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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
well written update..šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Akroo ask Kalpi to get out from Car..he drove..I think he send taxi for her..save chawl from Prem..I think Raghav can't see tear from Kalpi's eyes..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Make Kalpana to take good revenge on Raghav for leaving her alone in the midway in the night.
Edited by Saanjh26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Saanjh26

Make Kalpana to take good revenge on Raghav for leaving her alone in the midway in the night.

don't worry she willšŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Rags😔 how could u leave my angel on road at midnight .. i want kalpi to take revenge on him ...
liked kalps and rags fight...
akdoo rags cant see kalpi crying...
ā¤ļø flashbacks of ragna ...missing it😭
plz update next chap asap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: sha6611

Rags😔 how could u leave my angel on road at midnight .. i want kalpi to take revenge on him ...

liked kalps and rags fight...
akdoo rags cant see kalpi crying...
ā¤ļø flashbacks of ragna ...missing it😭
plz update next chap asap...

iwill update tomorrow😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
wow, read all updates, super awesome concept...
cannot wait to read more

Saj
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hii guys i'm back with another update i hope u like that šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Part4:

Vithal ,pakya,guari comes downstairs to thanks raghav for saving chwal .kamla also comes there but she become sad when he didn't find her raghav baba there.

While driving.

Sammy: raghav what happen to u why don't u meet ur kamla maa.

Raghav: this is not the right time Sammy.

Raghav pov: ( he is sad after seeing tears in kalpi eyes he like kalpi as khadoos & he like teasing her & fighting with her but now he is feeling something different for her he thinks why pakhi is so close to kamla maa, and what u r doing kamla maa can't u see tears in ur daughter's eyes.

In chwal:

Guari: so u r here, I'm proud of u my daughter, I knew this that u can do anything.

Kalpi:but guari maa, aai never care about this , can't she see that I craved for her love.

Guari:kalpi u know na ur mother is actually not only ur mother but she is mother india so she has to care for whole world, but always neglect u as u r her own blood.

Kalpi:hmm (while laughing on word mother india) u r right guari maa. U know I'm felling hungry, I haven't ate anything from yesterday.

Guari:why, & I noticed that u r irritated & angry. Why, what happened to u.

Kalpi:it's all becoz of that attention seeker.

Guari: attention seeker,

Kalpi:yes u know maa he left me alone midway that too in night, he is heartless jerk but I will make sure that I teach him good lesson for this.

Guari: who is he, I want to meet him & want to give him an earful for troubling my daughter (while cupping kalpi s cheeks).

Kalpi:just leave him, I don't want to talk about him, he is annoying ,well now anyhow I want to buy this chwal so that no one will keep his/her evil eye on our house.

Vithal: ohh so my rajkumari is here, u know I searched u everywhere.

Kalpi: why baba, ab kya hua.

Vithal:are I want to hug my rajkumari as today she saved so many people's house,(placing his hand on her shoulder) I'm so proud of u beta.

Pakya: so it's means we all r going to celebrate today.

Kalpi & guari together yes we will.

Kamla: celebration, for what vithal

Vithal:for kalpi, as becoz of her only we are standing here & our chwal is save.

Pakhi: yes uncle , u r right, so celebration to banta he.

Pakya (irritated with pakhi): baba also said the same thing pakhi.

Pakhi: how rude pakya.

Kamla(yells) pakya is this the way to talk pakhi.

Vithal: leave this ,as we have to do so many things.

They all leave from there.

Kamla: vithal, see this I brought this dress for kalpi, so that she can wear this tonight, tell me hows it.

Vithal:really kamla u brought this for kalpi, ohh my god I can't believe now suddenly u start caring for ur daughter.

Kamla: vithal why r u saying all this.

Vithal: becoz today also u hurt my rajkumari, & I'm telling u kamla if u again did anything like this then no one can save u from my wrath.

Kamla:now what I did vithal.

Vithal: why u hug pakhi today when kalpi is about to hug u, let it be, but then after that u don't even care for her,

Kamla: vithal it's not like that the way u r getting me.

Vithal: ohh plz now I don't need ur justification.

Guari: kamla vithal is right , why the hell u always care for other can't u only care for ur children's only. or u really like to become mahaan so that everyone praise u for ur deeds.

Kamla:it's not like that tai.

Guari: stop it' kamla but let me tell u one thing doesn't hurt kalpi, she is my angel & I can't see tears in her eyes.

And both vithal & guari leave kamla there.

Where Kalpi is getting ready for the function.

Kalpi:maa see me & tell how I m looking today.

Guari: stunning sweetheart, no one can beat u, u r the most beautiful girl on the earth.

Kalpi: maa, plz don't praise me so much otherwise I will be on could nine.

Guari: chal badmaash & go down everyone is waiting for u

Kalpi: & what about u, u r not coming downstairs,

Guari: I will .

Both come downstairs together.

In singhania mansion.

Sammy: ragahv what happen to u are u alright means u look disturbed after coming from chwal. Is everything k.

Raghav: yes Sammy everything k. now tell me I asked u to gather information about kapoor's, so have u done with that.

Sammy: yes Raghav, kapoor's only weakness is their daughter pakhi kapoor she is an apple of their eyes,

Raghav(after hearing pakhi name again he start fuming in anger):hmm pakhi kapoor.

Tell me more about her.

Sammy: raghav, she is graduate & that's all.

Raghav: that's all, nothing more.

Sammy: na nothing becoz I have not seen her doing anything but I had seen her so many times with kamla bai, I think both of them share a strong bond.

Ragahv:gather more information about her & kamla maa relation.

Sammy:ragahv why so sudden u r taking interest in their relation , it's none of our business.

Raghav pov: it's my business becoz of that girl my kalpi is suffering she Is craving for her own mother love, this is the only reason I want to know about her more, I can't tolerate tears in her eyes.i know I can't tell her that I care for her. Becoz I don't want to drag her in all this, so it's better for me that she stay away from me , but I don't why I was pulling towards her.

Sammy: raghav , I asked u something.

Ragahv: ha Sammy what.

Sammy: nothing raghav I think u need rest becoz of long night journey.

In morning:

Kalpi get ready to go for office,

Kamla:kalpi beta, wait (handing her tiffin)take this.

Guari: kalpi beta take ur tiffin(after seeing kamla she stop in btw)

Kalpi:guari maa , what u made for me today.

Guari: aloo paratha.

Kalpi: ohh aloo ka paratha it's my fav, plz give me my tiffin , I'm getting late.

Kalpi leaves from there she didn't take kamla's tiffin & by this kamla is disappointed.

Guari smile & say drive save dear, where kamla is disappointed by her daughter gesture for not taking her tiffin.

kalpi is driving her car again someone hit her car from behind.

Kalpi:not again, by saying this she jump out from her car,

She looks at her cars back & then at the men who is standing there.

After seeing that men she exclaimed tum, now I really want to know who on the earth give u ur driving license.

And that man is none other than raghav, but this time Sammy is also with him.

Sammy: Sorry, kalpana it's my fault.

Kalpi: I don't know why on the earth u people get license for driving,when u don't even know the A of this.

Raghav: ohh shut up miss jhadhav, u r responsible for this.

Kalpi can't take this anymore, ok so now u r telling me that I did this right.

Raghav: yes.

Kalpi: so mr. singhania In advance I'm really sorry, for this , & for that also which I'm going to do.

Sammy & raghav both r confused.

Where kalpi bend & pick up one stone from ground and throw that stone on rags car, becoz of that stone his car front mirror break.

Sammy & raghav both are stunned with her action.

Kalpi turn to face them

Give them mischievous smile.

Kalpi: so mr. singhania as I already said sorry to u so now. There is no need for me to repeat it again.& now u can blame me for this, becoz this time I'm responsible.

Kalpi drove from there.

Kalpi : this is my second car hits by him.& what I did Is right he really need that but not only this still he has to pay for that night.

Sammy:raghav, .

Raghav: bak Sammy (looking at his car mirror).

Sammy: she is amazing yaar I love her.

Raghav: what she is amazing & u love her. Now It's seems that u lost ur mind somewhere.

Sammy: ohh hoo raghav I mean I love her attitude; she is a female version of ur.

Raghav: shut up Sammy, & call driver ask him to send another car.

After that incident for whole week Raghav & kalpi never come face to face.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

im first to comment
wow wonderful updatešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘..
kamala - mother india i cant stop laughing🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
common kalpi, show him what u are..
ā­ļø loved it...

Edited by sha6611 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
awsom updt
good tht vithal and gauri give reality check to kamla
ragav is worried fr kalpana
and sammy ,ragav hit kalpi car and in order kalpi broke the mirror and say sorry
aawsom
loevd it
cont soon
and pm me fr nxt

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