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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Wonderful update
Kalpi and Prem was so much in love
I can't wait to know what went wrong

thanks a lot nats..glad u liked 😳
will reveal that soon in further parts..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AshnaLove

Ohh yarr dats wrong u kept us dangling again

Now plzz post nxt part very soon😭
N yes awsm updt as usual😃👏

thanks for appreciating..😳
& it was already so long so couldn't post further..but will update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smile_san

awesome update..continue soon😳

thankyou buddy..😳
i will..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks a lot Everyone for your valuable LIKES & COMMENTS. Do keep supporting me the same way..😳


Part-16

Raghav: But what kalpana??

Kalpi: I guess prem's trust on me was not enough or maybe I should say my Bad Luck played its part again...She said with a sad helpless smile..

*Flashback begins*

Their wedding ceremony started. They both were sitting in mandap. Everyone around was happy seeing these two lovers finally becoming the golden ring in a chain whose beginning is a glance but ending is Eternity- MARRIAGE. They both have exchanged the varmalas. Kalpi was happy more than she had been ever in her entire life but prem was a bit different that day. He didn't smiled even once that day but was constantly looking at his cell-phone as if waiting for someone's call. It was time to take the pheras. PanditJii asked them to stand up. But Prem's complete concentration was in his phone. They both stood. Suddenly Prem got a call, the one he was waiting for so anxiously. He picked it.. "Look..I am not interested in listening in any of your craps.." He replied to the person on other side. "what?? is this the complete truth?? ohh How can I believe you like that.."he said with complete disgust on his face. "If whatever you are saying is wrong, I won't leave you..get that very clear.. " Prem cut the call and just then his phone pinged. he checked his cell-phone and saw something in it which made him completely shocked..

"Come on Prem let's start taking the pheras..." Kalpi asked prem in a loving tone making him aware about there surroundins but got a "NO" in an angry tone from his side...Kalpi could not but only smile. She went near his ears and spoke slowly "its not the right time to joke..its our marriage today..please be a bit serious now...else, I will find someone else for me and I do have a lot of choices..Believe me" she completed her words with a wink trying to tease him which made the anger raging within Prem to cross one more level inside him..

Neetu: come on Prem walk..What are you waiting for..?? his mom asked..

But prem stood there silent as if giving a deaf ear to everyone..After a while, he spoke.. "I AM NOT GOING TO MARRY HER.." the light-happy-chirpy atmosphere of the Mansion quckly turned to a completely tensed one..

Vitthal: what happened beta is everything alright...??

Kamla: did we make any mistake...

kalpi: Ufff.. aai-baba he is just joking..When will you understand your son in law..she said with confidence and forwarded her hand to hold his hand with all authority..This time, he shouted out "ENOUGH...Enough Is Enough..I said I am not going to marry her ever" he said looking angrily towards kalpi.

Sahil (Prem's father): Prem what's wrong with you..??

Prem: yes dad i was wrong...why did i propose this girl...this was the biggest mistake of my life..Saying this, he waved away Kalpi's hand..Hearing his words, kalpi's eyes soon filled up with tears merely due to taking in the reality now which was completely contrast to what she was taking into account. Wiping her tears, she spoke cupping his face with her hands..

kalpi: Prem what are you saying. We love each other so much then why are you doing this...

He removed her hands.. "i always loved you but you never loved me. How big fool I was to think that you love me.." he said with pure anguish and hurt in his voice...

kalpi: what is wrong with you prem. I always loved you...

Prem: no you didn't. It was all fake and now when I have everything clear in front of me, I have to end it all. I dont want to be with you anymore.. "You are just characterless Kalpi...I hate you..i just regret loving a girl like you..go away..i just don't even want to see your face"

Kalpi: Prem please don't do this...please don't say this all..please just...

Prem I have taken my decision. It's over Kalpi. It's all over. We can never be together...He said angrily holding her shoulders..

Kalpi: Prem please stop. We can sit and talk if there's some misunderstanding..

Prem: i don't want to talk to you. maa dad let's go..PLEASE..he removed the varmaala and threw it into fire...

Kamla: please stop beta...

Vitthal: how dare you talk to my daughter like that. What do you think of you saying such words to my raajkumari..

Prem: sorry uncle but i can't marry her..i respect you a lot and still can't believe such a girl can be your daughter but Please don't force me into all this now...after which Prem and his family left. While kalpi sat down broken shouting his name "PREMMM..PREM PLEASE GIVE ME A CHANCE TO EXPLAIN..I LOVE YOU DAMN IT..ONLY YOU.." But prem left from there leaving a broken and hurt kalpi without even turning to look her back one last time..

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Raghav: he didn't even told you any reason Kalpana..?? Kalpi nodded a NO..

Raghav: do you still love him..??

Kalpi: i dont know..

Raghav: will you accept him if he comes back in your life...

Kalpi: Raghav i gave him 5 yrs of my life. Even when he was in abroad, we were always in contact but for now, I don't have answer for this question or maybe it doesn't matter anymore because I know he will never come back...

Raghav: Did you ever met him after that night..??

Kalpi: no because after that he went to abroad...

Saying this she turned towards the window and was silent. Raghav could not see her this way and decided to get old kalpi back. He went to a corner and dialed Mr.Rathore's number "is everything ready...?" "Good job Mr.Rathore, we will be there in half an hour and remember Mr.Rathore no media.." He told Kalpi to get ready as he wanted to her out somewhere. After a lot forcing by raghav, she agreed.

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Raghav was waiting down at the gate turned the other side, when he felt something odd. he turned and found kalpi dressed up in a black saree standing at the corridor ending, the entrance for stairs. Being stunned would be an understatement for him at the moment. Kalpi came down and was looking at him with expecting eyes merely waiting for his compliment but Raghav was still staring at her. "Ahem...Ahem.."she cleared her throat getting him back to his senses.

Raghav: My god..you..(kalpi smiled looking raghav so much surpised seeing her in saree) you girls

take a lot of time to get ready..come on now let's go..Kalpi's smile disappeared and annoyance took its place. While she stood there with her lips making an O'. Raghav forwarded his hand to ask her hand. Kalpi too gave it. When her hand was just about to touch his hand, she took her hand back showing her and then ran from there. Raghav stood there smiling. He then called out her name.

Kalpi stopped and turned in happiness thinking he would now atleast give her a compliment.

"we will be back in 2 hrs..do u have any problem.." he asked wanting to tease her but successfully bringing seriousness in his voice. "No..Absolutely not" kalpi replied steeling back her need of wanting to kill him for not giving her a compliment. Raghav knew that she wanted to hear something good about her outfit but Raghav wanted to tease her more. So he decided to continue this for a bit long while.

Soon they reached the venue. Both of them went in. Kalpi was surprised to see many people inside..

"Raghav so many people are over here. Anything special..??" "yes.. they are hear because they have called..there no fun in partying alone right..?? she nodded agreeing. Raghav then introduced kalpi to everyone present there. they went near the bar counter. Music was played in the back ground. Raghav asked her for a dance and she agreed happily. Later, few other couples too joined them. Soon the song ended. Everyone clapped their hands. everone gave compliments to kalpi and Raghav for their dance.

They left the place as soon as they completed their dinner as kalpi requested because she was feeling sleepy. Raghav was driving and kalpi was feeling the cool breeze caressing her face all over.

On the way back to home, kalpi saw a small ice cream shop...

Kalpi: stop stop stop...Raghav stopped the car...

Raghav: what happened..??

Kalpi: i want to eat ice cream...

Raghav: Kalpana you want to eat this street ice cream..really?? we will eat in some good ice-cream parlour...I know a good ice-cream parlour here nearby..lets go there..

Kalpi: no no no..i want to eat it right now.. here itself..

Raghav: dont act like a kid..i will buy you an icecream there. They have the best varities to offer...believe me you would love it..

He started the car. kalpi was sad and angry too. But raghav was adamant in having ice-cream from that parlour only. But when they reached the icecream parlour. it was already closed.

Raghav: oh freak.. its CLOSED...Raghav thought now toh he was just dead as no one can save him from kalpi's anger..

Kalpi: see i told you.. we should have eaten ice-cream over there only.. but you are you..when will you listen to other's words... saying she looked other side facing window angrily..

Raghav: arey baba how would i know this stupid parlour would be closed...

Kalpi: what was wrong in eating ice-cream over there raghav...

Raghav: oh come on kalpi atleast think about my image and these street parlours do not even maintain hygeine..

Kalpi: ok you keep thinking about your image and hygiene because i am going back to eat ice-cream from that street shop..see you later...

She got down from the car and stood out. Raghav too came out near her. Seeing her actually going, he decided to go to that street parlour only. She agreed and was going to sit when raghav blocked her way. Kalpi stopped looking at him irritatingly. "i have to say something to you..." he said her. "Ohh..finally what...???"

Raghav: you are looking very gorgeous today in this saree...

Kalpi: I know..

Raghav: attitude haan..?? atleast you could have said thanks for the compliment...

Kalpi: thanks..i would have said it but you are too late in complementing because the evening is already over.. now are you coming or should i go alone...

"I am also coming" Raghav said nodding. he made her sit in the car and went to his side to sit. He drove back to that street ice-cream parlour. But When they reached back to the place where they saw that ice-cream parlour, they found that it was was also closed by the time they reached there. Seeing the ice-cream parlour closed, Kalpi gave a cold stair to Raghav.

Raghav: Oops...

Kalpi: see because of you and your so called image and yes how could I forget your hygiene, this shop is also closed..

Raghav: what did i know that by the time we come back this shop would also be closed.

Kalpi was still looking at raghav angrily who too was looking her back cursing his own decisions in his heart, but then realizing how funny the incident was, they both bursted out into a laughter...

To Be Continued...

Here ends the part-16. Do hit LIKE and leave a COMMENT if you actually liked it.

Criticisms and Suggestions are always welcomed..😳

Edited by RockstarNeha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wowww... dats a beautifulll n lovelyyy update dear..
I wanna know wats d reason dat prem left kalpi.. bt anyways ragna moments were sooo cutee n nyc..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww such a cute update. Love them together our cute ragna. Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm neha
hate prem n m sure rags wl clear all mu btwn premna bt upto dem prem wl loss kalpi.😊
Lv ice cream fiasco, he he poor rags
cntn sn
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing update😊
kalpi in saree.. waiting for raghav compliments😳
oh god prem😡, he didn't said the reason..
enjoyed ice cream fight
plz continue soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
That was one beautiful update. I wonder if there was a 'Frenemy' behind Prem leaving Kalpi, but still he should have tried to go behind the matter and confront Kalpi rather than embarrassing her like this! Also, I know Raghav is upto something, whatever it is..hope Ragna bond only grows stronger.
😃 I loved growing friendship n teasing part between Ragna, and what was the party for?? 😉

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