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Originally posted by: Mihika

awesome dear.👏.and prem kalpi engagement😲😲

Originally posted by: gurulover

engagement tak thik hai shaadi math kara dena plss😆hehe kidding..you keep writing 😉

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome update buddy but prem [:-(]

Originally posted by: babydolll

ouch aankh mat maar 😡

Originally posted by: gurulover

hug kare toh problem,wink kare toh problem..no emos iss ke baad😆

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

RES RES RES!

Unres!

Speedy Gonzalez reaction failed me! NAHIII!!!!!

Oh well, I still got it on the first page. YAY!

Okay, okay!

This was adorable/sweet/amazing/wonderful and everything else combined. The emotions were captured perfectly and some of the dialogues had me going "holy smokes" specially "how can I forget you when you are the light in my darker life?" wow, just wow.

Overall, the story has tied in so perfectly. It's not too cliche, nor too bland, it's perfect. Judging by the conversation between Raghav and Kalpi, I'm happy to see some OOCness in the both of them. It makes it all the more pleasurable to read.

Haila, yeh kya?! Prem and Kalpi engagement? *faints* CVs ka suspense kam tha ke tum bhi shuru ho gayeen?

Lol, nonetheless, I loved it and am really looking forward to the next chapter, as always.

Thanks a bunches for the PM sweetcakes!!

🤗

Raz

Originally posted by: babydolll

hug loose kar de... u squeeze me always... and wing thoda smile ke saath kar 😳