RagNa OS: A Lover's Touch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Loved it, wht a sensual story. Write more soon

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leelu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

wow its amazing sensuous yet filled with so much love of ragna for each other, loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Amazing. You are a really good writer.

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mehfooza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Its.wonderfull.
What to say...iam speachless.
Dear writes some more os like this.
I would love to read.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: babydolll
reswa 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: ArlequinAJ
res

Still waiting for you both to unres

Originally posted by: sarusmiley
omg😳😳😳😳😳😳
i left twitter and cc compltely and stuck here..
what a post...
raz i read many posts of urs..but od first time..
and i must tell u...till now this is the best OS..i have ever read..ur words and explanation perfect...wow...really a writer by heart...
fan bangaya hoon😊😊😊😊😊😊jhappies and puppies😊

Ahahahaha, I remember. Yes it is the first time where I decided to post something related to writing. Oh wow, thank you so much. Ahaha, I've heard that many times but it never gets old. Aww, thank you baby. Jhappies and puppies to you too.

Originally posted by: drdee142
You made my day, I was feeling so down and dejected totally having given up on Ragna and EMA & I read this amazing piece of work.
Thanks for this it was beautiful, I really wish this was what we actually got in EMA. I too was such a big fan of Raghav and the Ragna chemistry is magic, such a pity the creative team decided to destroy this gem 😒

Excellent 👏

Dee

Thanks Dee! That's a sweet thing to say. I know, how I wish too but alas, we can't. Not until they decide to bring back RagNa.

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond
Wow!!! Amazing!!! That was a beautiful OS!! Raz you live up to your name!! Such love from raghav!! Showing Kalpi how much he loves her! The way he touches her i can only imagine! This is too good!! It made my evening!! 😉 10 points!!

Thanks Dianne! Ahahaha, heard that before and it never fails to please me. He's the romantic hero that I oh so adore. Yes his touches I'm already obsessed with. Thanks babe! Muah!

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Oh my..what a passionate, hot & dreamy OS!!! and I enjoyed like hell. So, its dedicated to Raghav (Ashish's) sensuous touches, and if I may add so, his sensuous gazes also!!! ☺️ ☺️ I totally agree with each and every word you said about him...going weak in knees! I am so addicted to him!!! You really lived up t that dedication in this Part of OS!!! 👏
BTW...how does Kalpi even survive so much of pleasure!!! 😳😆 😃

OS was awesome. 😊😃👏

Thank you. I had to keep it in mind not to make it 18+ so many times. Everything about his is sensuous. I know right! I swear I go all blush blush when he's touching Kalpi on screen. Ahaha, thanks. I don't know but damn she is a lucky woman!

Originally posted by: atulya1
Now who told you it was long??? I never wanted it to end.. Amazing, amazing Raz... Beautiful... What you write is actually poetry in motion.

That is the most sweetest thing anyone has ever said to me. Truly a very sweet thing to say sweetheart. It was long because I got carried away with the OS 😆. But I'm so glad you liked it!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Mihika
its awesome dear 👏and i can very well understand ur frustration over pakhi😛

Thanks! Frustration? More like resentment. 😆

Originally posted by: manikarnikaa
res

Originally posted by: manikarnikaa
thank u razz poo ko nahi laya thumne

Originally posted by: manikarnikaa
ek dum___________😉
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thanks baby!

Originally posted by: meena.mva
Aww...it was just breathtaking...beautifully writen...mind blowing feel...awsome...fabulous...cudnt stop reading it once again... 😊

Wow, thanks. Hope you liked it even when you read it the second time!

Originally posted by: Sanjuniki
What a beautiful piece of writing.👏👏👏
Even if RAGNA doesnt happen in the show, i will watch their engagement scene and read your write up and assume our RAGNA lived happily ever after. THE END.

Thanks! Ahahaha, I'm sure RagNa will happen. There will be hurdles but in the end they have to give us what we want. Khalas.

Originally posted by: Treasures
Wow! Beautifully done! So sensuous and yet so pure! 👏

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Autumm
u juz make me alive again...im smiling again...thk u after todays epiof ema..this is juz awww...amazing...really...👍🏼

Ahaha, your welcome! Glad you liked it so much!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: AshVarna
OMGGG this is one of the best stories I have read in the forum ...thanks for the wonderful write up 🤗
RES !

Aww thank you! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Rozy77
omg, this was absolutely beautiful, hot and so so passionate ⭐️😳☺️
ohh I just lovedd it😃😃
it felt so good to read something on our raghav-kalpana... am missing them so much In the show..
agree with every word about ashish... I simply adore that man
ur an awesome writer 👏, do write more in future
take care

Ahaha, had to remind myself not to get too carried away. I know yaar, same here. Ashish is Ashish. No one can compare to him. Thank you hun, will definitely write more.

Originally posted by: Anjinie
it was beautiful

Thanks!

Originally posted by: jass1
raz jst fab dear... m shrt of wrds to describe it... 😊

so beautifully written, bst os i read here... me toh urs huge fan nw...😳

d way u expressd rags nd his feelins fr kalpi... outstanding...

luvd it...

keep writing... 😳

Aww Jass baby! Thanks so much! Ahaha, meri fan? Thode dinon ke baad you'll be beating me with a stick. Thank you once again jaani, love you!

Originally posted by: incredible96
i am in awe! u r a fab writer! got to say one of my favourites from this forum!! and trust me i have many favourites os/ff/ss writers! and how could you apoligise for it being so long!? :O i wouldnt have minded if it was even longer! i could just keep praising and praising your style of writing! the way you describe every single detail is just amazing! you have honestly left me speechless! from the bottom of my heart i thank you so so so so sooo much for writing this! and please do pm me any fruther work you do :)

I am in awe reading your comment. Thank you so much love! Ahaha, some people get annoyed if it's too long that's why I apologised in advance so I wouldn't have to apologise individually. Longer? Girl, I would've been dead writing more. Aww, that's so sweet. For leaving you speechless you have said more than enough darling. And from the bottom of my heart I thank you for such an encouraging comment. If you've buddied me and now have left me a note, PMs will reach you.

Originally posted by: foram.
loved it...beautifully written... so romantic 😳 pls write more on RagNa. now this os ffs are our sahara

Thanks you! Will definitely write more when the muse kicks up again.

Originally posted by: Hanz91
Awesome OS!
Well Wrtttwn👏

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Wow and wow!!!
I'm enthralled by your work
This was beyond captivating
Love the way you expresses RagNa love for each other
It was very romantic...
Raghav can't get enough of his beautiful wife ;)
Kalpi shyness is too cute
Raghav bought such a meaningful gift for his wife and himself
I love what the rings signifies
I love the entire OS
Please continue to write more Phenomenal stuff on our RagNa :)

So sweet! Glad you liked it so much. I had to keep in mind not to get too carried away, lol. The rings have been a personal favorite of mine since I was young. I'd seen my Dad give it to my Mom for their anniversary and I've been in love with them since. Will definitely continue soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: vasishna
Its amazng romantic beautifulll lovelyyy n no more words to explain ur os.. I loved it d peaks..👏😳😉

Aww, thank you!

Originally posted by: AARMAY1
awesome, lovely, beautiful, well written

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ForeverFabulous
RES! I HAVE TOO MUCH TO SAY!

Aur isiliye abhi tak res kara hua hai! Jaldi kar, dil mein kuchh mat rakh..not good for health you see.

Originally posted by: aishu_25
Omg!☺️ Itna Romance haaayeee. Awesome is the word! I just loved it! Waiting for more!

Thank you sweety.

Originally posted by: samy18
speechless somebody please pinch me i m dead after reading this ,👏👏👏👏words can never describe the beauty of this shot its truly amazing and awesome i m spell bound by your writing it is one of the best os i have ever read and we are lucky that you are writing on ragna in this forum and thank u so much for this piece of writing love u a lot

Call the medics ! Help help! Lol. Whoa, I hope your not otherwise I would be in a buck load of trouble. Thank you so much for such kind words. Love you too sweetie!

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
Oh my this is bloody awesome, had me reeling
Thanks for sharing the fantastic OS 🤗

Thank you! Ahaha, no problem. Love you!

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
wow what an amazing writer u r this part is really sensual and. nice

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: appyK
Loved it..u r definitely an awesome writer..
Would love to read othr stories from u..do pm me..

Thank you! If you've left me a note here and buddied me, then PMs will be coming your way until you tell me to stop.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Wow, I m still blushing n grinning like an idiot!

Ahahahahahaha, don't blush so much my cherry tomato!

Originally posted by: Honey2007
I thought maine bhi res kiya tha... 🤣

OMG just fabulous Razz, I am short of words...really really really well done, you are so talented yaaron👍🏼

Keep it up!

🤣 🤣 Tu bhi na. Well I'm glad you liked it jaani. Talented I'm not, just lucky I guess. Thank you baby!