CHECKMATE...RAGNA SS Chapter 8 pg 20 updated 26/06/2014 ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Fantastic writing love the build up

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Amy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: amy.r

Hahahaha...only if he goes there will the final pieces fall into place!!😛

Actually I am quite amused that even in our stories we cant bear Rags going anywhere near Pakhi!! This is called an bombastic impact!!🤣

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: amy.r

Thanks Charu!! not to worry, I was never a Pakhi fan nor will I ever be!!😃

😃 okay.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

very well written...👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

I just loved the way you have expressed the emotions...

I mean of Rags... his silent remorse, and the way he is left alone...

I loved it... I am eagerly looking forward for the next part...

Ohh! and as for the nupital night of Pakhi... even the thought makes me sick

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Sapna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Itz amazing...

just potrayed each n every emotion nicely... 😊

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Amy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: LaughItOff
I just loved the way you have expressed the emotions...
I mean of Rags... his silent remorse, and the way he is left alone...
I loved it... I am eagerly looking forward for the next part...

Ohh! and as for the nupital night of Pakhi... even the thought makes me sick

Thank u...and as for the emoticon I loved it!!😆