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bhaironnath

@bhaironnath

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: appyK

Loved it..atlast the meant to be..people are together thank god kamla got a reality check..
As for ema i too have lost all hopes of getting ragna back as cv's are so obsessed with paakhi and vithla..thank god we have ff's that show Ragna union..👏👏
Awesome update..

Thanks appyK

Though was tempted to inflict physical violence on dumbla,restrained myself with just Raghavs mockery

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bhaironnath

@bhaironnath

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: pop77
Nice part..Atleast you give us Ragna marriage..show Kamla reality..I am wishing in the show happen same way which you wrote Ragna marriage..
Not stop writing..

Thanks

I am sure all these will never happen in the show

After all the show is about Kamala and her love for POo

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bhaironnath

@bhaironnath

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: chahat4u
oh dear I looved this part! 👏 😃 this is d way to go, venting out our frustrations and anger positively in our FFs, etc.😃 I loved Raghav mocking Kamla Maa.😆 😉😃

Thanks chahat. Was really frustrated after yesterday...am still to recovering from the effect

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bhaironnath

@bhaironnath

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Part14

Maya and Sammy had booked a honeymoon suite for the two of them. As Kalpi stood by the mirror, knotting her fingers in nervousness, Raghav walked upto her. Turning her around, he gently kissed her forehead, then her palms. As he began removing each article of jewellery, he would lay a gentle kiss there...her ears, her neck , her fingers, her wrist and finally her navel. As Kalpi moaned, he placed a lovebite on her neck. Kalpi could bear it no longer. She pulled his face and planted a kiss on his lips. As he took over, she opened her mouth willingly for him to explore. For tonight there would be no secrets between them.

As they dispensed with the last barriers, raghav promised himself that no matter what his desires were, he would place Kalpi foremost. Hand in hand that night, they entered a new world,hitherto unvisited. As Raghav led on,Kalpi followed willingly. Together they explored and discovered the most intimate secrets , both were unaware of. It was the most beautiful night ,where they had embarked on a voyage that would last all their lives. Mentally long ago they had become one...on this night, Raghav and kalpana ceased to exist. From that moment on,they were Ragna in every sense.

It was late afternoon when Raghav opened his eyes. He smiled. It felt so good to wake up to the warmth of your love by your side. It had been dawn when finally sleep had caught up with them. He grinned as he thought about the night. Kalpi...as usual she had been brilliant ,as in everything else. He had thought he should concentrate on making it memorable for her, his satisfaction would come later. Who would have thought that a novice would have been such a quick learner...by the end ,he was like putty in her hands. Many a time ,each had woken to check for the other, to confirm that it was not a dream. He admired her as she slept peacefully with a contented smile on her face.

The next two days were sheer bliss. It was like they were cocooned in their own world.Sammy and Maya had ensured there were no disturbances. If they had thought they knew each other, they were both surprised to realise there was much more to know. It was proving to be an interesting journey. Raghav was worried about Kalpi relocating...he assured her that she would be happy over there. She could even work there. But he said,on one condition...hers should be the first face he should glance into when he awoke and the last to see before he slept. Kalpi, in turn , reassured him that she would be happy anywhere ,as long as he were by her side ,all her life.

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bhaironnath

@bhaironnath

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Epilogue

It was with a strange mixture of tears and smiles that Sammy and Maya bid their two closest friends farewell. They wer happy at the obvious love and joy on both Raghav and Kalpanas face. Now that they were one, there was no further need for them for keep it locked away. It shone so brilliantly for all to see. Sadness at the thought of separation.As maya and Kalpi hugged each other emotionally, Maya promised to visit them soon.

As they were seated in the plane, an airhostess presented Kalpi with a bouquet of red roses...a card read...thank you Kalpana for giving me my dreams, for helping me realise them, for just being there...love you now and always...Raghav.

Kalpi thought she could not be happier,but with each passing moment Raghav was proving her wrong. She seemed to be constantly crying these days...except they were tears of joy. Thank ou Raghav for your love , thank you for entering my life.

As they hugged each other, the old couple in the adjacent seat relived their love story. After a long time ,they were seeing images of their youth . Thy knew that these two would make it through all the storms of life together, never leaving the other,each being the other one's support. They sighed seeing this young love. For they knew it was the beginning of a journey of discovery filled with bliss.

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Oh gee!! I got so emotional reading the last chapter and the epilogue
RagNa are together and no one can separate them now
Beautiful ending
I enjoy reading your work. RagNa journey towards happiness was a rollercoster but their love and trust in each other won in the end