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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

INDEX

PART 1 - ABOVE

PART 2 - PAGE NO.7

Edited by babydolll - 11 years ago

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Autumm

@Autumm

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing dear...update soon...!!!!!!!!😃

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumm
amazing dear...update soon...!!!!!!!!😃

tomorrow 🥱🥱🥱

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gurulover

@gurulover

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome as always❤️

kalpi and prem engagement??hmmm🤔

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

RES RES RES!

Unres!

Speedy Gonzalez reaction failed me! NAHIII!!!!!

Oh well, I still got it on the first page. YAY!

Okay, okay!

This was adorable/sweet/amazing/wonderful and everything else combined. The emotions were captured perfectly and some of the dialogues had me going "holy smokes" specially "how can I forget you when you are the light in my darker life?" wow, just wow.

Overall, the story has tied in so perfectly. It's not too cliche, nor too bland, it's perfect. Judging by the conversation between Raghav and Kalpi, I'm happy to see some OOCness in the both of them. It makes it all the more pleasurable to read.

Haila, yeh kya?! Prem and Kalpi engagement? *faints* CVs ka suspense kam tha ke tum bhi shuru ho gayeen?

Lol, nonetheless, I loved it and am really looking forward to the next chapter, as always.

Thanks a bunches for the PM sweetcakes!!

🤗

Raz

Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago