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This is such a creative story please update soon na..:)
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CHAPTER 2
Finally all 5 leave from there. All keep on chatting about themselves.
R- Ana, can u ever stay without a fight?
K- "Right rags! Girls r species all ready to fight always...they don't have Lil patience..
A- oye kabeer and rags! First u guys were late.And then that vampire...boys r really morons. And rags darling u better learn not to ever question girls or don't even try to understand now that u r married urself to kalpna...huh...what was so hurry to marry her? Couldn't u wait for us ?
S- yes rags we r s so angry? U didn't give us a chance to dance also ?
Nagma - yeah right..and now we need a party! That's it...we not gonna spare u and kalpna OK..
Both Rags and kabeer keep quite. Ana notices Rags expressions..but decides to wait to question him. As it is they all feel jet lagged. Rest of car journey passes in silence. Its already night in India. Suddenly she feels this trip to India is gonna change there lives forever..

At the chawl

Kalpi, foram, Deepu and Saru are deep in there thoughts. Kalpna..still remembers how Rags made her realize his love for her, how she started trusting him, the way they confessed...and on her wedding day..he left her at the altar..and married pakhi.she still couldn't get over it. And had gloatingly brought her with him and had mocked kalpi with so much hatred in his eyes. When she had asked him y he betrayed her. His anger knew no bounds. He blamed me for his condition." Kalpi..so u proved ur class. U also used me like others. I trusted u and u broke my trust. U always knew my mom...and yet u never told me about her. How could u? U bitch..I changed myself for you and you backstabbed me with that prem. I hate you. U deserve this pain. If u lived prem , u should have told me...y didn't you.?.." Kalpi was shocked seeing her pics with prem...shaking hands, smiling, hugging...she couldn't believe it. She had no proof of her innocence." Bas kalpi..coz of u I had dropped my revenge plan, was not interested in it...but now...u have raided the monster in me. U betrayed me.people say right..u should never trust a women with ur heart. First my mom and now u. So I married paki ..yes I married her to see u in pain...to hurt u...to take revenge from kapoors who have made my mother a living dead...to give equal pain to ur parents so that u also feel the pain of a child seeing his parents suffering. I will never forgive u..for cheating me. And will make sure that u too suffer just as me."
Kalpi had tears in her eyes.." Rags..what have you done? Do u even realize it? No! In ur anger u just lose ur mind. How could u believe all this shit. Is our love so weak to shatter with this. Don't u trust ur love . How could u even think this. And how could i know..that tai is your mom..did I ever see her pic or anything. For once Raghav...how could u do this to me to us."
R- " just shut up kalpu. U can't affect me. I know the truth. I myself heard prem telling pakhi how heand u used to get even with me. To hurt me. And how u accepted his proposal. Now why would he lie to poky his sister. And he showed these pics to her. I am not blind.e eryone can see in these pics the way u hugging him and all...u r such a gold digger..worse than those kapoors...and now u have again brought that evil rags alive. I will make life hell for you and that Kapoor daughter..just wait and watch.."
K-" enough rags! U have said more than enough. U call me a gold digger , huh! Let me remind you..u were the one who followed me, u proposed me first, u were crazy for me, mad for me, I always wanted to keep distance but u broke all barriers and came to me, forced me to love you...as in so deep with so many promises...and it all came to want...thus???... Now u blaming me of being digger..not done? U have no right to insult me. U broke me for no reason of me. U insulted me and my love for you. What is such love or relation where I don't have trust on each other. Where there is no trust...that relation is a sham.. U hurt me for ur revenge..ciz of ur anger..u hurt me to no end. U shattered all my dreams calling me characterless...how dare you? I hate you..hate you rags...u find kapoors better than me..eight...u find poky a dimwit Kapoor who is still better than me..right...go and be happy with her..coz I just can never ever curse u...just go away..I hate u ...just go away and don't show me ur bloody face ever"..
Kalpi had tears sti going in her eyes. Its been almost a week and she's not yet over him. She was broken totally. Bit today she felt as if her life was soon going to change. She felt a kind of positive vibes around her...she saw her sleeping friends..who had become her strength. She decided..thisorning will be a new kalpna...who hated rags to core..who would pro e everyone her worth..who won't shed tears silently in a corner.. And with that determination..she too went and slept with her buddies...awaiting a new morning.

Kapoor mansion

Rags parked the car. Ana, Soni , panda were surprised seek g the name plate...Kapoor mansion.
N- Rags this isn't Singhania villa. Why have u brought us to Kapoor mansion?
S- Rags and kabeer don't tell me it is those kapoors place..whom u hated the most.. Who were the reason for uncle death..y on earth we r here
R-" I will and all ur questions..but first let's get in."
A- are u friggin mad? Am not gonna step in murderers house. R u drunk?
K- No girls, we r at right place...Rags is owner of this house now...yupp I need to get that name plate changed ASAP...all happened so fast..I just couldn't change it. Let's go in.
All go inside. Rags calls Ramu kaka to stow away there luggage in allotted rooms...when pakhi comes ..all donned up with mangalsutra and sindoor and hugs rags...all three girls r shocked...
A- hey rags who is this man in lady dress up..?
Kabeer can't stop laughing..but suppresses his laughter..
S-rags...damnn this Sheeman us paakhi...the Kapoor daughter...what is she doing here rags?..
Panda is about to question when kabeer holds her hand tightly and asks her to keep quiet...
Pakhi is very furious hearing such insulting comments...she says" hey girls hold on..am the most beautiful girl of this city and am raghavs wife...so better u guys shut ur stupid mouths and get out of my house...he's my hubby..and how date u all standing in my house and insulting me...just get out now..
Rags gets very angry and slaps her.." How date u pakhi? Don't forget ur limits and who u r? U r my wife in just name..and this is my house..one word more and I will throw u out on roads got it... Sheis Ana My best is..and they are her sisters and my friends to...I love them like my own and dare antibody insult them..u better look out for them properly..if I hear a so gkd complain of u from Ana or Soni Or land I will not spate u at any cist. Now go and get refreshments for them..they r hungry..
Paakhi Vries, looks at them angrilly and goes away from there.
A- Hell rags ! U married this bitch? She's a bitch I warn u, my study of humans say this..I get too negative vibes from her. And what bout kapi...u loved her an.and were to marry her..then why?
R- don't take her name? She's a bitch. She back stabbed me. She cheated me. And he narrates everything to them. I hate her and u guys will now never talk about her. Ana Soni and panda are shocked...but seeing angry rags they keep quite and just go to their rooms. I. Their room
S-dida..u really think kalpi was like this
P- yeah did a..how could rags marry this bitch and spoil his life also..
A- hmmm.. I know rahs is not at all happy...he still loves kalpi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hawww how can he use that b**** word for kalpu... I'll kill u raghav... and why kalpi crying mere hote hue... we will teach him a lesson
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: foram.

hawww how can he use that b**** word for kalpu... I'll kill u raghav... and why kalpi crying mere hote hue... we will teach him a lesson

yeah mofo he needs to be taught a lesson... We r there an...we will do all right...show him kalpi worth and his faults...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Whr am I ??? In was supposed to come here.. Sob Sob Sob.. Am nt here.. LOL.. Whr am I ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved ur update dreamy. Lol u used my nickname SHEMAN for that oinkers lol. Ur sooo cute. Big high five girl. My poor kalpi always has to deal with that bastarss betrayal. But am looking forward to the next update. 😛
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Originally posted by: sunyy

Loved ur update dreamy. Lol u used my nickname SHEMAN for that oinkers lol. Ur sooo cute. Big high five girl. My poor kalpi always has to deal with that bastarss betrayal. But am looking forward to the next update. 😛

yupp I used it coz it suits her perfect...didn't ask u before..haha..hope u don't mind... Yeah rags gonna make her life hell...and kalpi and rags are at loggerheads now..more so ciz of the rags. Here rags is not a puppet like in the show...he's surely a tough fight here.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 3
A- I Still believe rags loves kalpi. I know how he is. In a fit of anger he must have done all this. This poky surely has some role in it . And those Kapoor esp. Prem..I don't trust him at all. But right now rags is in fur. He won't beleive any logic any reasoning.
Soni- I think only kabeer can answer our questions. This froggymouth gives me too bad vibes.
Panda- Dida how could rags do this to kalpna? Leaving her at the alter.. Not done. He should have trusted his love. And kabeer won't tell anything coz he will side with rags only.
A- Then there is only one person who can tell us the whole story. Only Randhir can help us now. We need to meet him tomorrow. Its too late let's sleep now. And panda...urmmm " kabeer waiting for u in garden downstairs...poor gut..he's been dying to talk to you. Better go before he cones here like a mad man..". Panda turns beetroot..."dida..u again started teasong me not done!"
S- "shuddduppp drama queen..we wanna sleep..and we also know u won't sleep itself till u talk to him..so better go"
Panda- " Soni u making fum of me! Wait till u exp the same thing..I really want a guy to follow u like mad..then I will tease u...waiting for the day when u won't be able to sleep.."..Both Soni and panda about to argue...Ana calms them down and sends them to sleep...waiting for a new dawn...and planning to bring happiness in his friends life.

At the chawl

Kalpi went to sleep. But her friends were still feigning sleep.
Deepu- "I am sorry Kalpana for whatever Raghav did. He's my brother after all .I can't curse him no matter what. But he's become blind in revenge so much so that he doesn't beleive even his own Lil sister...me...how do I tell u kalpna..that you r the only one NY brother loves. I will have to do something to show him the mirror. To show him how poky and prem has planned it all. I want kalpi in ur life brother but I can't stabs byvwrong. Whatever u did with her is wrong..only if you get senses. God plz show me the way...I have never been in love..don't know that love feels..but seeing kalpi...I wish to never for for any human...humans r mad..they hurt...so much that the soul shatters ..IRS better falling for an immortal than human...huh... She still remembers...how she had heard prem and pakhi planning..and that pakhi crying to get Raghav at any cost. I stood up against her and when I tried to reveal there true colors...my brother..my Raghav Bhaiyya..didn't trust me...he believed those fake pictures...he bekeived the kapoors and blamed kalpi for hurting him and mom. I tried to tell him how prem was lying and that these pics were taken right but I was there with kalpi then..the hug was when somebody had pushed kalpi towards prem and he held her not to fall. Kalpi was only thanking him for saving her...but he turned a blind eye. They succeeded in there plan. Bro even asked me to chose him or my friend Kalpana...I had no choice...my parents who have brought me up gave always taught me to stand by the truth CV one what may..and I did that. Only if bro uh understood the meaning of trust in relations.." With this she too dozed off.
Foram- finally my friend is sleeping. Fate has been very cruel to her. First her aayi and now that ba****d Raghav. How dare he hurt my friend. She's such a sweetheart. Am just waiting for the right moment to pay him back ...for hurting my kalpi...first let kLpi get over it ..this moron will be killed NY me someday if he ever crosses her path again..love sucks..nothing like love exists its for fool$...gid never let me fall in love..I will break anyone's head who even utters the word love".
Saru- " kalpi I know u r strong and how much ever u tell u hate rags..u don't. U still love him like mad. Don't worry ., ur love is so strong and pure that rags will realize his folly one day...he will realize ur worth and how deep his love is for you. Its testing time of ur life...test of yr both love...nappa will surely guide you and show that prem a right path too. Am sure prem will one day himself go and tell rags the truth.
All four of them slept waiting for a new morning.

In jungle of lonavala

There was a loud cry of an animal...counting its last breath. Then it was dried and thrown roughly. Soon a few more anals were piled up dry one after other. They were none other than Abhay raichand, Priyanka aka Shinchu , and Aham.
Shinchu- Abhay bro...wth...u on rampage kya...u wanna kill all today only. You have had enough...for lasting few weeks. Why r u so angry. Forget that girl. She's nothing. I never saw u react for any human so strongly ever. Control itself bro.
Aham- Shinchu is right bro..why should a rich of a Hunan that too girl effect you huh. Let's go now before anybody sees us. We need to save ourselves in this human society. And bro..one more news...I heard AHIL IS HERE...
AR- what Ahil is here. ? Finally something int..been a long time since met him...yeah that girl..ahaan...I need all info about her. She's messed with wrong man. Abhay doesn't lose cool...but if he does...ugh...leave that girl to me...and who her friend was...yeah Raghav singhaniya...I need all there both history by tomorrow...that's it...soon sweetheart we gonna meet...and Mr. Raghav...lol u will have to see now who abhay is.
And here back in Mumbai was Aahil..who was deep in thoughts..."..hmm abhay...finally we r again at same place...its been 150urs since we last fought..huh... This time ..I hope we get a result to our brawl...I want to wipe away ur vampiric family off this earth..what fun it gonna be..huh...and suddenly his thought drifted to girl who called her the if at the airport...he had a huge grin on his face remembering her...he had first time since his birth had fell something for a human...it was so strong that..he was unable to erase the memory and voice of that girl from his mind...was this what humans called as live at first sight..whatever..but he had to know that girl...he was desperate to meet her... How he didn't know but he just knew he had too and soon he will...

So I hope my readers enjoy this part...and quite a story is clear...all past is over and now the story will only move in future...hope u guys like this update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Akka awesome update looking forward for more!!want all of us to tease raghav and teach him a lesson
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haha Saru...thank..for liking it..hmmm.do whatsapp me ur ideas...so that i never get that writers block. Just want this story be total fun...and rocking...we all acting here after all.

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