The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG charu! Loved the update but what crashed???? Oh im dying to know if all's fine.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

OMG charu! Loved the update but what crashed???? Oh im dying to know if all's fine.


Thank you Priya, you are an amazing writer yourself. 😊 So this comment is special. I'll try to update soon to end the curiousity. 😃😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg that was awesome my dear Charu !!! All these RagNas moments, by reading I was imaging these scene, so cute for the beach one, so romantic and passionate for the morning one
What a romantic u r, u naughty girl 😛 Lol
Awesome
Feel scared at the end, it could be gauri who has fallen don't know ... 🤔 But hope everything is fine
Waiting with impatience the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u


Thank you Vasishna. 😃 yes, Ragna romance is endless.😆 After all first they are newly weds, and second they are a passionate couple! 😛 Thanks for loving Ragna romantic scenes. Hope you like updates ahead too. 😉😛 Sorry to leave you on cliff hanger, I'll try to update asap. 😊


Then I'll be waiting patientlyyy fr ur update..😃😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg what happened did Kalpi fall what's wrong now oh please don't hurt Kalpi wonderful update dear please don't take too long to update I'm dying to know what happen
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Posted: 11 years ago
Raghav blasting in the glory of his wifey beauty was amazing
I love the way he stares at Kalpi as if he has nothing else to do in the world lol
Aww Kalpi kissing Raghav thinking he is asleep was so cute
I love their romantic moment in the mornings and also on the beach
The ending is kinda scary, I can't wait to know what happen
Superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update charu
lv it. Perfect potrayed of new morning aftr 1st nyt. Amazing. Kalpi acepting n enjoying her new identity of mrs. Raizada, helping rags for ofice, making brkfast for family as perfect new bride is so touching.
Rags is gloomy n kalpi undstnding it is superb.
Sea scene is nyc. Lv to read deir mischieousnes.
New twist 😲 eagar to read nxt update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prishna_fan

Omg that was awesome my dear Charu !!! All these RagNas moments, by reading I was imaging these scene, so cute for the beach one, so romantic and passionate for the morning one

What a romantic u r, u naughty girl 😛 Lol
Awesome
Feel scared at the end, it could be gauri who has fallen don't know ... 🤔 But hope everything is fine
Waiting with impatience the next part


Thanks Steena. 😊 I am naughty? 😲 No-no, I am very innocent. 😛 😆 I'll try to update next part soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivanie05

Omg what happened did Kalpi fall what's wrong now oh please don't hurt Kalpi wonderful update dear please don't take too long to update I'm dying to know what happen


Kalpi is hurt or not, I'll clear in the next update and shall try to update soon. 😊 Thanks for liking the update and your comment. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Raghav blasting in the glory of his wifey beauty was amazing
I love the way he stares at Kalpi as if he has nothing else to do in the world lol
Aww Kalpi kissing Raghav thinking he is asleep was so cute
I love their romantic moment in the mornings and also on the beach
The ending is kinda scary, I can't wait to know what happen
Superb update


Thank you Natasha for detailed feedback and for liking it. 😊 I'll try to update soon. 😊

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