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me: chapter 1=page 1
the amazing Angelpureness :chapter 2=page 3
chapter 1:
This OS is based on the part where Gauri is burning everything, BUT in this Raghav is unaware of that and is busy in Kalpana's thoughts.
If you guys read my comment on the live update about Gauris bachpan ka pyar saving Gauri, then you will know the name of that person...
ENTER...CHANDU : he is a postman...(not chandu mama! lol 😆 ) and when he was little he and gauri fell in love. but gauris parents made her get married to raghavs dad, who she had a child with but who never loved and thought of as a best freind! Therefore she thought it was necessary for getting Kapoors punished for what they did to Raghav and his Dad. she has always loved chandu , but never saw him after he left to train as a professional postman😉😆 as he never came back she thought that he forgot about her, but he never did! Iss chakar meh he never got married. he is a bit like the stranger uncle who was sharing his sorrows with raghav a few epis ago.
okay so enough of chandus past, lets talk about his present now, so here goes and i hope you enjoy it! and sorry for the typ errors!😊 😳
SCENE 1: GAURI'S BEDROOM
GAURI: teek hai Raghav, jee lo tum apni zindagi, mai yahi mar jati ho apni best friend ki yaadon ko jalake. kaash meh ik baar apne bachpan ke pyar chandu ko mil pati. kaha ho tum chandu. mai tumhe bohot yaad karte ho! ab tu tumhare shaadi bhi hoi hogi, aur tum muje bhul gaye hoge. lekin mai tumhe kabhi nahi buhl payi.
(its okay raghav, live your life, i will just die here with the memories of my best friend. i wish i could just once meet my childhood love chandu. where are you , i miss you a lot chandu.you have probably got married now and have forgotten me, but i have never forgotten you)
*SOBS AND SETS PICS ON FIRE WITH HER IN MIDDLE*
SCENE 2: LIVING ROOM
RAGHAV: *thinking about kalpi* kalpi muje maaf kar do. mai janta ho ki maine tumhara barosa tura hai, lekin paaki se shaadi karne zaroori tha mujko. apni leyeh aur apni mom dad ki leye. lekin ab mai sab set kar do ga (forgive me kalpi, i know i have broken your trust, but it was neccessary for me to get married to pakhi, for my me, my mom and mydad. but i will sort everthing out now)...*thinking*...HAAN! mai paakhi ko divorce deta ho aur kalpi ko mandir bulaata hoon (yes! i will divorce paakhi and call kalpi at the temple)
raghav then calls sammy and tells him to inform kalpi about meeting him otherwise suicide, suicide, SUICIDE! he then makes his way to the front door forgetting about his mom. when he reaches the front door just about to open it when the bell rings
*DING-DONG* and enter the dashing, the handsome the old buddha CHANDU!!
RAGHAV: arre postman tum, acha jaldi jo dena voh dedho, mujhe apni premika ko milna hai (oh its the you the postman, okay hurry up and give what you need to, i need to meet my love) 😉
CHANDU: ji saab lejiye...(yes sir, here you go) *hands him post and tell raghav to sign. whilst raghav is signiing he eyes the house and thinks*... kaash mai aur mari chandni (gauri) ik ho paati phir hum bhi aise bare ghar meh rehte (i wish me and my chandni were able to be one, then we also would have stayed in a big house like this)
whilst eyeing the house and thinking about his chandni, chandu sees smoke coming from gauris room and drops eveything and rushes towards the room leaving raghav shocked
RAGHAV:😲 😡... abe ei postman! tum ye kya kar rahe ho! mere ghar me kyun ghus raha hai!??(oi you postman!? what are you doing? why are you trying to enter my house)...*sees smokes and understand why*...OMG!! mom! mom! mai araah ho...(OMG! mom!mom! im coming!)
but too late chandu sees his chandni and already tries to break the door down leaving an amused raghav. he finally breaks the door down gets a jug of water and pours it over the fire. gauri then sees chandu and gives him a khaske jadoo ki jhappi (a tight hug lol)! 😆
GAURI: CHANDU!! tum kaha challe gaye thi muje chor kar! ab tum muje kabhi maat chur na! hum abhi mandir me jakar shaddi karte hai! (CHANDU!! where did you go leaving me alone?! now dont you ever leave me! now we will go to the temple and get married) 😆
CHANDU: haan haan mere chandni chalo!...(yes yes my chandni! lets go!)...*him and gauri are crying while raghav is just looking in shock*...
RAGHAV:😲 mom! ye sab kya hai! tum aur postman?? chandu?? chandni?? shaadi?? mandir???...are mandir si yaad aye mujhe kalpi si milna hai,...chalo baad mei!...lekin ye sab kya hai mom??? (mom! what is all thi? you and the postman?? chandu?? chandni?? wedding? temple??...oh yeah temple, i need to go meet kalpi...well later!...but what is all this mom??)
GAURI: woh kya hai naa chintu, jaise kalpi tumhare bachpan ka pyar hai, vaise hi chandu mera bachpan ka pyarr hai 😊 aur ab hum dono shaddi kar ne jar rahe hai... ab tum apni nai vale daddy si haat millao...come on good boy handshake 😆(the thing is chintu, like kalpi is your childhood love, chandu is my childhood love, and now us two are going to get married... now shake hands with your new daddy...come on be a good boy and handshake)
RAGHAV:😲 nahi! ye shaadi nahi ho sakti! kabhi nahi! (NO! this wedding cant happen! NEVER!)
gauri and chandu are shocked! and then raghav starts laughing, which cause chandu and gauri to be confused😕
RAGHAV: 😆 yeh shaadi sirf ik shart par ho sakti hai...aap apni shaadi ki baad meri aur kalpi ki shaadi karvaugeh! (this wedding will only happen on one condition... after your wedding you will get me and kalpana married)
GAURI: teek hai mari chintu...muje manzoor hai! (okay my chintu...i agree)
then raghav finally went to mandir with his mom and new daddy, got them married and then divorced paakhi and got married to kalpi.
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sorry a bit of a simple ending! but feel free if you want to add a new ending or continue it .. ESPECAILLY you angelpureness, treasures, babydoll, anonymouslyn, asgard-nim, and other experienced writerS, and thoses who are silent readers! 😃😉😛
hope you enjoyed it and please dont bash me if its really bad!😳
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