THE GLASS WALL : RAGNA(Ashna) FF, Part-24, Pg 141, 14/12/15 - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago
Once again awesome update.
Looks like Pakhi is not aware of anything... i was expecting her to be a part of Rag's plan but she is as delusional here as she was in the show.. Well I dnt mind it as i think Rags don't want to take any chance by involving Pakhi in his plan.. After all he is doing all this for his mother's safety.
I still have hope that the marriage is fake as Pkhi said she will wait for the day when she doesn't have to sleep separate from her husband.. u used husband here n not Rags.. Again, may be it was unintentional from ur side n i am assuming too much but this what i noticed.

Vitthal is a sweetheart.. he saw the emptiness in Rag's eyes. For him Kalpi is the culprit and any father would behave in the way Vitthal did. I am sure he will forgive Kalpi on knowing the truth and will regret for saying those harsh words.. i wish Kalpi had called him once just to inform them about her safety.

OMG... What Prem is upto?? That cut out in bathtub.. M confuse about it. Whether he wants to drown her in it or take bath with her like an obsessive lover?? i guess I have to read it again to understand his motto. Now Rags know about him and located his location, I wish he follows him to ensure Kalpi's safety n before that informs Kalpi to shift to some safe place. I want Pakhi to notice Rags concern and question him n in return he can scream at her. But i know Rags is smarter here so he will find out the way.

Sorry for so much assumptions and hopes but U wrote it in such a way that I can't control myself.. I am just dying to know what will happen next..

oops.. too long naa!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Nice update. Rakhi marriage😭. Sammy consoling pakhi🤢Oh no I thought it will fake marriage but it seem to be real and prem went to kalpi hope she is not in trouble. Waitin for next update.


I am sorry, for now that's all I can say. 😭 I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal

Amazing update
continue soon😊


Thanks Shikha. 😊

Originally posted by: Shivanie05

I am 💔 I ❤️ U still I still have confidence in this FF please update The Marriage Story too ok thanks


Thanks Shivani. I understand. I'll try not to disappoint you. n next update shall be of the marriage story. 😊

Originally posted by: riaka

Oh no. ... their marriage is real😡😡. I hope its fake. Prem is is pune. .

God save poor Kalpi from that monster ..please update next chappy ASAP.
Thanks👏


Yes..I'll try to update asap. 😃 n Thanks for your feedback. 😊

Thank you dear. 😊

Originally posted by: Asyalover

oh kalpi What a fool u are?


Thanks for the feedback dear. 😊

Originally posted by: Anjinie

that was unexpected I did not think anybody will see the photo of Kalpi, hope prem does not make it to see Kalpi


I hope this unexpected scene was liked by you. Thanks for your feedback. 😃 😊

Originally posted by: priya_remix

OMG me biting my nails! Raghav has come to know that Prem is a freako!! Hope Kalpi doesn't fall in trouble


LOL. For a change I am happy that you are biting your nails. 😆😛 Thanks Priya. 😊

Originally posted by: foram.

wow rags came to know about prem... this is getting more interesting now...
waiting to know wat rags will do now


Thanks Forum. 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Charu!! What is happening?! I cannot believe!! It's a set up!! Paaki!! It's all her doings! Will never believe Kalpi and prem had something going on!! Never!! Plz update soon! My sis 😛 🤗


Di...no there's nothing between Prem & Kalpi. Prem is an obsessive lover and it was revealed in earlier updates. I am giving you the links again, for refreshing your memory; and also PM you the same.

PART-4(b)


PART-5





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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: eishe10

Very interesting update!!! Continue soon 😊


Thank you dear. I'll try to update it asap.😊

Originally posted by: Dnair031

Very interesting 👏👏👏


Thank you so much. 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: aryagr

Lovely update. Plz update soon. I m living prem as obsessive lover..


Thanks dear. I am glad you are loving it. 😃 😊

Originally posted by: niru04

Finaly ragav knew d prem's intention.i hope kalpi safe.bloody prem.update soon plz


Thanks for your feedback dear. I'll try to update it asap. 😊


Thanks. 😊


Thank you dear. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover

Once again awesome update.

Looks like Pakhi is not aware of anything... i was expecting her to be a part of Rag's plan but she is as delusional here as she was in the show.. Well I dnt mind it as i think Rags don't want to take any chance by involving Pakhi in his plan.. After all he is doing all this for his mother's safety.
I still have hope that the marriage is fake as Pkhi said she will wait for the day when she doesn't have to sleep separate from her husband.. u used husband here n not Rags.. Again, may be it was unintentional from ur side n i am assuming too much but this what i noticed.

Vitthal is a sweetheart.. he saw the emptiness in Rag's eyes. For him Kalpi is the culprit and any father would behave in the way Vitthal did. I am sure he will forgive Kalpi on knowing the truth and will regret for saying those harsh words.. i wish Kalpi had called him once just to inform them about her safety.

OMG... What Prem is upto?? That cut out in bathtub.. M confuse about it. Whether he wants to drown her in it or take bath with her like an obsessive lover?? i guess I have to read it again to understand his motto. Now Rags know about him and located his location, I wish he follows him to ensure Kalpi's safety n before that informs Kalpi to shift to some safe place. I want Pakhi to notice Rags concern and question him n in return he can scream at her. But i know Rags is smarter here so he will find out the way.

Sorry for so much assumptions and hopes but U wrote it in such a way that I can't control myself.. I am just dying to know what will happen next..

oops.. too long naa!!😆


Thank you so much Vish. n yes, I guess I love delusional Pakhi too much. 😆😛 As for marriage thing, hopefully I won't take too much time to reveal whether RaKhi marriage is true or fake. 😊

Also, thanks for mentioning Vitthal scene, yes he does love his daughter very much and maybe will forgive her when he knows the truth. That's why he could also see the pain in Raghav's eyes, which Kamla couldn't.

As for Prem he was always an obsessive lover. So no he doesn't intend to drown Kalpi, but takes a shower with her cut out. Maybe if you re-read the following parts again, you shall be able to understand his motives better.

PART-4(b)


PART-5


Also sweetie no need to say sorry. I know you are such a fab writer yourself, so you are bound to make serious observations on the updates. 😃 I am just happy and glad that you are liking it, hope I am able to maintain the suspense for some updates. 😆 I am not too good at it.😛

n I loved your long comment, I always love long comments. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Even i thought it would be a fake marriage, but its turning to be real!!. Please Charu, don't make it real.

Such a obsessive Prem😡

I always love the loving, caring and concern of Raghav towards Kalpi, and in your FF Raghav is too smart and he will save Kalpi from Prem.

Please continue soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hathway

Even i thought it would be a fake marriage, but its turning to be real!!. Please Charu, don't make it real.

Such a obsessive Prem😡

I always love the loving, caring and concern of Raghav towards Kalpi, and in your FF Raghav is too smart and he will save Kalpi from Prem.

Please continue soon.



Thanks dear for your feedback. I'll try my best to live upto all of you's expectations. I'll try to update it asap.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update. Loved how rags knows how obsessed prem is about kalpi and y he got him married to pak. I hate that character I didn't like get in show and don't like her here. Don't even put her with Sammy that awful character leaves a bad taste in my mouth and can't handle that she is in this ff. but still addicted to ur ff. pls continue
Edited by sunyy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!! this Chapter reminded me of the doomed series.
Pakhi serving breakfast scared the S*** out of me.
Neetu indulging in the wedding videos gave me the creeps...
What are you planning next..
ps- I have a weak heart...

Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too good update ya ...sorry for d late reply my kids were sick n also was busy in office work but ne ways too good plz update soon it's getting interesting day by day..

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