RagNa (AshNa) FF: You Are a Star ~COMPLETED PAGE 89~ NOTE Page 90 - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update but u took too long to update
. Its not easy to wait especially for a nice interesting story.
So please update soon Its a humble request.
Well u helped kalpi to run away👏👏 great.
I think rag is going to find her @ gym.May be after a load of exercise she will pass out in Raghav's arms only😳
Great work🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update after so long 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update after so long time😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Beautiful update after so long 😉


Hehe thank you.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi


Haan, I am doing well.😆
No need for sorries.😡
Well haan, Pookhi is back on track.😛
Glad you liked it.😳
Gym, how'd you know..😆
No need for thanks, I would dedicate this whole story to you, sweet friend.😆


🤗😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
I like that Kalpi finally left Kamla house and going after her dreams on her own
Raghav is so worried for his Kalpi
Kalpi has the talent and will power to make it on her own
Omg! Hyper Pakhi was cute lol
I'm happy that Raghav will no where his Kalpi is
Lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

I like that Kalpi finally left Kamla house and going after her dreams on her own
Raghav is so worried for his Kalpi
Kalpi has the talent and will power to make it on her own
Omg! Hyper Pakhi was cute lol
I'm happy that Raghav will no where his Kalpi is
Lovely update


Thank you Natasha..ya even I feel hyper Paakhi was cute.😳😆
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Part 16

By Fabulous Pookhi😆


Raghav was feeling quite restless this morning. Just last night he had gotten Sammy's call informing him that Kalpana was actually in Mumbai! He had been surprised but by morning it had turned to delight.

He constantly kept dialing numbers on his phone, checking to see if any of his men had found Kalpana's whereabouts. Each time they answered "no" Raghav felt even more tempted to search for Kalpana.

"What on earth were you guys doing all day!" Raghav said slamming the table when all his men came to give him the report of the day.

"Sir, this is Mumbai..tons of people reside here, about let's say..about 11.98 million..?" a guy responded.

"I don't care how many people live in Mumbai!" Raghav shouted. "I just want to know where my Kalpi resides!"

"We're trying our best, Sir" one of the guys replied formally.

Raghav gulped and nodded. "Okay, y'all may leave now but remember...any news of Kalpi and you call me straight away."

"Sure sir" they replied curtly and went away.

"Bhai" Tanya said to Raghav from behind, as she chopped a few carrots.

"Yeah?" Raghav said, his voice softer than before.

"Would Kalpana like for you to have men tail her??" I mean she isn't taking our help for a reason."

Raghav bit his lip thoughtfully then replied, "Well, I guess she would hate it..but I need to find her asap."

"Is that reason enough for you to send guys out for her?" Tanya asked. "Ask me bhai, I am a woman, I realize what Kalpi must be going through."

"So what do you want? For me to tell those guys to stop searching for her?" Raghav asked his sister.

Tanya shook her head. "Well.."

~*~

Vitthal was just about to turn off the light to go to sleep when he noticed Kamla packing her bags. "Kamla, what's going on?" he asked her.

"I'm going" she replied back harshly. "Where?" Vitthal said his eyes sleepy.

"Mumbai, I've booked the first flight available, which is tomorrow" Kamla replied.

Vitthal's eyes immediately propped open. "Mumbai?" "What for?" "You still won't leave Kalpi alone will you?

"No matter what you or Ma Ji says, Kalpi is my daughter and I will bring her back" Kamla responded stubbornly.

"But I thought you said that Kalpi has brought us all shame..?" Vitthal tried.

Kamla shook her head. "But as a mother it is my duty to stop my daughter from doing wrong, and besides, did you really think that I would let Kalpi become an actress?"

Vitthal clenched his fists in rage. "What the heck?" he said out loud to Kamla. "Can't you let my daughter be for once?"

"Look Vitthal, I know Kalpi did wrong by running away from home like that, but I will bring your rajkumaari back, don't worry" Kamla said patting Vitthal's shoulder.

Vitthal immediately jerked Kamla's hand off. "I don't want my rajkumaari back!" "At least not until she fulfills her dreams!"

Kamla angrily slammed the closet door shut and turned off the lamp.

"When father encourages such mistakes, then what can I expect from my daughter.." Kamla mumbled under her breath.

Vitthal shook his head threateningly. He would not let Kamla do this.

~*~

Kalpana lay on her bed reading "The Fault in Our Stars". She didn't know why, but it really touched her heart. Maybe it was the concept. Or maybe it was because it's a love story, she was fond of love stories.

A couple of times, her eyes filled with tears while others she just chuckled.

Finally, putting the book away an hour later, she grabbed a pillow and lay back thinking of things.

She thought back to her family who she had ran away from. "I'm just another girl who ran away.." Kalpana murmured. "I'm just another girl who has brought shame to her family."

Tears rolled down her innocent face. "But then why do I feel like I have done the right thing by following my heart?"

She thought back to Raghav and his encouraging words over the phone.. He had told her that she was a wonderful actress. He was an amazing actor, and he had told her that. Surely he wasn't lying when he praised her.

Wiping her tears away, Kalpana picked up a newspaper from her bedside table and circled a spot on it with a red pen.

She smiled a little to herself. "Kalpi, you can do it. Tomorrow is the day."

~*~

The next morning, Vitthal called Paakhi. "Paakhi" he pleaded. "Please tell me that Kalpi isn't in Mumbai."

Paakhi replied, "I am sorry Uncle, but it's true, your daughter is in Mumbai."

"Okay, thanks for letting me know beta" Vitthal responded.

"No problem Uncle, anytime" Paakhi said before hanging up.

Vitthal turned to face Kamla angrily. He grabbed her arm and shoved her down on the bed. "You are by no means going to Mumbai!"

"I am going" Kamla answered coldly.

"You have to listen to me, I have spoiled you Kamla, letting you do whatever you wanted." But this shall last no longer" Vitthal said as he looked around for something.

"Ah!" he said pulling out Kamla's flight ticket from her suitcase.

"Look Vitthal.." Kamla started to say, but before she could finish, Vitthal had shredded the ticket into pieces write before her eyes.

"Vitthal!" Kamla cried out.

"Just shut up!" Vitthal yelled frustratedly. "Go make bhindi, I think that's what I'll eat today."

"Also, Paakhi and Sammy are coming over today, so it better be good."

Tears rolled down Kamla's face as she looked at her husband's changed behavior.

Vitthal's face softened only a little seeing this. "I am sorry Kamla but I'll not spare whoever comes in the way of my rajkumaari, be it even you."

Kamla's lips parted in shock.

"And besides I shouldn't have to be telling her mother how Paak and Pavitra our daughter is, she should already know."

~*~

"Sach?" Kalpana exclaimed. She had just auditioned for a show, and the produce told her that she was one of the best girls so far.

"Si Senorita" the producer said while chuckling. "You have an amazing talent."

Kalpana smiled and said thanks. "Well, we have more auditions and we will certainly contact you if we find you suitable for the role" the assistant Milli responded, eager to send Kalpana out.

She didn't like that Producer Ashok Kapoor was getting impressed by Kalpana. A so called talented girl who was from some sort of place called Bhopal.

"Okay" Kalpana replied shaking hands with both of them before turning to leave.

~*~

Kalpana had no idea what to do the rest of the day. She was feeling quite nervous, wondering whether she will be able to get the role or not. "Kalpi, you'll be fine" she muttered, encouraging herself.

Just then, she got Pakhya's phone call. "What's up?" Pakhya asked Kalpi.

"I just auditioned for a role" Kalpana replied brightly.

"Sach? Well, fingers crossed" Pakhya responded cheerfully.

"Thanks bhaiya" Kalpana replied. "It finally looks like I am getting one step closer to my dreams."

Here was a short update.😳 I will try my best to update soon!! ;)

Hope you all liked it. 😃

Thank you so much,
Pookhi








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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. Short and sweet. Raghav will find her soon. Hopefully in next chappy, but she wanted to fulfill her dreams without any help .self respect u know...let c what u store for u in next chappy.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riaka

Nice update. Short and sweet. Raghav will find her soon. Hopefully in next chappy, but she wanted to fulfill her dreams without any help .self respect u know...let c what u store for u in next chappy.



Thanks for the sweet comment. 😳

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