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Chapter 6


Scene 1


Kalpi looks at Raghav surprise, while gauri looks at him funny

"She's our maid?" she says questioning him

"Yes mother."

"Why would you get up this late to go pick up a maid? Especially a married one" she says

"She wanted to start right away." He says

"Raghav I know you, you would never do something like that." She says than said "I know your lying to me, whose she?" she says

"The truth is ma'm." she says

"You shut up; I'm not talking to you." She says coldly

Raghav signs, he knew he's mom will not like what he was about to say "she's my wife." He says shocking gauri. All gauri could hear was wife echoing everywhere. The next thing she knew she slaps Raghav than said "come with me."

Kalpi quickly got out of her shock and was about to follow them when gauri says "you stay out their, don't come in until i say so." Making kalpi tense

Gauri walks in her office and soon Raghav follows. She sat down on the chair while Raghav stood. She looks at Raghav angrily than says "I ask you to do one simple thing, Raghav but instead you bought home a wife." She says

"Things happened." He says

"I knew thoughs village girls would use their charm to trap you, just so they could get your money." She says Raghav staid quiet not wanting to anger her some more

"How could you let this happened? I had fixed you up with someone that would make our business stronger." She says

"because of you, someone else is going to take their offer." She says

"Don't worry mother, I will get rid of her." He says

"And how will you do that?"

"Well I can't drive her out because I have honor but I can torture her until she decides to leave me, not making me look like the bad guy here." he says

"Ok I expect you to do a good job. If you fail I will deal with her myself." She says

"I never fail mother or back down from a challenge." He says

"Good, now excuse me I have to talk to your so call wife." She says leaving the room.

Meanwhile kalpi was outside pacing while talking to her self. "I can't believe ice prince would call me a maid, in front of his mother." She says

"How can he be so cruel, and his mother I don't think she likes me very much." She says sadly than she went back to her cheery self.

"Cheer up kalpi; she will come to love you. But ice prince will probably not. His so mean I just want to hammer him." she says bolding her hands into a fist and hitting her palm with it, she kept saying ice prince die and this is what you get.

Gauri opens the door and saw her like that. When kalpi heard a noise she turned around blushing controllably. Quickly she let go of her hands and turns to her.

"What's your name?" she says

"Kalpi mam" she says

"Well from here on your name is nothing, you have no title with my son since he doesn't acknowledge you as his wife. You will be nobody in this house, your only role here will be to take care of the house, cook, clean and take care of our needs, like a maid." She says hurting kalpi.

"Your life will not be easy here; you will not live a luxury life. When a person asks for your name you will not speak of it or your title, but instead you will follow orders. You will not eat with us, after we're done eating then you can eat the left over. And lastly we will give you poor clothes to wear because that's your statues. If you wear luxury clothes they might think you belong in this family, which you don't, also you will not sleep with my son. You'll sleep on the Terrance; I will get the tent for you to sleep there. If you have any questions, I will ignore it so don't ask." She says

Kalpi shook her head I thought she would be nicer towards me but I was wrong, now I see where Mr. Ice prince got his personality from. From the ice queen her self.

Scene 2

Kalpi was outside she couldn't go inside because her mother in law told her not too,

She sat on the ground and watches the stars; as soon as she starts counting it she fell asleep with her head on the door. The next day Raghav mom opens the door, as soon as she did that kalpi head it the floor. She woke up and saw her mother in law glaring at her.

"Wake up; you have to do your choirs." She says

"What choirs?" she asks

"Raghav left you some house work you have to do here is the list." She said throwing it to her.

Kalpi opens the envelop and read the list, when she looks at it she almost faint. Half of these stuff she didn't know, and it was like fifty stuff she has to do. I can do this she thought half of this stuff Ai made me learn. I can start with that first. If I do a good job, I might impress gauri. She thought

"Anyway come inside and change then start working. After you're done you have to do my choirs." She said surprising kalpi

Kalpi was about to ask a question when she remembered what gauri said to her. She quietly walk inside the house, when she entered she was amazed. She's never seen a house this big. She soon snaps out of this and focus on the list. She reads number one thru five and then went to the bathroom to change. Once she came out she started cleaning the stairs wiping it clean. Once done she search for the vacuum once she couldn't find it she uses a broom instead, which took her longer then it should. After that she worked on the rest. By the time she finished all 48 on the list the sun was setting down.

She gathered Raghav clothes and gauri then she went to the room to clean it. She remembers calling Raghav asking him how is she supposes to use the machine all he said was figure it out. She looks at the machine from side to side. How do I start this? She thought while touching it. Should I just put it in the mouth? Maybe I should do that. She thought, she puts the clothes together forgetting to read the small writing under it, which says. Do not mix white clothes with color clothes or put my clothes with my mothers. When the clothes wouldn't fit in, she pushes it inside until it fits. Once done she press the button to start forgetting to put soap.

When the thing wouldn't work she saw a bottle and automatically assumes it was soap. It clearly says bleach on it, but kalpi had never heard of the word before since she always washes her clothes with soap and her hands. She pours the whole bottle of bleach on the clothes than she press start. After the thing finished she saw another bottle that says soap on it. She pours all the bottles of soap in the machine and went to the kitchen to start dinner.

While in the kitchen she searches for food to make, when she found it. She started preparing dinner for them. She was so busy in her work that she forgot the laundry. When dinner was done she went to check on the laundry, as soon as she opens the door, lots of soap foam was on the floor which was Coming from the machine Oh god what should I do Raghav should be coming home in 2 minute she thought. She went to the machine and turns it off, Just when she was about to take the clothes out Raghav came in the house. He was calling her name. Kalpi hearing him, panic. She tries removing the soap foam but it was too much. When she heard him coming closer she hides under the foam.

Scene 3

Raghav walks in the room and saw soap foam everywhere, and his clothes on top of the machine. He search for his maid, when he didn't find her he said her name.

"Kalpi, kalpi!" he says walking inside"

"Yes sir!" she says popping right in front of him and scaring him a little.

"Look what you did?" he says

"I'm looking sir." She says making Raghav glare at her.

"I asked you to do simple task, but look what you've done." He says

"Sir its not my fault, the machine didn't listen to me." She says while pacing around

"No you didn't." he says going to the machine almost tripping on the bleach and soap bottle. He picks it up and glares at her.

"Tell me you didn't use both of these on our clothes." He says

"I can't tell you sir; if I do you might get mad." She says

"Kalpi!" he says

"Yes sir, I did" she says scared

Raghav throws the bottles on the wall, he was about to touch his clothes when he fell on the spill soap from earlier. Making kalpi laugh, when Raghav came up he had a Santa Claus mustache making kalpi laugh some more. When she was laughing he looks at her and was mesmerize. He soon snaps out of it and says "you find this funny?"

"Yes sir you look like the old mans from my village." She says making Raghav glare at her and getting up. Kalpi realizing what she said gulp, Raghav walks towards her making her back away hitting the wall. He puts both of his hands on the wall preventing her from moving. Then he says "and what are you doing with those old guys?"

"I play with them sir." She says gulping

He smirks and says "are you that easy that you would sleep with any old guy that wants to play." He says making her confuse

"What are you saying sir?"

"You know exactly what i mean. You set me up, by interfering with my constructing knowing fully well that I'm rich, than you glued us together so you can get me alone when it back fired you went to plan B which was to marry me. You pretended to come to the wrong wedding knowing fully well I was there then you pretended to be shy so I wouldn't see your face making me marry you." He says shocking her, she was about to speak when he interrupts her by clapping

"You probably shock that I figured it out in one day." He says then he says "since you wanted me so badly I will play with you." He says untying his tie and holding her hands firmly on the wall making her eyes widen, he tried kissing her but she turns her head saying no sir. But Raghav didn't listen; he let his other hand free and firmly grabs her face then he kisses her. She tried to bite his lips but he held her face tighter. While kissing her kalpi started crying. When he saw her tears he let her go and smirk.

"Your tears will not fool me, now that I know your true color. So now you won't be able to trap me." He says letting her go and walking away from her. Before he left he turned back around and says "clean this up before my mother comes, or you might find yourself outside." He said then leaving her alone.

Kalpi was on the floor, small blood was on her lips. She didn't care she just stayed there crying. She tried to get the image out of her mind but he wouldn't go away. Ai she thought I wish you were here with me she thought

To be continue...

Chapter 7
Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Kalpi shook her head I thought she would be nicer towards me but I was wrong, now I see where Mr. Ice prince got his personality from. From the ice queen her self.
i'm the first 😊😆😆
u cracked me yaar 😆😆🤣
btw nice story but rag's & guari behaviour 🥺

Edited by kanch1234 - 11 years ago
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kanch1234 i warned everyone before reading the story that raghav and gauri will be mean for a while. so dont worry about them😊 just keep enjoying the story. and thanks for being the first to read.
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Super awesome update...loved it..
Omg kalpi used bleach🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow read all the parts at once..
loved the journey🤗
plz continue soon .. plz pm me...
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Ragz and Gauri r so 🥺
But loved ur update buddy
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I like Kalpi new name for Gauri it suits her perfectly lol
Aww u hate the way she speak to Kalpi like she is nothing
Kalpi using bleach on their clothes was awesome lol
Even if she didn't know but I'm satisfied lol
Raghav saying all those mean things to Kalpi was hurtful
I can't wait for him to regret his actions towards Kalpi
Kalpi crying is very emotional
Wonderful update
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Originally posted by: angelk1

kanch1234 i warned everyone before reading the story that raghav and gauri will be mean for a while. so dont worry about them😊 just keep enjoying the story. and thanks for being the first to read.

plz dear pm ur next update 😊
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Awesome update
Luv d tag first ice prince n nw gauri ice queen
Continue soon n if possible pm next updates
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Chapter 7

Scene 1

It was late at night kalpi was still awake she couldn't sleep because it was raining and the thunder was scaring her. Scared she quickly grabs her things and entered the house. She couldn't see anything or find the switch to turn the light on. She went to the kitchen to drink some water. While their she drank the water, suddenly she heard footsteps, panicking her quickly hide under the counter. When the person came, she turns the light on making kalpi look from below. When she saw who it was she gasp. Their getting water was non other then her mother in law, she had facial mask on her face.

Gauri looking her direction made kalpi gulp. She walks towards her and kalpi close her eyes. When gauri stops right in front of her and says "who puts this cup here?"

"It's probably Raghav; he usually drinks water at night." She says taking the glass cup and washing it then she puts it on the sink. After words she left the kitchen and head back to her room.

Kalpi got up and signs. "That was close; if she finds me she will turn me to a Popsicle." She says while biting her lips. She was about to leave when she heard another footstep, she quickly ducks under the counter. Gauri ma came back looking for her phone.

"Now where did I put it?" she thought looking around. When she moves to the other side of the counter kalpi moves left, when she moves again she moves right. They continue this until gauri gave up; she turns off the light and went to her room. Once she was gone kalpi quickly left the kitchen. She was about to go back to her tent when she realize she don't remember where it was. She walks around looking for the door, when she entered a dark room. In the room you could see a white bed, a night stand, a fan which was turned on and more stuff she didn't know.

While there she walks to the bed and saw Raghav sleeping. She was about to leave when her saree hit his face making her tense. She quietly turns around, than bends her body with her face above his. She tried taking her saree from his face, when she got it she was about to get up when Raghav turns his body locking her hair under his arm. She covered her mouth with her other hand so she wouldn't scream out loud then She tried tugging her hair but Raghav had a strong grip on it. Kalpi didn't know what to do; she tried tugging it again when Raghav turns to his right drawing her towards him, making her bit her lips and accidentally falls on the bed. Once she did that he stretches letting her hair go, kalpi signs but then frown when Raghav took his hands and wrap it around her waist, pulling her closer.

Scene 2

Vitthal wouldn't eat anything, even when kamla offers her food. The villagers were also sad because to them kalpi was like there child. Paki came over everyday, so kamla wouldn't miss kalpi. She would help kamla with her choirs and also help cook in the house. Pakiya sometimes would play tricks on paki, making everything normal. The only one who doesn't think so is vitthal. He was in his room looking at the photo album they had. He was looking at kalpi baby pictures and crying.

Paki knock on the door and vitthal wipes his tears saying "come in" once she was in she brought him tea and said kamla told her to bring some for him. Not wanting to be rude he told paki to put the tea on the table. Paki insist that he drinks it or she wouldn't leave.

"Look paki, thank you but I will drink it later." He says

"Please sure, just drink it kamla ma is very worried about you." She says, vitthal knew she wouldn't leave him alone unless he drinks it so he gave up. He puts the album on the table making paki see the pictures. She smiles and thought to herself just you wait kalpi; I will take all your happiness away. Kamla ma should have been my mother she thought you've always talks about your family and how loving they are. Now I will take them from you and experience that love I never had. She thought

Vitthal grabs the tea and drinks it. Paki just stood there waiting until he finished, when he was done he says "there I'm done, tell kamla to stop worrying." He says

"Ok sir." She says just when she was about to leave vitthal calls her name making her turn back "should you be getting home, your family is probably worried about you." He says

"No sure, there always busy so they never have time for me." She says looking sad

"Really?" he says soften up a little bit

"Yes sir, I'm always home by myself. No one is there to welcome me, even at night there never around." She lied

"That's not good, what if something were to happen to you, who would be there to save you." He says thinking before saying "how about this, you come and sleep in kalpi room whenever you're alone. So that way you won't be alone and you'll be safe." He says

"Really sir that would be good" She says excitedly

"That's only if your parents agree paki." He says

"Ok sir, I will call and ask them." She says

"Its getting late instead of going home you can sleep here for the night." He says to her making her smile.

"Thank you sure." She says before leaving

Scene 3

Kalpi was tense for both of them, why? Because when she wakes up he will be disgust with his action and two she will be blamed for it, while sleeping Raghav kept rubbing her stomach making her ticklish. She tried not to laugh but she couldn't help it. Soon she started giggling. When he stopped she covered her mouth praying he didn't wake up. She turned her head slowly to look at him when she saw his eyes wide open, She screamed so loud making Raghav let go of her. She jumps back scared, and she accidentally kicks Raghav in the shin, making him put his hands between his legs.

When she realizes what she did, she got closer to him to apologize. Raghav still in pain held his hand up saying "you! Don't come near me"

"But sir, you're in pain." She says trying to help him

"No stay away from me." He says

Kalpi huphs a bit and replies "sir, let me help you. It looks serious." She says

"And how will you help me?" he says

"Ai always says if something like that were to happen to papa she would make him take a cold shower or give him an ice pack to cool off." She says happily

"If you know all of this than why are you still standing here." he says

"Ah sorry sir, let me get It." she says walking out the door heading towards the kitchen. Two minutes later she was back in Raghav room. She walks towards Raghav who was already on the chair laying back. She took the ice and was about to put it on his legs when Raghav stops her "what are you doing?" he says

"I'm putting the ice pack on your leg." She says

"That's not where it hurts, idiot give me that." He says grabbing the pack from her

He was about to put it between his legs when he saw her still on the floor watching his movement. He cleared his throat to get her attention then he said "are you gonna sit there and stare or you gonna turn around and get out." He says coldly making her blush.

She got up to leave; when she left Raghav remembers what happened. He looks at his hand and remembers how soft her skin was. He was about to remember something else when he felt disgust with himself. He quickly shook his head and says "why am I thinking about this, I shouldn't be thinking about her like that. I was fine without a female companionship. I don't need them." He says then he said "I have to get rid of her fast."

Meanwhile kalpi was on her way to the tent. When she finally finds it she went inside and closes it. She tried to sleep but her heart wouldn't stop beating.

"Why are you doing this to me?" she says to her self while putting her hand on her chest. "Don't you see I'm trying to sleep, stop thinking about him." she says but her heart wouldn't calm down. She turned her face to the left then right but she still couldn't sleep. Finally she got back up and decides to do some cleaning.

The next day, Raghav and gauri came down stairs to see breakfast on the table and kalpi cleaning the kitchen. "Good morning" she says happily both of them ignored her. Gauri was impressed but she didn't show it. Raghav on the other hand was irritated. They both sat in their chairs and started eating. Gauri asks kalpi to turn the TV on for her while Raghav phone rings. When he picks it up he got up to talk outside.

"What is it Sammy?" he says

"Well, I called to remind you that this year it's your turn to make the business party for the company and our allies." He says making Raghav surprise

"Oh, I forgot, with everything going on I forgot about today." He says

"Its ok, you still have time to set it up. I will come by around five to help you." He says

"Ok, thank you Sammy." He says before hanging up

He saw kalpi cleaning and got an idea. He walks back to eat his breakfast smiling the whole time. Once he was done he calls kalpi to come. When she came she started grabbing his things when he says "kalpi, I have a special job for you." He says making her confuse.

"Every year we vote one company to plan a search party so we could find an alley to join our companies with and to sign a contract. This year they vote for me to make the party." He says

"So you want me to help decorate the place?" she says excitedly

"Not help; I want you to do the whole thing by yourself." He says making her tense

"But sir, how will I accomplish this by myself?" she asks

"That's your problem, here is the list of things you need to make and make sure there well done." He says before leaving heading to his office.

Once he was gone gauri smirks and came up to her, "you better don't screw this up, this is an important event for my son." She says before leaving as well.

Scene 4

As soon as they left kalpi started working, she made the food, and rearranged the furniture's. You can do this kalpi; Ai taught you everything about making a party. You don't need them. She thought, then she says "maybe if I do a good job ice que- I mean gauri ma might be so impress that she will accept me as her daughter in law." She says to herself.

She got the latter to use to put the decorations on the walls then she took the latter and puts it closer to the light so she could change the lightbulb in the chandelier. While doing this, her latter nails started falling apart, when she felt the latter weak she grabs onto the fan just in time before the later break apart. That was close she thought

She looks down and realizes how far away the ground looks. Oh god, what should I do, I'm stuck. What if I stay here forever? Or nobody comes to help me she thought

Three hours past and kalpi was still hanging on the chandelier. Her hands were starting to get tired and slippery. She prayed that someone would hurry up and help her. Meanwhile Raghav was parking his car, as soon as he enters the house he saw, the decorations and the furniture rearranged, he also smells something nice in the air. He was surprise that she actually finished half of the stuff he told her to do.

"Kalpi" he says while searching in the kitchen. Kalpi hearing her name shouts "sir, please help, I'm stuck." She says

Raghav hearing this quickly follows her voice, when he reached the room, he was shocked to see her up there, about to fall.

"How did you get your self in that situation?" he says

"The latter broke sure; I don't know how to get down." She says

"Hold on I'm coming." He says walking towards the center and than looking up.

"Look, I want you to jump down." He says scaring kalpi

"Sir I think you've gone crazy, do you want me to die?" she says

"Look trusts me, just jump and I will catch you." He says

Kalpi not believing him started crying and talking gibberish. "What am I gonna do, I can't die now, I have so many thing to do and I'm so young. I can't let ice prince and ice queen get the satisfaction of seeing my dead body. I still have so much to prove to them." She says out loud.

Raghav glares at her. Why does she keep calling me ice prince? And who is this ice queen she's talking about? He thought

"Will you shut up!" he says making her be quiet, but it didn't last long because she says

"Sir Can I say something before I die?"

Raghav signs rubbing his forehead, "please go ahead."

"Well sir, I don't like the way you treated me, sure we got married by accident, but I would never play with someone's life, Ai taught me better than this." She says

"Are you done?" he says

" no sir, I feel like you're being mean to me on purpose , I just cant understand you, I know your mean, arrogant, selfish, rude, old" she says making Raghav glare some more at her.

"And not to mention an ice prince, But I think you're afraid to show how you really feel." She says shocking Raghav but he quickly hides it so she wouldn't know how true the last part was.

"Look your wasting my time, are you gonna jump or not." He says

"I can't sir, you might not catch me, and you might actually let me fall on purpose." She says irritating Raghav.

"If you won't jump, than I'm leaving." He says

"WAIT SIR!!!" she says

"What is it now?" he says

"I will jump, just don't leave." She says shooing him closer with her other hand forgetting to hold on. When she finally realizes what she was doing she tried to grab on to the fan again but her other hand slip, making her fall.

She screamed, and her heart was beating so fast. She closed her eyes waiting to feel the ground when she felt herself in someone's arms. She slowly opens her eyes and looks at Raghav, both of them having a moment with the song phir mohabbat playing.

Dil.. Sambhal ja zara

Kalpi was surprise that he caught her.

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Raghav on the other hand heart was beating fast. He had never felt this way before.

Dil.. yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

"You caught me" she says still staring at him with her hand still wrapped around his neck.

"I told you I would." He says bringing his head to her forehead

Aisa kyunkar hua janoon naa
Main janoon naa

"I guess you're not selfish and mean like I thought you were. You have a good heart." She says ruining the moment and making Raghav drop her on the floor. She looks up at him angrily and he says "get back to work" then he left to his room.

Kalpi watches him leave and says "i take it back; he's definitely an ice prince."

To be continue...

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Preview

Raghav saw kalpi having trouble reaching something in the closet, he went there to help her not knowing that that kalpi forgot to unlock the door handle from the outside, When he finished helping her both of them heard a click, turning around they both saw the door lock.

"This is your entire fault; every time I'm with you trouble happens "he says angry

Next scene

Kalpi comes down the stairs wearing a beautiful black dress; everyone turns to look at her. Raghav eyes were shock, One of Raghav business partner said to Raghav "who is she?"

"She's my maid" he says

"This is my type of girl, wearing something non traditional." Said another businessman

"Well she wouldn't mind me dancing with her, would she" another asks before going to her making Raghav jealous.


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This is how she will look at the party.




Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago

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