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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Hey nice update😆 But u left the pre cap on edge waiting for the next update ..


Thank u.. Precap can keep viewers glued.. Trying PD's style!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u Sampa!!

Originally posted by: riaka

Awesome update. Please do next one soon.


Thank u Riaka!! Will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: Saj1109

Wow, brilliant update...

Really intriguing precap

Cannot wait to read more

Saj


Thanks Saj.. Giving such precap to maintain USP of my story😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

I really hope Kalpi settles down with Roy, he seems like someone who take care of her, looking forward to da next update,


Thanx Anjinie.. 👍🏼

Roy loves Kalpi but Kalpi still needs to develop some feelings for him.. More than fshp but not love.
I will try to give next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shyamlu

Mind blowing update Vish... I agree i hate Raghav for what he did to Kalpi and i say it again I hate him for that.. Make him suffer, suffer, no worries


Thanks Shyamlu.. Yep Raghav as to suffer more!! Don't worry about that!! Kamla and Raghav has to suffer for all their misdeeds!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Thank u.. Will try to update as soon as possible..

Yes, kalpi hates Raghav.. He earned this hatred by stupid decision of revenge marriage!!


Today's torture has made me hate rags too...sure he needs to suffer...suffer more than ever..
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Will update soon. 😊
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Yep.. Update in progress!!
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Hello guys.. m updating part 18. Sorry it's bit smaller than previous one but m really upset today... Someone said that she stopped reading my FF coz I am going to separate RagNa in the end.. It's her view and I respect it but still it affected me a bit.

So First of all I want to thank u all for reading my story.. N appreciating it.. I myself do not know whether I will unite RagNa or not but I strongly believe that every girl does not end with the first person she felt in love with. I have seen so many people coming out of past relation.. I am one of them... Why can't our Kalpi be one of them.. Newyas that not my point for this rant.. i just want u guys to tell me who u want to see in the end.. Plz write RagNa or RoKa(Roy + Kalpi) in comments.. I will count the comments and will do what majority wants.

Sorry if m disappointing u guys with this update..

Kalpi is looking at her account details.. She finds the balance very low..She has send all her money to Raghav as she dint want to delay it anymore.. She decides to talk to Roy as she needs to change venue of her classes as more students are willing to take admission and due to lack of rooms she can't afford many classes simultaneously.. She plans to ask for a loan and only Roy can help her in bank proceedings.. She calls Roy to meet when he tells her to come at her place as he has an important video chat with his business associate.. By the time she will reach he will end the chat and can talk peacefully. Kalpi agrees.. She looks for Payal to accompany her but Payal refuses as she has some urgent work at her writing classes.. Kalpi goes alone to meet Roy.. On her way she sees all her documents and arranges them..


Roy is having video chat with Raghav.. They are talking about their business.. Unoblivious to this Kalpi enters his room.. Roy gestures her to sit and wait for 5 mins.. Kalpi agrees and was about to go out to meet Roshni when he hears Raghav's voice...Her stops at her place.. She knew it was Raghav.. She doesn't know how to respond.. She wants to go away from there immediately but her something is stopping her.. She wants to turn back.. She wants to look at him but she is stopping herself to do so.. There was a battle going among her heart and brain.. Her heart wants to look at the only love of her life.. But her brain is telling her to move on.. This is the same man from whom she is running... She decides to go when she hears Kalpana..She turns back and sees Raghav.. Tear start rolling down her cheeks.. Whole world around her has stopped.. The only thing which can she hear is Raghav's voice.. She keeps staring at him.. Roy finishes her chat..

Roy : Kalpi.. Come in!! Sorry for the late.. Actually I was talking with Mr. Singhania, he wants to build a new society for middle class people and wants to name it Kalpana.. What a coincidence naa.. Ur name is Kalpana too..

Kalpi doesn't responds.. She is still staring at screen.. Raghav has already logged out.. But his display pic is still coming.. Tears are still flowing from her eyes.. On not getting response Roy looks at her and sees her crying.. He gets concerned and ask her what happened?? Kalpi sits down on the floor and points towards the screen.. Roy looks at screen and see Raghav's photo.. He remembers the time when Kalpi said that she used to work in a construction company and felt in love with it's boss.. How Raghav wants to name his society as Kalpana.. and how he insisted to meet the person who made that presentation.. He realizes that Raghav is the only person who cheated Kalpia.. He gets very angry..

Roy(in anger) : Raghav Singhania!! U love Raghavsinghania?? U r crying for him?? I can't nelieve this Kalpi.. U r still crying for that man.. Still he affects u so much.. U always lied to me that U have moved on but see urself.. I won't leave this Raghav Singhania..

Kalpi composes herself on listening this..She can't believe that she became so weak on seeing that man whom she hates most.. She wipes her tears and tries to smile..

Kalpi : I am sorry.. I just got carried away.. I know I shouldn't but..

Roy : It's ok.. I am sorry.. It spoke too much but I can't see tears in ur eyes.. U just sit here.. Let me bring water to u..

Roy goes out to bring water but instead of kitchen he goes to his mom room.. roshni was readin some file.. She looks at Roy.. Roy tells her everything that conspired with Kalpi.. She tells him to stay here for sometime and let her talk with Kalpi.. She goes to meet Kalpi.. Kalpi sees her coming in the room and runs to her.

Before Roshni can say anything.. Kalpi hugs her and starts crying.. Roshni doesn't say anything and let her cry as much as she wants.. After few minutes Kalpi composes herself and tells her sorry for getting weak..

Kalpi : I know u have told me to be strong but He is my weakness. I do not remember him but on seeing him today I was unable to control myself..

Roshni : U need not say sorry... U r a human and u have full rights to get weak. Do u still love him?

Kalpi : No

Roshni : Look into my eyes and tell me the truth

Kalpi(looks into her eyes) : No, I do not love him but I can't forget the moments we spent together.. I can't forget what he did to me but I can't forget how he made me feel special. I still pin for him. I do not know whether it's love or not but I do not want him back..

Roshni : time will heal everything baby!! Leave everything on time.. If he is ur destiny than no one can separate u!! So for the time just focus on ur aim..

Kalpi : U r ryt.. He is not in my destiny and someday I will prove it to u.

Roshni : Goo. Now why u came here??

Kalpi tells her about her further plan for loan and shifting her classes to a bigger place so that she can have more than 1 class at a time. Roshni gives her one card and tells her to talk to him.. He will help u. Kalpi takes it and bids adieu to her.. Roshni stops her..

Roshni : Won't u meet Roy again??

Kalpi : Ohh yes.. I just forgot.. Where is he?

Roshni : Come with me..

Kalpi and Roshni meets Roy when Roshni leaves them alone and goes to her room. Kalpi says sorry to Roy and he makes her smile with his antics.. He cracks some joke and she laughs.. Rohni watches all this from her room.. She feels happy on seeing them together..

Roy : So madam.. shall I drop u at ur place??

Kalpi : No!!

Roy : Why??

Kalpi : Coz m not going home but market and u r accompanying me.. I am going home for my birthday and Rakhi.. So I need to buy gifts for my family..

Roy : As u wish madam.. But have u told this to Payal??

Kalpi : Not yet.. She will kill me.

Roy : anyone will.. How can u leave us on ur birthday.. U do one thing.. Celebrate Rakhi there and birthday here..

Kalpi : Hmm.. I will see..Now let's go!!


Precap : Kalpi hears Pakhi and doctor's convo regarding Pakhi's pregnancy.


P.S. Plz comment whether u want RagNa or RoKa.

P.S.S. : hit like and comment. Sorry for all grammatical/spelling mistakes or any typo.

Regards

Vish

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...obviously RAGNA...but why u make PAKHI pregnant ...😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ragna dear... Even in ff don't want them apart...rags has lost too much to lose kalpi..
Edited by hamsa74 - 11 years ago

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