When love clashes -New FF (RagNa) Part 18 Pg 142 25/9

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: idonkno

Haha!! And whenever I get a chance I just open IF on my phone to see if you commented or not. i can't explain but your comment just brings a huge smile on my face!! Trust me on this 😉

Gosh ... it seems we are obsessed of each other's comments😆😆

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idonkno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: mariee

Gosh ... it seems we are obsessed of each other's comments😆😆

God save us 😉😆

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Megha

@ForeverFabulous

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Posted: 11 years ago

#763

Ok wow! I disappear from IF for a couple of days and I miss three chapters! Pretty woman, next time instead of PM-ing me, send me a tweet! 😆 But sorry for reading the updates so late, World Cup really messed up my sleep schedule! But all is well now and yayyy GERMANY! And Messi got the Golden Ball so I don't feel bad for Argentina either!

Anyways, coming back to the FF, chapter 12 started amazingly and I was glad that despite the development in feelings, Raghav simply asked to be her friend and that she accepted. Even more I loved the fact that Kalpi realized her love before Raghav! 😉

But the twist, I did not see coming! While I understand the father's behavior the least I expected from Raghav was the courtesy of speaking/meeting Kalpi before leaving. Not that he knew that Kalpi had overheard the conversation between him and his father but still...

And so your twists don't really stop there! 😆 Kalpi has moved to the States... And who does she end up meeting, Raghav of course... The world is indeed a small place...

And you ended off with a new Munda in the picture... Nice! I really hope it's a new Munda and not her brother or cousin! 😛 I love jealous Raghav! 😉

Chalo, continue soon... 🤗

Edited by ForeverFabulous - 11 years ago

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#764

Sorry for the late comment but here it goes😆:
Part 13:
You showed the development of Kalpana's feelings for Raghav perfectly in your story. Hats off to you for that since you have written it so beautifully.
It's sad that on the very day Kalpana realized her love for Raghav she was heartbroken. Although, I am sure you will unite Raghav and Kalpana soon.😳
Raghav was kind of rude and I hope Kalpana doesn't forgive him too easily.😆
Part 14:
New guy with Kalpana..sounds interesting.😊 Wondering what Raghav will do now.😆

You're a fab writer. Although, I told you how your story was, I am no one to judge your work. It's TOO GOOD!!! Now, I am waiting to read what will happen next so continue as soon as possible. 😃

Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago

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idonkno

@idonkno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: ForeverFabulous
Ok wow! I disappear from IF for a couple of days and I miss three chapters! Pretty woman, next time instead of PM-ing me, send me a tweet! 😆 But sorry for reading the updates so late, World Cup really messed up my sleep schedule! But all is well now and yayyy GERMANY! And Messi got the Golden Ball so I don't feel bad for Argentina either!

Anyways, coming back to the FF, chapter 12 started amazingly and I was glad that despite the development in feelings, Raghav simply asked to be her friend and that she accepted. Even more I loved the fact that Kalpi realized her love before Raghav! 😉

But the twist, I did not see coming! While I understand the father's behavior the least I expected from Raghav was the courtesy of speaking/meeting Kalpi before leaving. Not that he knew that Kalpi had overheard the conversation between him and his father but still...

And so your twists don't really stop there! 😆 Kalpi has moved to the States... And who does she end up meeting, Raghav of course... The world is indeed a small place...

And you ended off with a new Munda in the picture... Nice! I really hope it's a new Munda and not her brother or cousin! 😛 I love jealous Raghav! 😉

Chalo, continue soon... 🤗

I will keep in mind to send you a tweet rather than PM 😉😆 Yes!! GERMANY won and they deserved it 😊🥳

Well see from his POV - he even did not ever call his mother on his birthdays (As he knew she would cry and he can not see her crying). He is not good with emotions and hence his dialogue - I do not want to get attached to Kalpana 😉 (when he talks to Sammy)

Every update that I will post now will be have a certain transition in it as I really do not want to keep dragging the story.

Destiny always has something stored in for us (mostly unexpected). Same is the case with Raghav and Kalpana too!! 😆😉

Not really thought about the character of the new guy yet 😉 But, I assure you will not be disappointed 😆

Thanks Megs 🤗!!

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idonkno

@idonkno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: Pookhi
Sorry for the late comment but here it goes😆:
Part 13:
You showed the development of Kalpana's feelings for Raghav perfectly in your story. Hats off to you for that since you have written it so beautifully.
It's sad that on the very day Kalpana realized her love for Raghav she was heartbroken. Although, I am sure you will unite Raghav and Kalpana soon.😳
Raghav was kind of rude and I hope Kalpana doesn't forgive him too easily.😆
Part 14:
New guy with Kalpana..sounds interesting.😊 Wondering what Raghav will do now.😆

You're a fab writer. Although, I told you how your story was, I am no one to judge your work. It's TOO GOOD!!! Now, I am waiting to read what will happen next so continue as soon as possible. 😃

My Pookha 🤗!! Where did you disappear? I missed you so much 😳 I am speechless after reading your comment as always 😳 Happy to know that you are liking the new developments in the story 😃 Love you so much *muah*

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Megha

@ForeverFabulous

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Posted: 11 years ago

#767

RES! 😃

Me first?! 😲 🤣

UNRES! 😳

Kalpi is Prem's fiancee?! Nahiii! Prem toh sirf mera hai! 😡 🤣 Yeh kya kar diya Pretty woman?! Why didn't you ask me?! 🥺

Okok, jokes aside! Me loved it! I'm really glad that Raghav and Kalpi had their confrontation! If not that misunderstanding would have caused more problems! Now that the petty matter is solved and Raghav knows how Kalpi feels, he'll be able to tackle the REAL issue at hand. Obviously realising his love for Kalpi and making her his!

Prem ka kya hai? He'll come back to me only! 😳 🤣

Chalo, continue soon!

P.S: I sincerely apologise for the birthday thread and other gifts! I was really sick yesterday hence spent the entire day sleeping away! I'm sowwie! 😭

Edited by ForeverFabulous - 11 years ago