thumhare har chahath mai mai hoo.. mera har sas mai thum hoo. sirf ek sal uske bad hame baghwan bhi door nahi kar sakthe...
kalpi says raghav rath bahooth ho chuka hai muje jaana hai and she left his room and came out... paki sees kalpi coming out of her home and shouts..
paki:"kalpi" kalpi sees paki burning in anger and goes near her..
paki:thumhari hmmath kaise huvi mere ghar me ane ki?kalpi was shocked to listen this.
kalpi:kya huva paki?
paki:kya huva ye thum poochrahi ho?? mere pathi ko mujse chinna chahathi ho aur ab muje poochrahi ho?thum mere pathi se door raho mai ab uski pathni hoo.. k..thum jaise ladkiyoko tho paise ke liye kisiko bhi pasa dethe ho... thum bhi raghav ko pasaya hai aur ab firse uske pas anachahathi ho jabki vo mujse shadi karliya hai...
kalpi cant handle this anymore so she shouts enough paki enough
kalpi:what u think of urself?? raghav mujse pyar karthe hai thumse nahi...rahi bath shadi ki baghwan ke samne raghav ne muje apne pathni banaya hai... thum sirf ek sal uske jindhagime rahoge... thum ham dononke beech ayi ho.mai nahi..and mera pyar sacha hai jo kabhi nahi badlega..paki:aysa hai tho ye challenge hai mere ki mai ek saal me raghav ko apna bana loongi.uske dil aur dimag se thumhara nam nikaldongi..kalpi:challenge acceptd. ek sal nahi paki 7 janm thak bhi thum try karogi na thab bhi rag
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U rock dear...continue this..n make kalpi win...ema to sab satynash hogayi...ab is ff mein sab kuch sambhal lo...;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update👍🏼..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4:
kalpi:challange accepted paki.. yek sal nahi chahe thum 7 janm thak koshish karlo par raghav ko mujse door nahi kar sakthi ho..nahi meri yad ko uske dimag se...
paki: over confidance acha nahi hotha kalpi.. ill get raghav in any condition..
kalpi:thats not over confidance its love... u cant understand that all .. do ur best k??bye and kalpi left.
paki thinks mujhe hi challenge karke jaa rahi ho?? dekhenge aisa kya hai thujme jo mujme nahi hi.. mai tho thujse bhi achi dikthi hoo..mere pas paise hai sab kuch hai.. even kamla ma mere sath hai.. vo thuje kabhi support nahi karegi.. dekhlena kalpi mai there jindhagi ka sab kuch cheen loongi sirf raghav nahi raghav ko mujse door karneke liye mai kamla ma ko thujse door kardoongi..thum ro ro kar mar javoge chahe iske liye muje kuch bhi karna pade..
paki goes in raghav room and act as nothing happened and she talks normally to him..
kalpi reaches the chowl and she will be shocked to see kamla waiting for her outside..
kalpi:aai vo mai...
kamla:kya vo ?raghav se milne gayi thi na thum?maine kaha na ki us se door raho? vo paki ki pathi hai.. paki ki kushi hai.. aur mai thuje uska haq,khushi cheen ne nahi doongi...
kalpi thinks aai aj thak kabhi bhi thu mere kushi ke bare me sochi hai jo aaj sochegi thuje tho sirf paki ki chintha hai ...and says aai maine kuch galath nahi kiya... aur thum chahathi vo na mai us se na milu..mai aapne apse use milne kabi nahi javoongi up to one year..and with teary eyes she goes in home..
kamla:acha hai ek saal thak nahi milege meri paki ka jindhagi teek ho jayega...

in morning kalpi got up and got ready as she is starting her buissiness today.. she goes to vittl and took his blessing and says baba mai apka sab sapne poora kardoongi... she just give a fake smile to kamla..and says aai muje sab arrangements dekhna hai..
she goes and checks evrything and starts the work all chowl womens helped her..
raghav got up with a smile as he was dreaming abt kalpi and sees that paki holding his dress and all to make him to go for bath..
rag:kya hai ye..
paki:mai frnd banke tho ye sab kar sakthi hoo na..
rag:agreess as he think she might understood...
few days passed like that only kalpi busy in her work and paki in trying to impress raghav by making food .getting makeup to impress him bt it has no effect on him..
it has been one month since she started her resturant all was going well so she thought acha hai sab kuch theek se chal raha hai .. ye sab kuch baba ko handover kar dena chayiye thaki ek sal ke bad jab mai raghav ke sath hongi tab bhi ye aisehi chalthe rahega..
she goes to her baba and says..
kalpi:baba aj ke badh ye sab aap dekh lena..
vittl:kyu kya huva thu dekh rahi hai na tho mai kyu?
kalpi:she didnt knw wt to say him so she says baba muje ek company me interview dena hai aur mai ithne padayi karke sirf yahi kaam nahi kar sakth tho ap log ye dekh lijiye mai bahar kam karthi hoo.
vittl feels proud abt her and agrees.

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