RagNa (AshNa) FF: You Are a Star ~COMPLETED PAGE 89~ NOTE Page 90 - Page 57

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

I love this FF. Nice update, those two women! 😡 Love Kalpi, she is strong, bold and self-reliant. Rocky is such a great friend. 😃 Love Tanya-Kalpi duo. 😳😛 looking forward to some romance or Ragna moments. you're ending this FF so soon.😭 Anyways, still love it always. 😃❤️⭐️



Thank you for your comment.🤗 Glad you are liking it. And I am so sorry, I am ending this FF as to not drag. : )
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I will during the weekend, when I am free.😳
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Part 24



The next morning Kalpana woke to a crack of thunder. She immediately took a look at the clock only to see that it was 4:30 in the morning. She went over to the window and immediately shut it so that no more water could come inside from the rain.

No longer feeling sleepy, she put on her slippers and went downstairs. She noticed that it was still silent down there and flinched when one of the steps creaked. She wasn't in the mood to wake anyone up.

She prepared herself a cup of sweet coffee and took a seat on the couch.

"Hey Kalpi" Raghav said, startling Kalpi.

"Raghav?" she asked looking up in surprise. He was standing right before her bright and awake.

"You awake this early?"

"No, I just can't sleep" Raghav replied, sitting down next to Kalpi.

"Dreaming about me?" Kalpi joked, before taking a sip out of her cup.

"Maybe" Raghav teased.

"Want to marry me anytime soon?" Kalpana asked casually. Her fingers played with her hair as she waited for his answer.

"Whenever you say" Raghav said, smilingly. "This Raghav is all yours."

Kalpana chuckled nervously and said, "Then I am afraid it won't be anytime soon, Raghav."

She waited silently for Raghav's reaction, but to her surprise he didn't look too shocked.

"I have just started my career Raghav" Kalpi said.

When Raghav didn't say anything else she added, "I don't want people to think I made it to success because I am with you."

"Then you should go" Raghav said to her. "We can marry anytime, you know."

No matter how casual he tried to seem normal, Kalpana could see the hurt in his eyes.

"You're okay with that?" she asked him. "I mean I love you Raghav, but.. try to understand."

"I'll deal with it" Raghav responded, not quite meeting her eyes. "I can wait for you my entire life."

"Thanks" Kalpana said. Yes. She was kind of guilty, but she couldn't back off right when her dreams were coming true. There are things more than love in life. Well, that's what Kalpana felt at the moment.

"So when will you be moving out?" Raghav asked finally.

"Tomorrow" Kalpana replied immediately.

"Wow.. that's unexpected" Raghav remarked.

"I know it is, but now I don't want to live here before I get married to you" Kalpana said.

"Fine" Raghav said getting up. "I'll tell Tanya to help you pack."

"No, I'll manage" Kalpana said also getting up.

"Fine."

-*-

"Sir, I think you should REPLACE her!" Sonia yelled for the hundredth time. "I am telling you, she ain't comin' back!"

"This show has just started and how can we afford to lose our main lead?!" one of the directors asked in frustration.

"Then have me take her place!" Sonia said desperately.

"What about your place?" he asked.

"Someone else can play it" Sonia said.

"Fans will SPIT on their tv screens if that happens" one of the cast members said. "Have you ever seen that happen on T.V.?"

"I think they're right" Durga told Sonia quietly. "I am with you, but I don't think that would work."

"Fine then, get Kalpana killed onscreen and make me lead-"



"ENOUGH!" Kalpana thundered from the doorway. Everyone turned to look at her.

"Sir, how can you listen to her bakwaas!" Kalpana yelled angrily. "She's insulting your lead character!"

"I-"

"YOU!" Sonia yelled angrily as she ran head-first into Kalpi, making them both fall to the ground.

"What the hell?!" Kalpana shouted. She struggled to push Sonia off of her. "Someone get this drama queen off of me.." Kalpana said.

"How anyone even let you enter in this place is a shock to me." Kalpana told Sonia, as she scratched Sonia's cheek to make her hurt.

"Owww.." Sonia said rolling over, and putting a hand to her cheek. She saw blood.

"How dare you Kalpi?" Sonia asked, as Durga rushed up to her and dabbed a cloth on her face.

"Girls enough" the director ordered. "Sonia, I think you are going overboard in your thirst for attention. I will make sure that the next track in this show finally gets rid of you."

"Sir-" Sonia started to say.

The director shook his head. "I've seen enough to know what to do."

Sonia glared at Kalpana through clenched teeth.

Kalpana who was breathing heavily, glared back at Sonia in anger.

Kalpana got up and said, "Thank you, Sir."

She gave Sonia one last look of disgust and shook her head. "I never wanted this Sonia, but I think this will teach you a good lesson."

With that, Kalpana strode out of the room leaving everyone speechless.


-*-




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*Part 25*


"What a good slap on Sonia's face" Rocky said, high-fiving Kalpana.

Kalpana laughed. "I know right.. she was getting so annoying."

"I am relieved that she's leaving next week" Rocky said, letting out a sigh of relief.

"Over dramatic Bacchu" Kalpana laughed as she threw her magazine at him.

"On this note, why not a quick dance?" Rocky said, offering Kalpi his hand.

Kalpana smiled shyly before saying. "I wish dude, but I have to go take my next shot."

She turned to leave when she saw Durga standing at the entrance to the room; eavesdropping.

"OOh, so someone is angry" Kalpana taunted. "Are you mad at me?" Kalpana said making a sad face.

"Oh foo Kalpi, of course na.. since your partner Sonia is leaving" Kalpana said trying to look understanding. "I know how you must be feeling, Ai" Kalpana said sarcastically, as she tried to mimic her character onscreen.

Kalpana laughed. "I would stop plotting if I were you" she finally said letting go of her fake laughter. "There's a difference between REEL life and Real life."

Durga who was unable to take it any longer slapped Kalpana hard on her face.

Kalpi's hand spontaneously went to the cheek that Durga had slapped her on.

"Durga!" Rocky yelled.

"Stop it Rocky" Kalpana said, holding his hand to stop him from hitting Durga. Her eyes had begun to water.

"I fail to understand how people in this world can be so selfish" Kalpana said. "I don't know why, Durga Ji."

"Don't underestimate me" Durga finally said, as she held up a finger. "I can-"

"You can what huh" Kalpana said, her voice rising automatically. "At this age, your hand should raise to give blessings, not to slap innocent people."


Kalpana pushed past Durga as she went to go take her shot.

Rocky ran after Kalpana to keep up with her.

Without looking up at him Kalpana said, "When I dreamed of becoming an actress, I never thought people here would act so unprofessional."

Rocky stopped Kalpana and made her stand still. "Is there something you are hiding Kalpi?" he asked.

He knew his friend well. She certainly seemed like she was hiding something.

"Rocky, I told Raghav that I didn't want to marry yet." she told him. "He was very hurt, I could feel it."

"And?" Rocky said in confusion.

"And.. I should've realized Rocky, I hurt him again just for my silly reasons.. I can work after marriage, but I can't keep hurting Raghav like this."

"And I realized today, after Durga Ji slapped me, Rocky" Kalpana said. "I know it's a lame reason, but Rocky I realized that what I am doing here is drama.. but my love with Raghav is real."

"You sure?" Rocky asked her.

Kalpana nodded. "Yes, I think so."

"Great" Rocky said. "My Kalpi is getting married soon" he said cheerfully.

"You!" Kalpana said elbowing him in the ribs. "You change the mood like it's no big deal."

Rocky grinned proudly.

"It isn't for me" he announced. "Let's go take the shot, shall we?"

-*-



Later that evening when Kalpana got home she saw the servants bringing down a few suitcases and she asked, "What's all this Ramu Bro?"

"Ji Madam, Raghav Sir asked us to put your belongings in the car."

"What?" Kalpi asked in surprise, but then recalled her conversation with Raghav that morning.

"Oh gosh.. what did I do??" she asked herself.

-*-

Edited by Pookhi - 10 years ago
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Part 26


"Raghav..." Kalpana called out across the house. "Raghav!!" She started running up the stair steps to his room. "Raghav.." she said tearfully. "Where are you.." On the way she met Tanya who started to say something, but Kalpana ignored her and ran past her.

Tanya ran after her. "Kalpi.." she started to say. "KALPI!" she said grabbing Kalpana's arm to stop her.

"Raghav isn't home."

"What?" she asked Tanya in surprise. "Then where is he Tanu?"

"Actually he.. couldn't bear to see you leave this house today so.."

"What, dramebaaz, idiot, dumbo.. he is acting like I broke all my relations with him!!" Kalpana said angrily. "Anyways tell.. where is he?"

"I don't know.." Tanya said apologetically.. "But I can find out if you'd like."

"Yes please!" Kalpana said taking hold of her hand. "Just find out for me, will you?"

Tanya smiled slightly, knowing that some very big moment was coming in Raghav and Kalpana's life. "Okay hold on.." she said, taking out her cell phone.

"Driver, where did you take Raghav.." she said a few moments later. "What? You sure? Ok fine, don't tell him I called you. Bye."

"What did he say.." Kalpana asked impatiently. She shook Tanya's shoulders. "Tell naa!!"

"He's at Chowpatti Beach" Tanya said. As soon as the last word had slipped out of her mouth Kalpana ran down the stairs.


"I say that these BOTH are Dramebaazes." Tanya remarked, giggling.


"Chalo Bhaiya goo.." Kalpana ordered as she jumped into the backseat of a car. "Please hurry" she snapped.

"Madam, you seem to be in a bad mood today" the driver said glancing at the rearview mirror.

"Haan bro, you're right" Kalpana said, this time a little more kindly.

"Is it a luv shuv ka chakkar?" the driver asked knowingly.

Even in this serious situation, Kalpana couldn't help but blush. "yeahh.." she said. "But bro now you know na.. so please hurry up!"

"Alright Madam, so here we go.." the driver said speeding up the car.

He passed a Red light once and Kalpana gasped in shock.😲


"Brother.." she asked in utter confusion.

"yes sis.." the driver said as he turned sharply at a corner.

"Why are you so worried..." Kalpana asked him, confused.

"Nothing Madam, it has always been my dream to be a race car type of person."

"You sure?" Kalpi asked suspiciously.


"yeah.." the driver replied, his speed growing with every second.

"Please driver slow down a bit.." Kalpi pleaded.

"Hm" the driver said.


Meanwhile, Kalpana went back into flashback mode:

"Vroom Vroomm!" Her 10 year old brother was sitting on the floor playing with his toy cars.

"Brother, what you doing?" Kalpana asked innocently.

"Kalpi, I am practicing how to race.." her cute brother had replied. "See?" he said showing her how the red car passed the white one. "The red car is the one I am in."

"You win?" Kalpi asked.

"Haan sis, we come from a family of winners" Pakhya answered as he held out a hand for Kalpi to high five.

"Hi Five" Kalpi exclaimed.
End of Flasbhack*
-*-

"Gosh I miss them" Kalpana muttered to herself. "I wish they were here."

"Madam, we are here.." the driver said, in a high unusual voice.

"Ok bro, stop.." Kalpana said, jumping out of the car. "Thank you" she called out without looking back.

The driver grinned from ear to ear as he saw Kalpana's fading figure. "Anytime sis."

-*-

"Raghav.." Kalpana called out. "Rag-"

Then she saw him. He was sitting on the sand gazing faraway across the beach.

She silently went and sat down next to him; joining him at gazing across the waters.

"It's nice, isn't it?" Raghav asked her without even looking once at her.

"It's beautiful" Kalpi murmured.

"So you shifted to your new house?" Raghav asked quietly.

"Nah.." Kalpana replied, her voice low.

"Why?"

"Didn't feel like it." she replied.

"Didn't feel like it...?" Raghav asked her.

"No." she responded.

Raghav remained silent.

He heard Kalpi take a deep breath a few moments later.

"I want to marry you Raghav" she said softly.

Raghav looked at her and gazed into her eyes.

"But your career..-"

"Sha Rukh Khan Ji married Raghav" Kalpi said. "And he is like the King!"

"I was dumb Raghav.." Kalpana admitted. She searched his eyes for any sign of anger. She didn't find any.

When Raghav didn't say anything Kalpi closed her eyes and put her head back.


"Will you marry me?"

She opened her eyes and saw Raghav on his knees and his arms spread wide apart as if he were hugging the world.

"Yes Raghav, I will marry you soon!" Kalpana exclaimed, tears of happiness flowing from her eyes.

On hearing that answer, Raghav faced the waters and hollered, "I LOVE MY KALPANA!"


Kalpana grinned widely like a child that has just gotten a candy bar.


"I LOVE YOU KALPI!!" Raghav yelled again.

Kalpana stood up and spread her arms out wide too.

"I LOVE YOU RAGHAV!" she yelled proudly. "And Will LOVE you til My LAST BREAT--"

Raghav turned to her and placed a finger on her lips. "Don't say that Kalpi--- I can't bear the thought of your last breath--" his voice broke as he embraced Kalpana in his arms.

"After Tanya, you are my everything.." he said emotionally.

Kalpana finally understood. Raghav had been lonely for ages. She had completed him.

That day she truly understood the full meaning of love. It wasn't just a crush who proposed to you. It was a feeling that two souls are one. That if anything pains them, it pains you as well. Finally, Kalpana's and Raghav's hearts had joined. Raghav had stolen her heart and she had happily given it to him.

--*--


"You guys are back!!!" Tanya exclaimed happily, when she saw both Raghav and Kalpi enter hand in hand.

"Haan" Kalpana replied sweetly.

"And I hope you both have solved all your issues." Tanya said.

"Yes dear sister we have" Raghav said glaring at his mischievous sister.

"Well Bhabhi, I have a surprise for you" Tanya told her to-be-bhabhi.

"Kya?" Kalpana asked Tanya.

"Enter" Tanya growled.

Pakhya came in dressed up in a driver's avatar.

There was recognition on Kalpana's face, and to confirm her doubts Pakhya took off his glasses and mustache.

Kalpana gasped and jumped up in the air.

"Bhaiyyaa!!!" she hollered as she ran into his arms; giving him a bone crushing hug. "Bhaiyya.. you don't know how happy I am to see you here!!!!"

Pakhya patted Kalpana on the back of her head. "I missed you as well, rajkumari" Pakhya told her. "That's why I came here!"

"It was YOU!" Kalpana said remembering their conversation in the car.

"Yes Madam" Pakhya joked. "Tum bhi na Bhaiya.." Kalpana said pouting.

"Ab let's go sit and talk" Tanya announced.

---*---



"So let's get you both married" Pakhya told them when he had heard the whole story.

"Yesh, it is a very good idea" Tanya said in agreement.

"What say?" they both asked Raghav and Kalpi.

Kalpi went tomato red, which answered the question on her behalf.

"Raghav..?" Kalpana asked him nervously.


"Yes," Raghav said. "But before that we have to do one more thing."












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A week later, Kamla and family were busy in Raghav & Kalpi's engagement preparations.

Raghav had managed to convince Kamla Ma with his charm, and had found a strict mother in her. Kamla was more happy by the fact that Kalpi was getting married to a rich man rather than that she had found a true lover. Either way she had accepted Kalpana's career as long as Raghav was by her side and promised Vitthal not to create any more problems.

Vitthal had been more than happy to see his daughter and future Son-In-Law arrive at his doorstep. He had given them both his fatherly blessings and had welcomed Raghav with open arms. He had no problem with their relationship.


Paakhi and Sammy were delighted to know that Kalpana and Raghav had finally seen a life partner in each other. Somewhere in them, Paakhi and Sammy saw themselves. In those days that were spent preparing for Kalpi and Raghav's marriage, Paakhi and Sammy's bond grew even stronger as they got more attached to each other. Paakhi saw Sammy as more than just a first crush. He was her love by then.

----*----



"I can't believe that my best friend is finally getting engaged today" Paakhi whispered into Kalpana's ear, as they walked down the steps for the ring ceremony.

Kalpana was dressed in a beautiful pink dress that Raghav had chosen specially for her. A stylist had curled her hair for this special occasion and they rested delicately on her shoulders. The softness and the simplicity of the make up only enhanced Kalpi's beauty.

As Raghav's eyes rested on his lady love, his lips formed a smile on its own. She was looking more beautiful than ever. It couldn't be real. It seemed so much like a fairy tale.

As Kalpana went down the steps, Raghav's heart raced faster and faster. His breath seemed to have stopped and his eyes lingered on Kalpana as she got closer and closer.

Sammy nudged Raghav in the ribs to make him realize where they were and Raghav seemed to choke.

"Stop behaving like a flirty teenager." Sammy whispered into his ear. "Act real, today is your engagement bro."

"Stop pestering me Sammy!" Raghav snapped at him. "It is my engagement so at least spare me today."

"Fine" Sammy said.



Before they knew it, in those few moments Raghav had slipped a diamond ring on Kalpana's finger and Kalpi on Raghav's.

Kalpi just looked down shyly as news reporters took pictures of Raghav and Kalpana.

One of them asked for them to stand together for a good picture.

Raghav obliged and put a protective arm around Kalpana. "Smile" Raghav whispered.

Kalpana did not need telling for she had already been smiling. That's what she had been doing all day long.

"You look gorgeous" Raghav said, as they stood there.

"You look not too bad yourself, Mister!" Kalpana said quietly.


Just then a reporter started to ask Raghav some questions. How Raghav and Kalpi met. How did they fall in love?? All kinds of questions.

Kalpana patiently stood there next to Raghav as he answered their questions one by one.

"Excuse me, I would like to say something to my Kalpana in front of the whole world" Raghav finally said.

The reporter agreed and motioned for Raghav to go on.

Raghav turned to Kalpi. "I have fallen in love not with an actress, but with a beautiful and ordinary girl." "That's the way I first saw you and that's how I first started loving you. For who you are."

Kalpana listened to him as her eyes watered at the words Raghav said to her.


"All I want to tell you on this day Kalpana is.." Raghav paused and took a hold of her hands. "You Are a Star." "You are my Star, Kalpana!" ❤️


THE END <3😳


Sorry for any mistakes, please bear with it.




Edited by Pookhi - 10 years ago
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Pooki, What happened ! Mental block ? Relax , have some good sleep and come back with a super update !
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NOTE

Guys, first and foremost, I want to thank you all.🤗 For always reading and commenting on my stories. Silent Readers also, thanks! :)

You guys kept on reading even when I delayed with my updates. I won't say sorry and all that. I am kind of not that type, but you guys get the point na..😆

Thanks to all those readers who read all my updates. It truly means ALOT.

This story is one of the closest to my heart, and even though I am kind of sad to end it.. I am happy that I ended it on a good note.

I don't know if I am a good writer or not. I just wrote this story like how I felt it should be. I am only a teen so I know I have LOTS to improve on.

So yeah, this one is over.😆 But I will not put any tear emoticons because I want to end it happily.

So thanks guys! ;)

And *HUGS*


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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh! What a romantic ending . I am so happy you have ended it on a beautiful note. 'You are my star ' ! That is a beautiful love story ! Thanks for returning with a lovely update and ending it !
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Awesome update dear loved all the parts

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