The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 49

Originally posted by: sweetiepiee090

Its really amazing yaar👏 i started reading dis story sterday 1ly nd just nw finish reading 12 parts its totally different nd impressed me frm other os i'm just lovng it.. u perfectly made blncng of all emotions specially romance and revenge in one go 😃.. waiting fr nxt part continue soon..

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Aww Kiara, finally wait for your comment was so much worth it! 😊 n I am really sorry for making you cry darling. 😭 Yes, I gave the subtle hints. so that the effect of shock is minimal. But I know it still hurts. I have tried to still minimise its bad effects. Kalpi's character in the show has to be the most perfect character any female lead has ever been show in contemporary context till now. She is modern, educated, independent, but still cares for her own identity, her own values, still cares for her loved one but has a no-nonsense attitude. n Rachana portrayed it so perfectly. I am in love with her character and natural beauty. Ragna were really made for each other. It was like Raghav is not perfect but her love made him inch towards perfection; for the world he had everything, and was perfect for his money and power. But for himself, she made him complete, she filled the void in his life which no one else could. He had the wealth of world with him, but the wealth of true love & care was given to him by her. For the world he was The Raghav Singhania a business tycoon, for his mother he is her son who has his duties towards her, but it is only Kalpi who views him as Raghav, only Raghav a human being; it was Kalpi who saw through him, cared for him as a human being should be. Apart from her it was only Sammy who was closest to him.

Sammy did not know about his plans of fake marriage, but now he is in every plan. He'll get to know about plans as raghav decided to take necessary actions. I'll try to show their love even though they are not living in same home. Hope that would be worth it, but it would also increase the excitement for some updates! After that Kalpi has to surely return her home, her Raghav and her home! 😃 n thanks for no tomatoes and jootis. 😆😛 Love you. 🤗

Originally posted by: fairylover

Okkie... I read all the parts... I am not going to unres any previous comment as I don't remember what I wanted to write that day so here r my fresh comments..

u have the power to hold the reader Charu.. I planned to read only one part right now n next in night but I couldn't hold myself from reading all. I loved the way u explained Kalpi n Raghav's pain at the same time. Kalpi was hurt n not ready to believe on newspaper pic.. She so desperately wanted Rags to deny it but unfortunately it can't be undone now. I liked how KAlpi supported Raghav in revenge against Apoors without using Pakhi and let him realize that it's not right to use an innocent Pakhi but i feel Pakhi will be negative here as well. Hope I am wrong.

I am happy that Kalpi is going to find success on her own. N it feels so good to hear Mrs. Kalpana Raghav Singhania. Rags is smart enough that he brought that 2 month contract n took Pakhi's resignation n he has all the ways to deal with Kapoors.. I am expecting downfall of them in the story. Here at least they should be bothered about Pakhi unlike the show.

Sammy is a true frn.. Just a line that "I wish u would have told me before" showed what a true frn he is. Rags too realized that Sammy would have stopped him by committing this mistake.

Vitthal-Kalpi convo was again mindblowing... she told everything to her dad without revealing anything in real.. I always love there scene.. Kamla being Kamla is more concerned about Pakhi.

Coming to Sonal.. She seems cool n i m sure she will soon figure out whose car it was.. Update soon n sorry for late.

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Charu!! 🤗 this was awesome! This story is amazing!! I don't know what to say 👍🏼 I'm in awe!! Really!! The way you described every scene is so vivid! Each scene was even better that the other and all coincides so beautifully! I feel proud!! You really have a talent for this! Plz continue and never stop writing!! 🤗 🤗