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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Nice dear. I wish CVs would have proceeded this way!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
nice parts
but gosh, pookie is so bloody annoying...😡
I have no words for kamla either🤬
I just want raghav-kalpana to be together n happy😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
its sweet yaar..n u still make pakhi gud in this ff...i already consider her as a wall between ragna...hmm...never mind her...i luv raghav here...he stood up for wht he believe...thts in his love kalpi...aaawww...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
uff i am running so late awesome updates dear loved both of them👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ gudiya, amy, natasha,anjinie, rosy,chahat,mysticriver,mihika,autumn...thanks a ton
Thank you all who liked this part

I started off trying to paint Poo in a positive light, but after tonight's episode, i am so upset with her feeding Raghav cake and applying sindoor, that she is back to being negative...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 9
" no Paakhi beta" , cried Kamala, " do not do this. You are acting in haste. Marriage is not a dress that you fancy for a day and then remove and cast it aside when you want to. It is a lifelong commitment that you have to honour. You have to go on ,no matter what the difficulties. And one day,he will accept you."
" when Kamalama," questioned Paakhi," after a lifetime? i do so not see it happening in the near future. And even then what? Will it be really worth the wait? I would have sacrificed my youth for a person who would have wasted it pining for someone else. You want me to continue wearing the dress even though it is soiled, it stinks. Where is the question of honour, without love? Love forms the basis of any long term relationship. When there is no love ,how can one honour the person, Kamalama? Raghav has not even an iota of love for me. His heart is filled with disgust for me. All the love has been taken by Kalpi. I think it is gods way of punishing me. All through childhood, i snatched you away from her,many times just because I was jealous of your love for her. I denied her her mother's love. Now justice has been done. God has shown me how much she would have hurt. By making the one person i love the most in the world, reject me and choose her, I have been made to realise my mistake"
" no Paakhi," said Kamala, " i will speak to Kalpi. She will listen to me. Do not lose heart."

" but can you make Raghav listen? Can you make his errant heart forget Kalpi and love me? No, love is not a switch that can be turned off at will. Just as I will always love Raghav, he will forever Love Kalpi. We are the two banks of a river. Our lives can never meet. It is not worth it. You have taught me never to take what does not belong to me. i did it covertly from childhood. I took you away from her. But not once again. I cannot do it. For raghav. His happiness lies in me setting him free. I'm sorry ,but just this once, I cannot listen to you" . So saying she ran out.

Do not put down this sudden change of heart to her goodness. Kamala had kept the events of that night a secret from all except the family. Though neetu smelt something wrong, she was unable to put a finger on it. However, the truth was out during one of her arguments with Vitthal. No sooner than Neetu heard it, she informed Pookhi. Now they had enough grounds to sue Raghav. He had also committed bigamy. Despite always being thought of as an empty headed girl, paakhi was not so. She knew when the battle was lost. She decided to take the first step...by doing so ,at least she would not lose face. She would end up the martyr, earn some brownie points and would be able to take away the sheen from Kalpi's halo. For it still irked her that Raghav had told her Kalpi was one of a kind...there was none like her. Well, she would show him,even she was capable of magnanimity. By sacrificng her love. She would prove her love for him was greater than Kalpi's. but with this ulterior motive,would this qualify as a selfless act of love?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Interesting let's c what happens next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful update as usual!! An act done purely to get in the good books of others will never be selfless cos u end up expecting certain reactions!! and when u wont get those reactions , u end up deeply hurt and bitter!!..in this case by the so called sacrificing love may paint her as an angel in Kammu's eyes but I bet Raghav wont bat an eyelid!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 10
" what else could I have done ,Maya?", said Kalpi." I waited ,for his love to gain the upper hand ,his mother to soften,but there seems to be no sign of it. I always thought love conquers all. If he truly loves me, why is he not able to put aside those negative emotions ? With so much ill will in our mind ,how can one love? How can we move on if we do not bury the past? How can I build a future ,with him in a dilemma? It is tough ,but he has to choose. It cannot go on. Paakhi may not be my favourite, but how can I see a woman being abused for no fault of hers? At the end of a year, how are the crimes absolved? It was very difficult to tell him this. But I thought somebody needed to talk hard. I saw the pain he underwent as my words sliced through him..i knew it hurt, but for the greater good it had to be done"
Maya squeezed her hands. " you know ,kalpi we first met Raghav as a morose,serious guy in college. Despite this, we three struck a chord . The first time I saw Raghav smile , behaving like a goofy teenager was when he confessed his love for you. When you accepted it, he was in seventh heaven. Sammyand I were thankful that the happiness which had always eluded him was finally his. But at the nth hour, he went and dug his grave. Raghav will always be special to me, but over these months ,I have developed such a liking for you ,itsurprises me. I want to see the two of you happy. But also remember, in whatever decision you take , you are not alone. I 'm with you. You do not even have to tell me what it is. Cos i know my Kalpi can do no wrong. Im your family and friend,Kalpi ,now and always. And she hugged her.

Kalpi was shocked to see Kamala standing at the doorstep.

" aayi"

" i have come on behalf of my daughter Paakhi. In fact, if it wasn't for her, i would not even have known where you are. Since her happiness is paramount to me, I have put aside my principles to talk to you. Despite everything, you have shamelessly been meeting Raghav over the last few months...who knows what else? You are a slur on our family name. A blemish that I can never erase. But I came to tell you this. Give up Raghav for Paakhi and I will take you back into the family, no questions asked. Promise me that you will forget Raghav and you can come back to stay with us. I will try to forget all your black deeds. I will forgive you for shattering my dreams, if you help Paakhi achieve hers"

Kalpi closed her eyes. The last vestige of hope was lost. Her mother had never trusted her. In any matter concerning her,she had never bothered to get into the heart of it, never asked her side of the story...it was always presumed that Paakhi's version was right. Today she had cast aspersions on her character. Though she had not said it in so many words,. Kalpi recognised a hopeless situation. Today she realised she was really alone. They who thought ill of you, how could they be family? Was not family the first to support yiu? Even now, her aayi had not asked her about herself. It had been her and Paakhi's dreams.

" many years ago Paakhi wanted a pen that you made me give up. During the ring ceremony , you slapped me ,not for loving R aghav ,but because Paakhi loved him. You did not see the love between the two of us...you were more interested in safeguarding Paakhi and heartbreak. What was an easy decision, you complicated it. It needed Shail aunty to make you see sense. What if bappa had not chosen me? Yet despite all this, when Raghav betrayed me, i was worried about you, about your reputation. You never asked me what happened that night at the temple but threw me aside. You presumed just as you are presuming now. Never for your claims of loving me ,have you asked me my side of the story,my wishes my dreams...

Anyway that is water under the bridge. Raghav is not a commodity like a pen for me to take or give. He is a man with a free will to do what he wants. I cannot dictate his actions. But yes, let me assure you that I have told him he has no right to spoil Paakhi's life."

Kamala presumed that Kalpi had told Raghav to patch up with Paakhi. Her face was all smiles. She knew her daughter would not do anything wrong. In her happiness for Paakhi, she did an about turn in her behaviour with Kalpi.

Kalpi just asked her to leave. Turning ,she walked away sadly. Much as it hurt her, she knew that this was a chapter in her life which was closed. It could never be rewritten or read again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
loved it yaar...
i like kalpi's stand...
she deservers to be happy...
continue soon...

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