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abxetz

@abxetz

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Dear please ab tho update karona.itni achi story hai aur ap hai ki update hi nahi karthe.

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#582

I am the last one to read this lovely ,emotional SS. Missed as I never use to read them those days but had started just when EMA ended! I seemed to have missed your SS. Fabulous, the way you have pictured Kalpi's pain, suffering and loss of trust. Later Rags pain and regret is very beautifully elaborated, that I felt I was seeing a serial !!!! Thanks. But please continue and give us the end ! Don't leave us frustrated !

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Both updates were superb

Part 28-ragna room confrontation was awesome

love how u potray kalpana's emotions and raghav's inner turmoil

pakhi n kalpi relation was mending with time was nice

Finaly kalpi's plan worked...

Raghav was hurt by kalpi's words...felt bad for him...was painful

Lovd Pakya n amrita's convo

Part 29- beautiful n emo update

finaly pakya undstd raghav's pain n his true love for kalpi.

both are right in their place... kalpi still dnt trust him completely whc was shown in her outburst but she went a lil too far this tim n Raghav was upset as she could not see his love for her n der children

Liked dat kalpi realised her mistake n is trying to give another chance to this relationship

hope their new friendship changes their equation again

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Abhi main koi next tribute banaoongi tab aayegi kya ??

Yaar ... Its now high time that u have updated.

Plzzz update soon

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shoonya9

@shoonya9

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: premap
I am the last one to read this lovely ,emotional SS. Missed as I never use to read them those days but had started just when EMA ended! I seemed to have missed your SS. Fabulous, the way you have pictured Kalpi's pain, suffering and loss of trust. Later Rags pain and regret is very beautifully elaborated, that I felt I was seeing a serial !!!! Thanks. But please continue and give us the end ! Don't leave us frustrated !

Me too. Just read this FF yesterday only n in one go. Loved it to the core n really feel why I missed this one.

Yes contrary to the drama ur Kalpi is a headstrong girl who took care of self, family, Children n instilled sense in Rags too. Loved the repentance n penance of rags. U hv beautifully n logically portrayed all relations. Loved KalpI's friends how they stood like one for all n all for one.

By the way why hv u not named this FF/SS of urs? How about following names?

I. Trust u..., I forgive you. OR

WHY should I trust you?

Reasons to trust

Anyways please complete ASAP.

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Saanjh26

@Saanjh26

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#586

Note :
Will again give you same explanation i am busy and all this . I am sorry to make you wait guys. I have already thought how to end it but i am finding it little difficult to how to progress this story to that climax. Now I am working on this story and please don't get shocked by next update. There will be some revelations, some drama and above all, a new start.

@shoonya9 - I have thought so many times to give this story a name but I could not come up with a suitable name.

So, girls, please suggest a name for this ff.

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#587

Arey ...ur ss is already too too famous as New SS on Ragna ... i dont think u need a new name.

Bas try & update na plzzz...

Ur personal telepathy girl begs in front of u 😛😉

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#588

Agree ,that u don't need a title now, You will confuse the readers . It has proceeded very elegantly without a title , so whats the need now. 'A ROSE IS A ROSE WHATEVER U CALL IT ! [ or u don't name it ! ]