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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: chahat4u

wow...glad Raghav didn't return to his home, at his mother's command! Hope Raghav proves himself right this time in Kalpi's eyes, for their love.


Yes giving him a chance to redeem himself. Hopefully cvs do the same
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

This Pakhi is so desperate
Trying to kill herself to get sympathy, it's disgusting
RagNa sitting together just looking at each other was amazing
Kalpi speaking her heart felt feelings out to Raghav was superb
Everything she said was bang on
I only hope Raghav make the right decision now
Beautiful update, I love it


Thank you for your comments
Raghav will take the right decision,no worries
Am not making him a zero like the CVs
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: amy.r

Well written!! Raghav, u r being given a chance...better not mess it up !! and thanx 4 a ***** free update!! 😊

Thanks
Sorry dear next update has she who must not be named
Try as I might cannot leave her out
But dont worry will give a severe bashing before my FF ends.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumm

its great dear...thk u so much...waitg for the next update...🤗


Thanks autumn
Next one updated.
Sorry for a short one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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To all my friends who have taken time to read my FF, hit the like button and comment,a big thank you. It is the tonic that keeps me going
Part 7
" chocopie," said Neetu," how on earth could you think of taking such a drastic step? Did you even stop to think of what would have happened to us there after? We would have spent the rest of our lives rotting in the chawl,with you gone. And why should you suffer? You should make Raghav and that Gauri pay. Listen to me ,it is still not too late. File for a divorce."

" shut up, Neetu," screamed Paakhi. She cursed Kamala for passing on this news to Neetu. Now she had to listen to truckloads of nonsense.

" but,chalo,muffin," Neetu went on,unaffected," one good thing might come out of this. Some amount of pity would be there towards you in both their hearts now."

Paakhi laughed.Pity? Gauri had been very vocal in her reaction,had she not ? And Raghav, had neither come near her nor enquired of her well being. So much for concern or pity.



" paakhi beta," chided Kamala," why did you take this extreme step? Did you even stop for a second to think what would have happened to me? Did I bring you up with so much love to see this day?

" what can I do Kamalama? I was so frustrated. Did you know that Kalpi still meets Raghav? Where is my hope?"

" Do not utter that s**t's name to me. She is a slur on our family. I have long considered her dead. You are my only daughter. Remember,it will take time but ultimately Raghav will outgrow his obsession for Kalpi. He will come back to you. That is the power of marriage."

As kamala told this to Paakhi,never once id she stop to think of the true love of Ragna nor the fact that in their minds,they too had wedded...they had been married with God as witness.



" No raghav," screamed Gauri," i will not agree to you setting Paakhi free. The kapoors must pay"

" but mom," pleaded Raghav, " how is this a revenge? We have brought them to the roads. But do you really think they are upset with Paaki suffering. The detective I hired told me that he has traced the group who were hand in glove with Saahil in all his nefarious activities. By getting them to confess ,we can put the Kapoors behind bars. Will that not be punishment enough? Loss of wealth and loss of prestige?"

But Gauri was adamant. No amount of reasoning would make her soften her stand. Raghav was frustrated." Enough mom," he screamed, " I cannot take it any more. I have made my decision. Now you have to decide whether you want your son by your side or stay alone the rest of your life ,boiling in the fire of your revenge. It is not only consuming me, but poor kalpi,for no fault of hers. If you choose to come with me,your bitterness will be erased by the sweetness of Kalpi's nature. We will know only happiness if she is with us. Think it over". He stormed out.

Three mothers ...each claimimg to love their offspring. Yet each of their love was so different. While one's love for wealth surpassed that of hers for her child,the other's love for revenge gained precedence over all. The third mother's love for sticking by the rules of the society made her blind to her daughter's agony...was it really love that advised her to hold onto a loveless relationship?

Edited by bhaironnath - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Part 8
Paakhi had overheard Raghav's discussion with his mother. Finally the bitter truth dawned on her. Raghav would never accept her. His love for Kalpi was so deep that he had even decided to sever ties with his mother for her. She saw the fondness with which he spoke of Kalpi. She realised that he never would ever behave that way with her.

The devil in Paakhi stood before her. It urged her not to give up. It made her recollect the incident in childhood when she had desired the pen. Kamala was Kalpi's weakness,it said. Kalpi will do anything for her aayi. And you have her on your side. Use her to get what you want. You want Raghav. Just as Kamala gave you the pen,get her to make Kalpi give you Raghav.

" but what would you achieve by that?, "questioned her conscience. " how long will you wait for him,five years,ten years,a lifetime. And even then do you think it will happen? Are you not deluding yourself? Did you not see the extent of his love for Kalpi? It seems to increase in magnitude with each passing day. By separating them, you will only make him more miserable. Do you want him to suffer? Is that what you call love for him?"

While Paakhi was waging an inner war , there was another person too who was in a dilemma. She had burned in her desire for revenge too long to give up the idea overnight. Yet the thought of losing her son was paining her. She knew he was serious this time. No histrionics on her part would make him reverse his decision. " what do you want Gauri? A future with your son and his family or a life embittered by revenge spent all alone." She asked herself. For a minute,she had a fleeting glimpse of a happy family,of Raghav and Kalpi playing with their children, of her with her grandchildren in her arms. Just the thought felt like bliss, then how would be the reality,she questioned. At the very moment ,she saw Sahil murdering her husband in her mind's eye...she would not falter from her chosen path,she decided. "Without your son..." Mocked a voice," what is more important to you? You or your son? And you claim to love him?"
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Much needed reality check for the Gauri and the other girl!!👏 I had mentioned it in another post that Raghav instead of succumbing to his mom's wishes should stand up to her "Mom, smell the coffee!! I never refused taking revenge!! But its my way or the highway!!"...Now the sooner Kammu gets a knock on the head, the better!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh that was amazing, nice to see Raghav stand up to his mother and also the realization of both Pakhi & Gauri. Hope they both choose the right path.
Everyone should leave Kamala especially Pakhi that will teach that wicked woman a lesson.

Please do update soon, really enjoying this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
very interesting update...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
I love how Raghav stand up to his mother
It's about time
This damn delusional Pakhi again need to get a life
Beautiful update

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