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Chapter 4


Scene 1

Raghav and kalpi were walking, while walking people were staring at them, laughing and making jokes.

"First, he takes our land then he expelled me from school and says I owe him and now look I'm stuck with the ice prince himself." She says annoying Raghav

"God" she says putting her fingers together

"If I ever get out of here alive, I'll dance for you for a week without asking for anything." She says "or I'll even accept Ai proposal for marriage." She says making Raghav stop

"WILL YOU SHUT UP! "He says scaring kalpi.

"Your talking is annoying me. Can't you just stay quiet until we get free." He says making her silent. He signs and starts walking

"Oh, now he thinks he can control me too. Just because he can boss people around doesn't mean he can boss me. "She whispers loud enough for Raghav to hear.

Raghav was irritated; all he wants to do is leave this village. He was just tiered of them. He was so busy in his thought that he didn't hear kalpi call him.

"Sir" she says Raghav ignores her

"Sir" she says again this time he respond

"What is it?" he says

"Where we going?" she ask

"We are going to my hotel room." He says

"HOTEL!" She says then she started panicking

"Sir I'm too young, I can't do that with you. Your old and I'm just 18 I can't be seen with you. People in the village will talk. And I've never been intimate with a guy before." She says ranting

Raghav tried to speak but she kept interrupting him "I'm sorry to disappoint you sir but I'm saving myself for marriage, Ai would go bananas if she knows your intention. And worse of all pita will hunt you down until your body is hanged in front of the whole village." She says about to continue when Raghav covers her mouth.

"Will you shut up for one second?" He says letting go of her mouth

"Look i was just gonna get us out of this mess with water, but since your against it do you have a better idea." He says making her smile

Scene 2


Raghav and kalpi walk up a cliff; down below was a waterfall. He looks at kalpi like she was crazy. "So you want us to jump from this cliff and fall into the water." He says kalpi shaking her head.

" Tuma Pagala ho rahe haim?" he says

"we wont die besides the cliff is not even high." She says

"Look you probably don't have a life, but I do. There is no way I'm jumping in there." He says as soon as he said that kalpi grabs his hand and jumps in the water. They both got separated and came up the surface.

"See I told you it would work." She says coming out the water follow by Raghav, who was breathing out of control.

Kalpi got up and walks towards him. Raghav looks up and blush. Then he says

"Go away."

"Oh come on it wasn't that bad." She says

He got up and took his jacket of then he throws it at her. "Cover yourself" he says

She looks down and realizes that he could see her bra. Quickly she took his jacket and put it on.

"Are you done" he asks about to turn around when she told him not to turn yet.

Just when he was about to leave he heard her scream, he turned around only to see her falling and landing on him. I should have seen the log in front of me. She thought to herself when she opened her eyes she realizes her lip was on something. She looks down and quickly got up screaming, with Raghav still in shock.

"I can't believe you would do this to me." She says pacing around

"That was my first kiss; I was saving it for my husband. Now I will be doomed, cursed for life" She says Raghav got up and walk away.

"Hey wait for me." She says running after him. When he stopped she bumps into his back.

"Ok this is where we split up." He says

"This way leads you to your village while this way leads me to the hotel. Bye." He says leaving. Kalpi watches him leave then says "first he stole my first kiss, now he's leaving me to walk home by myself. What a jerk." She says

Scene 3


Later that night, Raghav was trying to sleep. He was dreaming of his future company and wife. In his dream his wife is saying goodbye to him for work, his wife is making him dinner, his wife is taking care of the kids while he work on his papers, his kids are very educated and smart and lastly his mom interacting with his wife. He was having a wonderful dream until it became a nightmare. All he sees is kalpi.

"Bye sir, have a nice day at work." She says before closing the door.

"What would you like for dinner sir, I made your favorite."

"Sir when will you stop working and play with the kids?" she asks while playing peek-a boo

"Papa sir we got an A in our test" one of his kids say "and I skipped a grade sir." The other says

"Raghav your wife is very talents." His mother said

"Sir your mother is so funny she told me this joke about you, do you want to hear it sir." She says

Raghav turns around in his sleep putting the pillow on his head. In his dream he could see a lot of kalpi bubble head surrounding him saying sir.. sir.. sir. He was very irritated. Waking up he sat down on his bed and drank his cold water.

"I need to hurry up and leave this village before I become crazy." He says before getting up to take a cold shower.

Meanwhile

Kalpi came home and Kamla had a great news for her.

"Kalpana" she says

"Ham Mam." She says

"I just spoke to rakish mother and she said they agreed to the marriage." She says making kalpi happy

"Really Ai?" she says happy

"Yes, tomorrow night you will get married." She says

"Why am I getting married tomorrow?" she asks

"Rakish is leaving for London tomorrow, so you will have to do the engagement in the morning and the marriage at night." She says

"But Ai I have to go fill out an application tomorrow for a job in Delhi." She says

"Ok then after the engagement you can meet us at the temple for the marriage." She says

"Ok then should I be dress when I come there?" she says "and which temple we have two?" she says

"Stop playing around paki, you know the one and yes be dressed.

Scene 4


The next day Raghav was getting ready to leave the village when he realizes he made a deal with sahil. He calls sahil and told him that he's leaving for Delhi today.

"I guess we will have to skip the engagement and proceed with the wedding at night because my daughter is taking a trip to Delhi today morning." He says

"Ok then, you know where the temple is right?" says sahil

"Yes I know the temple." He says

"Good see you then."

Raghav hang up the phone, he went to the market and brought a wedding Sherwanis. After that he puts it in his car and went to the village to check on the company.

Meanwhile

Sammy walks in Raghav house to meet gauri. When she saw him she greets him.

"I see you're back Sammy." She says

"How is my company doing?" she asks

"Good actually, Raghav should be coming home today." He says

"That's good. Did he get into any trouble?" she asks

"No mam." He says then thought more like he got people in trouble.

"Ok then you're dismiss Sammy. And thank you again." She says

"No problem mam." He says before leaving

"I know my son very well, trouble always finds him." she says

ELSEWHERE

Kalpi was getting ready for her engagement. She was dressed pretty. Rakish parents came with rakish and they all sat down. Kamla offers them food and they took some. After they discuss everything pakiya brought kalpi. Rakish was surprise, when she looks at him he turns away shyly. Kalpi on the other hand couldn't stop blushing god he is handsome, just like in the picture, thank you. She thought.

she was about to go use the restroom when she tripped on her duppat, Kamla who was coming to rakish with tea fell and the tea spilled on rakish legs burning him.

"I'm sorry rakish" says Kamla

"It's ok." He says

"What do you have to say for yourself kalpi?" Says Kamla

"Sorry." She says then ran to use the bathroom

"I'm sorry for how she behaved." Says Kamla

"Its ok, I like her innocence." He says making Kamla breath

"So is that a yes then?" she asks

"Of course." He says

When kalpi came back from the bathroom, rakish and his parents where gone. Kamla came up to her and told her they accept. She was so happy, she went into her room to change then she puts her wedding outfit in her bag. Then they walk her to the bus stop.

"I will be back Ai." She says

"Don't be late kalpi." She says

"Have a safe trip kalpana." Vitthal added

"I will, don't worry about me." She says hugging both of her parents and getting on the bus.

Scene 5


Later that night pakiya came running to the house yelling and crying.

"What's wrong pakiya?" says vitthal

"Kalpi... Her bus." He says

"Speak bete." She says

"Kalpi her bus was destroyed. There was a bomb on the bus and it exploded." He says

"Your lying pakiya, you have to be." Vitthal said tears coming out of his eyes

"No, they found this." He says showing kalpi clothing she was wearing earlier.

"This is kalpi." Kamla says falling on the couch.

"If you don't believe me check the radio, their talking about it right now." He says putting it on.

They listened to the men talk and waited for them to call the bus number. When they call the number, vitthal turned it off and walk to his room. Kamla on the other hand kept crying. She called rakish parents to tell them the bad news; they were also disappointed and sad.

Meanwhile

A girl dressed in her bridle outfit walks up the stairs. Her bangles chiming and she was holding her veil. She couldn't see anything. Raghav walks to her and grabs her hand. He gave the priest the signal to start. They proceed with the ceremony not seeing a shooting star passing by. After the ceremony the priest told Raghav to put the sindoor on her head. The girl being shy covers her face. When he removed the veil he smiles at her shyness. Then he puts the sindoor on her.

"You don't have to be shy." He says "I'm no stranger, but instead your new husband." He says making her smile. She slowly removes her hand from her face. When she did her eyes were wide so was Raghav.

"Ape!" they both said

" Apane paki Nahim." He says

"Aura apane Rakish Nahim." She says oh god, why me. Why do you torment me? I wasn't expecting the ice prince to be my husband. Why Am I fated to have bad luck? She thought

Raghav looks at the priest and says "is their anyway you can take it back."

"I'm sorry sir, but it's already done. You guys are linked for life." he says

"This is exactly what I was afraid of." He says coldly

To be continue...


Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Hahahaha...this is awesome 😃 Am so loving this messy Kalpana & her Ice Prince...do continue soon !!!
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Omg..ice prince aur miss clumsy ki shaadi ho gayi😆😆
Loved the update..continue soon..
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I just want say one thing about Mr&Mrs Ice Prince...they are


Amazing update dear ...continue soon😳
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Chapter 5

Scene 1

Raghav glares at kalpi; he just couldn't believe his luck. He watches her from the other corner, sleeping. It was a challenge trying to get her in the limo.

Flashback

Kalpi in horror came to the statue; she looked at it with hurt.

"Why would you do this to me?" She says

"I asked you to get me married to someone that will love me, not someone that's cold as ice." She says Raghav rolling his eyes

"Please take it off, I don't want this marriage. I refuse to accept this." She says pleading to the priest

"I'm sorry bacca, I cannot remove It." he said

Once he said that kalpi broke down crying. Raghav was getting really annoyed. He walks towards her and grabs her hand making her look at him. "Get up now, we are leaving." He says kalpi ignores him and continues to cry making Raghav tug her and pull her down the stairs.

"No, I will not go. Someone please help me." She screams

"Will you shut up!" he says making her shut up. When they reached the car Raghav told her to get in, but she refuses. So he decides to get in expecting her to follow but instead she was walking away. He was about to leave her when it started raining. He drove near her honking his horn and scrolling his window down.

"Are you coming in or not?" he says

"No, I refuse to stay in the same car as you." She said walking a little bit fast.

"Suit yourself." He says driving off

Kalpi watches him leave; once he was gone she turned around heading home. When she reached her house, she saw paki thru the window, having dinner with her family. Then she saw kamla hugging her.

"They look so happy without me." she says looking sad

"Maybe I should just leave." She says turning away from the scene and walking back to the temple.

Meanwhile

Raghav was driving home when his tier broke. He stops the car and got out pissed off. He looks at his tier and signs then he calls one of his limo drivers to come get him. While waiting, he saw kalpi walking away, her wedding gown wet hugging her curve and her hair and makeup smearing. Kalpi didn't care where she was going, she kept remembering all the times her mother accidentally say she likes paki better then her and how she always want paki to be her daughter instead of her. She continued crying not seeing a car heading towards her.

Raghav seeing this quickly rushes to her side and grabbing her, both of them falling on the floor. He looks at kalpi and was about to yell at her when she hugs him while crying.

She continues to cry until Raghav pulled her from him with disgust. He looks at her crying and he could see her snot coming from her nose, when she saw it she took her saree and wipe it away not caring if he finds her disgusting.

"Thank you." She says shyly she waited for him to say something, when he didn't she looks at him confusingly.

"Do not think I did this because I care." He says

"I only did this so the police won't be on my case." He says then he turns his back to her waiting for the limo to come.

When the limo arrives he told her to get in the car. But she stayed where she was at, he came to her and pick her up then he puts her in the car far away from him. Once she was inside he walks to the other side and sat down.

End of flashback


Scene 2

Raghav looks at the sleeping girl in the corner nodding her head while sleeping. Just looking at her upsets him. All he wants to do is getting rid of her, but how? He thought suddenly an idea came to him. He told the driver to take him to a direction he wanted to go, when they got their he picks her up and took her inside. The clerk looks at him and says "which room would you like today sir?"

"Give me the lover's room." He says

"Here you go sir; I hope you enjoy your stay." She says

Raghav took the key and took the elevator, once he was up to his floor he searches for his room and when he finds it he opens it and walks to the bed. Putting her down and taking out some clothes for her to wear later on. He looks at her one more time and walks out the door, smiling to himself, forgetting to lock the door.

Once he was out he told his driver to drive him home.

Meanwhile Gauri mom was preparing food for her son, she was happy that her company was built and now she can start her preparation. She heard the door opening and then saw her son walking in, soaking wet. She quickly rushed to get a towel and then came back to dry him off.

"Look at you all wet" she says "what were you doing in the rain?" she asks making Raghav remember kalpi. He shook his head and looks at his mom "my car tier broke so I had to wait for our limo driver to come." He says

"Ok dear, come, I made your favorite dish." She says

"I'm not hungry." He says making her mom sad

"I ate on the way here, so my stomach is full." He says gauri signs and nods her head then she walks always to eat her food.

Raghav watches her leave and walks to his room. In the village that night, paki had come over when she heard about kalpi. She grabs her bags and rushed out her house, she was happy that kalpi is gone, because now she can have kamla all to herself. She reaches there house and knocks, kamla opens the door. Paki looking at her pretends to cry; kamla took her inside and hugs her. Vitthal came to see who came hoping it was kalpi alive so was pakiya but when they saw paki, they sadly look away, holding their tears and putting on a fake smile.

Kamla took paki to the table to have dinner, soon vitthal and pakiya walks in also, sitting on the table. Paki while sitting down saw kalpi shadow coming to the window. She's alive, I thought she was dead she thoughtno she can't have my kamla-ma, I have to do something. She thought watching kalpi getting closer.

"This was kalpi favorite food." She says fake crying again making kamla hug her. She looks out the window and saw the hurt in her eyes, when she saw kalpi leaving; she smiles and removes herself from kamla, happy that she's finally gone.


Scene 3

Kalpi was sleeping when a group of guys came to her room. She was having a nightmare about her new life. In her dream Raghav locks her in a cage. And she was trapped like a bird, she couldn't go anywhere. He wouldn't let her see outside, she was forever stuck in her hiding spot, and no one knew who she was or knows that she was in the house. She could hear Raghav laughing telling her over and over that she will die in this cage and no one will know she ever exists.

She could see her parents happily enjoying paki presence. She tried screaming out to them from the window but they couldn't hear her. "Ai, pita!" she screams

"I'm right here, please look up." She screams but they didn't hear her, they just kept moving farther away from her. She was about to cry when she felt someone touching her, opening her eyes, she saw a group of guys looking at her hungrily and one of the guys on top of her touching her hair. She screams making them laugh.

"Look at this boy, our beauty finally woke up." The man says on top of her.

"What should we do now boss." He says smirking

"You already know." He says making kalpi eyes widen,

"Get of me before I call my husband." She says

"Your husband, theirs no one here but you and us" He says

"Your wrong he's here." she says

"Boss I think she's talking about the rich guy that left the motel when we came in." says one of the friends

"You hear that dolly, your husband left you all alone." He says

"You must be wrong, he wouldn't leave me." She says scared

"If you don't believe us scream his name." he says touching her duppat and taking it off

"No!" she screams, the boss pulls her up and commands the other guy to tie her hands with her duppat. Kalpi screams for Raghav but he didn't come, the guy's laughs at her antic, one of them was touching her legs while the other was tearing her dress apart.

"No! Please stop." She begs the guy tore her clothes apart showing small parts of her body. They made her sit up and the leader licks his lips, he broke her necklace and removes her pin holding her hair. He looks at kalpi scared face and told the other guys to get some beer for them, they complained at first but when he got up they all scramble.

He turns his head back to kalpi and smiles at her, "don't worry, you won't feel a thing." He says laying her down. He quickly took of his pants and got on top of her. Kalpi was crying begging him to stop.Oh god, is this my fate to be raped by this man? Why would my husband leave me here? How could he do this to me? She thought crying some more.

Just when he was about to pull up her skirt kalpi kicks him in the sheen, making him fall back. She quickly got up and runs to the door. Looking both ways she ran to the right. The man tried to get up but ends up falling on his knees, holding his sheen. His friends came and saw there boss like that, they asks him if he was alright he ignores them and says "get the girl, don't let her escape." He says, following the boss order they ran after her.

Scene 4

Kalpi ran down the stairs until she reached the lobby. The clerk saw her and says "miss. Are you ok?'

Kalpi looks at her and says "you have to help me, please. Do you know where my husband is?" she asks pleading with her eyes

"He left after he drops you here." she says making kalpi fall on the floor crying. When she heard the voice coming she quickly got up and put her hands together, begging her to help her. "Please, help me, please." She says just when the clerk was about to say something the guys came to the lobby, kalpi seeing them quickly ran out the door. They followed her while screaming. The clerk seeing this calls her husband.

Elsewhere, Raghav was trying to sleep but he kept thinking about kalpi, and their situation. He got out of the bed and was about to go down stairs when his phone rang.

Looking at it he didn't know whose number it was. He decides not to pick it up. Going downstairs he was about to get cold water to drink when his phone rang again. Annoyed he picks it up and says "WHAT!"

"Sir, your wife is being chased by a group of guys. She left the motel with her clothes half ripped." She says panicking.

Raghav was surprise, he almost drops his phone. "Ok thank you, I'm coming." He says

Meanwhile, kalpi ran as fast as her leg could. She didn't know where she was going, she looks back only to see them gaining on her. "Someone please help me." She says she turns a corner and almost fell on the trash can please god please help me she thought losing stamina. While running she missed the shooting star going north. When she reached the street, she was about to stop one of the cars when the leader grabs her. She screams but they ignored it. The leading slaps her sending her to the floor. Then he took his belt off about to hit her with it, kalpi closes her eyes waiting for the pain. When it never came she looks up to see her husband.

Raghav looks at her appearance, pissed of he punches the leader, making him fall on the ground. When he's friends saw this they tried to attack Raghav, but Raghav grab their hands and kick them. Then he took the leaders belt and hit them with it. All he kept seeing was kalpi expression, and her attire. In rage he continues to hit them when kalpi hugs him from behind "please stop sir, I'm ok." She says making him drop the belt. The guys seeing this quickly ran away.

Seeing them leave kalpi finally breaks, she removes herself from him and cries. Raghav seeing this puts his hands on her face wiping the tears away. Kalpi stops crying, to shock to say anything. They both look at one another, having a romantic moment. Raghav notice the moons light shining on kalpi, her round eyes looking innocent and her baby face staring at him. Everything about her at this moment was tempting; he didn't know what came over him because the next thing he knew he kissed her.

Kalpi still shock could not do anything. She just stood there while he kisses her. Once Raghav realize what he was doing he pushes her and says "come with me"

He walks to his car and kalpi follows him, once they were inside he saw her seat belt not on. Taking his off he reaches towards Kalpi's getting closer to her body. Kalpi looking at him was scared that he might do something. Raghav saw the look she was giving him but he didn't care. He looks right back at her while putting the seat belt on, making them have a moment. Their hearts were beating fast. Kalpi was praying that he goes back to he's seat because she felt like her heart was about to leap from her chest.

When he finish he went back to his seat and puts his seatbelt on. He starts the car and than drove to his house.


Scene 5

While driving, Raghav constantly kept looking at kalpi, who was falling asleep.

"Sleep" he says when she heard his command she finally leans back and falls asleep. Raghav watches her and thought to himself I can't let come in the house like this, I have to do something. He thought then says in his head Also I have to get rid of her, before she ruins more of my life. He thought when he reached his house he parks his car. Once he was out he tried to wake her up, all kept hearing from her was ice prince and leave me alone. Getting irritated he took his bottle of water he just recently bought and walk to her side, their he opens her door and poor the water on her face, waking her up.

Kalpi quickly got up when she felt the cold water on her face and skin. She glares at her husband and he says "we are Here, I want you to change into the clothes that's in the back." he says

"Here? How do you expect me to change here." she says

"You have two min to get dress or I will dress you myself." He says making her panic. He closes the door to give her space. Kalpi blinks and was mad first he left me in a motel then I almost got raped, then he saves me and kissed me and then he pours cold water on me. Oh god what kind of husband did you give me. She thought ice prince is so confusing, I can't understand him at all. She thought

She looks at the clothes he brought it was clothes she would usually wears. Smiling she puts it on and walks back out; Raghav looks at her and turns back around signaling her to follow him. When they reached the door he opens it only to see his mom standing there.

"Raghav, where have you been? You suddenly left the house and didn't even inform me." She says "what were you doing so late?" she said

Gauri was about to say something else when she saw a girl next to him. She looks at the girl making her nervous; she saw the sindoor in the girl's forehead and glares at her.

"Who are you?" she says making kalpi hesitate she was about to say something when Raghav answers "she's our new maid." He says making kalpi look at him with shock.

To be continue...


Chapter 6

Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Hey everyone i made a video for ragna check it out on my youtube page. hope you like it and comment.
Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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awesome update dear u r an awesome writer👏..and maid???
yippee i am the first one to comment 😆
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelk1

Hey everyone i made a video for ragna check it out on my youtube page. hope you like it and comment.

ur video and song selection is marvellous dear 👏 big hugs to u 🤗
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Superb update and video..
I know i didn't mention it earlier but really love the tag ice Prince for rags
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Loved the update - looking forward to the update!! Can't believe the cheek of Maakhi & dumbo Hamlaa & now poor Kalpi is a servant 😭 But at least she is married and safe with Raghav

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