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Posted: 10 years ago
So had caught up with last two updates..!! glad they were updated back to back (almost..)

I loved how.. Kalpi stood up and went for now..!
Can't wait for more Ragna scenes when she joins back office.!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpureness



The reason Kalpi hates Ragav, though that is a strong word, she does not hate him. Definitely dislikes him intensely lol.

She now remembers what happened on Monday. She now remembers that Ragav just used her to hurt her mother that she was just a play thing in his hands.

She is also angry with herself coz knowing all this she went back into his arms and does not want to repeat it. She knows she loves him but she does not know that he loves her too.

As for Ragav he knows helves her, he thinks she loves him and that she has not realized it. He knows deep down she will choose her mother over him but wishes that she would choose him

Thanks angel..now kalpi is not able to trust him again ..right..nd she thinks that raghav did not love her..right.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update. Thnx 4 d surprise update. Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpureness


I might get them to meet in the next update. I know the chapter was short. That short chappy took early four hours to think up and write. I am finding the track quite difficult to write. I feel it very tricky. I need to make sure the balance is there... I building up towards her choosing him when she remembers everything. So I need to make sure the emotions are there for build up. I am taking time with because I am not satisfied with the way I have it played in my head... Something is missing. Oh gosh... As I am typing this out to you... I think I have found one clink to the missing link. Bless I think I have a realistic angle now. Mwah

See, I told you. Reply to my comments and now you got the idea... lol. I'm glad you replied yaar. Was missing you in action. Love ya, Mwah!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

See, I told you. Reply to my comments and now you got the idea... lol. I'm glad you replied yaar. Was missing you in action. Love ya, Mwah!



Hi... It still didn't feel right to have Kalpi choose Ragav over her mum. Mwah
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update Dr
Waiting for next impatiently
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Treasures

Loving it! Simply awesome!



Hi long time... How r u? Hope alls good. Mwah
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey angel awesome update, glad that Kalpi left after regaining her memory😳
Surely waiting for the twists😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fuzz, I hope we didn't pressurise you into giving an update. Because I felt it was kinda rushed. I know we were waiting for the confrontation but maybe it could have happened after two more updates or so. Maybe after she found out that he sneaked in to meet her later in the night everyday. I don't know. The fact that he didn't come to visit her was the strongest factor for her to go home today. That's what I felt. She thought she's just another challenge for him, nothing more which hurt her very badly. How I wish she had heard him whispering sweet nothings in her ears and his promise that he will never leave her! She was happy to hear his words and almost trusted him before her mother came into view. He's planning to win her back. Loved the scene where Maya whacked him on the head for not visiting Kalpi. She's a true buddy.
I understand your pov about Kalpi's self respect. Guess this is the only way it would have happened. But felt really bad for both of them. Both of them can't stand this separation. Please let him win her back soon. I love them too much to see them suffer. Hope my comments didn't hurt you. But you know I'm emotionally attached to the story. Gosh, need to read it again. Byeee. ... love you, mwaah!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Fuzz, I hope we didn't pressurise you into giving an update. Because I felt it was kinda rushed. I know we were waiting for the confrontation but maybe it could have happened after two more updates or so. Maybe after she found out that he sneaked in to meet her later in the night everyday. I don't know. The fact that he didn't come to visit her was the strongest factor for her to go home today. That's what I felt. She thought she's just another challenge for him, nothing more which hurt her very badly. How I wish she had heard him whispering sweet nothings in her ears and his promise that he will never leave her! She was happy to hear his words and almost trusted him before her mother came into view. He's planning to win her back. Loved the scene where Maya whacked him on the head for not visiting Kalpi. She's a true buddy.

I understand your pov about Kalpi's self respect. Guess this is the only way it would have happened. But felt really bad for both of them. Both of them can't stand this separation. Please let him win her back soon. I love them too much to see them suffer. Hope my comments didn't hurt you. But you know I'm emotionally attached to the story. Gosh, need to read it again. Byeee. ... love you, mwaah!


You are absolutely right... The confrontation I had originally planned for was going to be really sweet and romantic and in their bedroom... Where she would leave him for her mum even after knowing that he loves her. The reason I chose this route in the last moment because I felt the story would end quicker and there would be no angst between them. So I have kind of reversed it.

Before she would have found out everything without meeting Ragav, that would have been several chapter with very little Ragna. Something I knew the readers would not be happy about. Now she will get to know everything through Maya with lots of Ragna scenes hopefully.

Please don't ever stop giving a true opinion. It does not hurt me. If anything I am pleased because it helps me see where I am erring. I welcome critism that will help me and the story.

You know the reason I always ask for feedback is because to me the story is average. I connect differently to the story, the chapters are not that impactful when I write, because I have thought of it for so long and in so many angles and because I know where it is heading there is no surprise element. When readers say wow or amazing without giving details. I feel very lost because I don't understand what was wow or amazing.

Your feedback, di, Natasha, Priya, mini, charu, oh gosh hope I didn't forget anyone else... They are detailed and it helps me understand and see what is amazing or not in the chapter. It helps give me direction and steer the story accordingly.

Thank you so much for that... Coz without u guys I don't think the story would be where it is. Mwah

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