The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Awesome update. So our Mr.Singhania is jealous, loved the was he enquired Kalpi without hurting her and our sweet Kalpi also not hide anything and tell about her friend. Omg Neetu cooking conspiracy hope Raghav sort out carefully everything. Hope so Ragna relation safe. Till now they had only Sammy as support hope soon they get more supportive friends.

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Aru18

@Aru18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

wow wonderful update.

so prem is back want to his role in ranga story and also kalpi's friend also.

continue soon

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SUGANDHII

@suggii

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Res😉

Unres😊

Nyc update...

Ohk strart with sonal n kalpi orange cake send by kalpi's frnd😆

4 a moment😕 d way sonal was teasing her😲 I thought this teasing definitely leads to misunderstanding😒

may sonal misunderstood that whatever kalpi is hiding related to this frnd only😲

but but but

thank god she is a gud detective I must say😉

she not only observe kalpi but raghav too😆

d way she thought about raghav OMG is actually raghav but professional she has gud observing skills I must say gud one👏

n also d way she describe kalpi's behaviour when she was directly enter in Raghav's cabin only one word gr8😃 n yes one more think is d new entry leads to sonal love interest??? Well lets see...

About d Phone call scene.. Ahhh lovely d best part in entire update... Raghav's jealousy no he is not jealous😆 but what was it K he think so much about that kalpi hug him back n smiling n oll ohhh... Bechara husband he was so much confused about his behaviour his restlessness whoch leads hiS Mrs Singhania wait😡 but I just love this part yaar d way u describe raghav's feelings n kalpi waiting 4 his call wonderful... About d flashback d way he said thank u for doing this 4 his mom😊 n our mom😛 n d hug😳😳😳

n d final one her thought !!! This is y I keep him away from myself !!!😆🤣 lovely... vry nyc yr😳

N finally he decides to call her but Mrs singhania is faster than him... she keeps her ego aside.. ahh which show's may be she put lot restrictions by no romancing in office in driving n oll but this one ph call shows what he is meant 4 her... Ahh loved this part yyr. ..😳😳

n finally vry smartly without hurting her he asked about dat man not really but... u reached home in time naa😆🤣 gosh I was actuallactually laughing at this... but at same Time I lyk this caring n jealous raghav who ask his wife what he wanted to but vry smartly... vry nyc part👏

Maine mere last comment m b kaha th neetu is more intelligent than sahil😕

God knows no actually only u knows how u use her brain😡 n that too by using pooki😡😡

M still hoping that let remain pooki dumb n she doesn't convince with meetu'S evil plans😡

About prem kapur... no first gud mrng sammy😊 itne ache S raghav singhania gud mrng aah loved it...

Nyc update👏

Edited by sugandhii - 11 years ago

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Rubina

@Rubz1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Too good update soon dear.

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niranjana

@niru04

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Nice update di.i m really afraiad about neethu plan nd prem return.update soon

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Wow u have really given a balanced update.Because we got to read abt Sonal,Ragna,Sammy and the nasty kapoors.ALL IN ONE👏

Sonal has really CID.And is successful to some extent also.Hope she knows the truth soon

but shouldnot put Ragna into trouble.

Secondly what is the witch Neetu Kapoor whispered in Sahil's ears.And Pookhi is really dumb.To claim

Raghav she will do anything.Pls turn her grey without troubling Kalpi.

And as an icing on the cake,Prem Kapoor is coming back earlier than scheduled.And he is much smarter than Pookhi and he and his mother is a deadly combination.

And u are so fascinated abt the Prem's character it seems.Prem is literally ruling two of your FF's and

watnts to dance with Kalpi.Poor Soul!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

Now only God,Raghav's smartness and Kalpi should save him.

Wonderful portrayal of the feelings and after completing these FF's will you try out a Comic Ragna FF in our very own Govinda style.

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Wonderful update Charu! Sonal is on the way to find out the truth about ragna. She has noticed the blush on Kalpi 's face when she exited Raghav 's cabin. Also how eagerly she's expecting the phone call. Though she doesn't know that it's Raghav I think she has her doubts. Oh, she's planning to take a peek at her phone. That's breaching her privacy. Maybe she feels she's close to Kalpi but still it's not fair. Loved that both Raghav and Kalpi were getting restless on not talking to each other. Raghav wanted to know about the person she met earlier in the evening but didn't want her to think he doubted her. But he felt somewhat jealous and also that he's not part of her world. Loved how she told him the truth. Had she lied to him it would have remained in his heart that something is not right. Kalpi is planning an outing with Sonal and Saakshya. Looks like Sonal will soon have a love interest.

What khichdi is cooking between Neetu and Sahil? What are they going to do with Pakhi to make Raghav accept the marriage. Neetu is very cunning. I hope Kalpi doesn't get hurt. Pakhi is so dumb that she will do anything to get Raghav. To add to the drama, Prem will be back. But how is Raghav going to delay his arrival? Looks like he has a plan and Sammy will be helping him. Well done dear, fabulous !

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#778

superb update charu.
Oh sonal is on mission to find cooking btwn ragna. Love to see sonal taking cr of kalpi. I think sonal n sakshya bcme a pair in future.😳
Rags is jealous he evn didnt call kalpi on his regular tym.😆 Ragna are desperate to hear each other and finaly kalpi cld rags.
Oh suspence reveal, that guy is kalpi's childhood frnd wow dats cool.
Love kalpi told evrything abt her frnd to rags to avoid any future mu. Evn rags take it lightly n start tease her.😊
oh no wats plan is neetu doing nw, hope rags wl cope up with evrything evn with prem.