ragna after seperation new ff

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hii guyz iam again here with new os and this one is a based on the current drama happening in EMA.

Index:
chapter 1-page 1
chapter 2-page 5
chapter 3-page 8
chapter 4-page 10


As we know that now there is MU track going on in the show so here when raghav comes to know about the MU then he wants to clear that and he go to kamla maa and said that he never love pakhi but he love kalpana and he will marry her only not pakhi but kamla convence him by saying kalpana is strong she can handle herself but pakhi will commit suicide so plz marry and here kalpana is frustated becoz her mother ask her to sacrifice her love for pakhi again .she thought once again my aai choose pakhi over me and then she decided to let pakhi marry raghav and here raghav sees his mom in kapoor mansion so he also decided to marry pakhi but kalpana put one demand and say first raghav marry pakhi then i will marry sammy.and in this raghav got married to pakhi but at the time of sammy marriage when priest ask for bride they didn't find kalpana there .and here kalpana elope from chawl and comes to panchgani.And here raghav is shattered that he broke kalpana heart by marrying pakhi and asked sammy to search her and here 3 years passed they didn't find kalpana anywhere and here vithal break his realtion with his wife kamla for snatching her daughter happiness.
and where pakhi is comes out of her dreanland and finds raghav is so rude arrogant and never pay any heed towards her she is not at all happy with this marriage she want to break this relation but raghav didn't allow her becoz she the reason for his kalpi heartbroken becoz of her only she is not with .

After 3 year:
here in panchgani kalpana house

:after that marriage drama she is completely heartbroken she decide to commit suicide but one couple save her .
and these couple are noneother than her parents who took care of her in her childhood when she is in boarding and they don't have their own child so they treat kalpana as their daughter and now all is good with kalpana now she has someone first priority & they can do anything for her happiness.

kalpana pov: now i have perfect family dev dad and avni mom is here with me who took care of me and also love me i'm their only daughter but i still love raghav i know now i have no right on him he is pakhi's husband but what should i do with my heart . my heart still beats for raghav.

pov end.

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now the drama unfold here now kalpana become rude arrogant for jadhav family she disllike her mother & fathere who never trust her and force her to sacrifice her love for pakhi.
but when she left mumbai she vow that now she become most strong and powerful women now noone will snatch anything from me.

and here she is she run her own company she the owner of crore's property and her company turn over is millon crore in a year.she established her business in dubai and now she is returning again mumbai to make score equal. now she has to show kapoor's there reality that she is more rich then them.
but now she is strong she has a control over her feeling and she has a soft corner for her brother becoz he help her to leave mumbai at that time . becoz pakya is not ready that her sister suffer so he help her ,her brother also become successfull now her brother also run his small business and happy in that he left chawl where his mother leave and he alsa start hateing his mother for all that drama

and now kalpana land in mumbai with her best friend vicky who's very possessive for her and who can do anything for her happiness.

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vicky :so ur looking excited ! i don't know why u want to come here this city give u nothing but sorrow and pain.
kalpana : and its time to return every thing to this city.and i'm excited becoz now i will snatch everything from kapoor who said i'm having no class & status.now its their turn to regret what they have done to me.
and asked vicky about the auction where kapoor's property is aucted.

and then she & vicky leave towards the auction place.

where raghav sammy & pakhi is there along with pakhi's kamla maa & kapoor family. and now auction bid start everyone bid for that building and raghav also bid becoz its his kalpana dream to purchase that building.
pakhi:raghav why ur doing this its my house whatever u done with my family is not right and now u watn to sell this building .please raghav don't do this.

raghav: ohh just shutup you good for nothing women u are dying to marry me now tolerate this. and u should be happy that ur husband is going to buy this building.
and start bid.
now bid s reached to 100 crore for that whole building where kapoor used to leave. but raghav snatch one deal from them and now their business is on loss so they decided to shift thier bandra bunglow and decide to sell this building so that they get money to pay the investors
auction comittee 100 crore 1 ...100 crore 2... just then a voice come from behind 150 crore.
and everybody turn to see but kapoor's and kamla ,pakhi,sammy & ragahv is shocked to see kalpana there with one men and they don't know who 'is that men.
kalpana wear black paint and white top with black jacket she is looking bold stunning and georgeous in that dressand she says 150 crore then again 150 crore 1'... 150 crore 2...
and then auction committee member say this property now belong to kalpana oberoi by listening they are shocked that when kalpana become oberoi but this surname is given by dev dad avni maa becoz they r oberoi and she is their daughter.

this is short if u like guys then i will write more.
plz comment .


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alfiya_12 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kya Baath tumne itni jaldi unka seperation ki kahani likdi!!:D But was gud too! I liked how kalpi became independent:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alfiya_12

kya Baath tumne itni jaldi unka seperation ki kahani likdi!!:D But was gud too! I liked how kalpi became independent:)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
I like this new Kalpi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fabulous writing yaar ...gr8 going ... 👍🏼
continue soon...one request frm my side ,yeh kapoor's ko jara garibi ka mazza chaskana ... 😉 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow it was superb nd marvelous
i loved kalpi part mostly.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊my dear you shpuld become a script writer and if pakhi does marry raghav😡then I would love for the track to come like how you posted it gives us fans some relief
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fabulous writing yaar ...gr8 going ... 👍🏼
continue soon...one request frm my side ,yeh kapoor's ko jara garibi ka mazza chaskana ... 😉 🤣[/QUOTE

agree...n please continue...its awesome... ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow..super like !!
Deep down I always wanted kalpi to be rich and teach a lesson to kapoors.
Thanx for writting !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumm




kapoor's should get reality check... 😡 ...neetu every time says ..yeh chawl wale ,yeh chawl wale ...bank corrupt hone ke baad inko chawl mein hi bhejna ... 😡 ..Manda's new neighbour kapoor's 🤣 🤣 ..

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