The way you make me Feel Ragna OS

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All it took was his one touch to set fire to my cold body. His touch made every cell every neuron and every part of my body to shiver. As he gathered to the corner the proximity with us made my body react in a way that I could never imagine. With each step he becomes closer with each step my body reacted in different way. With each step he took forward I took a step backward there was no way out the only exit was at the end of the room which raghav had locked. My eyes searched for places to hide to run away to disappear I didn't want to be here not in front of him heat began to evaporate from my body this again was a new feeling a new feeling that were caused by him this was not the first time this something strange has happened to me because of him in the past couple of days everything changed my concentration my peace my everything was gone because of him this men.I finally came to halt as soon as my hot body hit the cold wall there was no way out I around and there was no place to go I was stuck I was stuck against the wall the closer he came the more my body shivered, the more it trembled the more he came closer it more it become dehydrated, with him just inches apart I didn't have the ability or the power to look at him so I looked straight my view was blocked by his shoulders then it hit me how small I was compare to him my petite figure only reached to his shoulders unknowing why a apart of was happy to for that fact he was big yet the other part was scared I had no power to anything against him. I tried to slip away from both of sides each time he placed his arms around me just inches apart I was trapped, trapped within the arms of Raghav Singhania.

He moved his left hand and run his hand down my arm for I second I didn't know what happened all I know what that it felt like a volcano erupt with that all the files with in my hands dropped down to the floor at this point I was so numb my ability to think and understand just seemed to have disappeared. He placed his hand on top of my hand and pulled it towards his chest.

Very carefully he placed my hand on his heart he held my hand on his heart. I was shocked, touched, moved and properly felt every emotion that was related to shocked his heart pounded so fast for a moment I thought it might just explode. After a long silence he finally spoke "this is what you make me feel this is that effect you have on me this is all because of you Kapli" he whispered. I didn't know how to react i felt happy that I had such an effect on him for the first time in my life I felt so important to some one . Another part of me was at consistent battle with my brain he was my boss after all. I tried to move my hand away from his heart but instead he further pushed me against the wall and placed my hand on my heart my heart pounded the same way his did I wasn't surprised for the last couple of day whenever I thought about him my heart reacted in a similar way.

" the evidence is right infront of your heart beats the same way for me as my heart beats the same way for you" he whispered as soon his breath hit my numb body it sent shivers down my back again giving a new life to my body with all the energy in my body I tried to push him and run away I couldn't take this anymore my ability to control my self was pretty much gone if I stayed here any longer I wouldn't have any control over my body tried to push past him to go somewhere I can get a control over me but he was to strong for me my petite body was once again trapped with his arms and again I was pushed into the wall he grabbed both of my hands and locked him in his hands.

"just accept it that you love please just accept it" he whispered again. "I know the effect I have on you" I couldn't take this anymore my body lost the ability to fight against him so in my own way to protest I closed my praying to god that please stop me from going insane. I had to words to describe the feeling I got I could still feel his glare burring through me " open your eyes Kalpi" he ordered I didn't to want I couldn't face him I didn't have the power, ability or understand to face him. "open your eyes "he ordered again but this time I did opened my eyes "look at me" I couldn't reply so with the little energy I had I shook my head indicating a no. "why" he questioned but this time there was something different in his voice he voiced seemed to indicate that he was having fun was he loving this was he liking torturing me. I dint know what or how this happened but all I know is the world stopped when his lips lightly pecked my cheek my legs began to tremble with a slow release he let go of hand and fell straight on the floor heat poured out of my body for next few moments I became deaf mute and emotionless.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very intense - descriptive and so realistic - Cv's should give us this scene - heartbeats together & as one - sigh so romantic - thank you I loved it 👏
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Beautiful piece of writing Aimz
I love the way u describe Kalpi feelings, it was simply amazing
I love it
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Originally posted by: sheena_786

Very intense - descriptive and so realistic - Cv's should give us this scene - heartbeats together & as one - sigh so romantic - thank you I loved it 👏


Awww thank u sooo much i wish aisa kuch hooo to
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Well Done!!👏
You write so well😳
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That was intense, very beautifully written
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Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Beautiful piece of writing Aimz
I love the way u describe Kalpi feelings, it was simply amazing
I love it

awww thanx am glad u loved it
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very intense and realistic. loved it very much...
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wow, that was so intense
loved it
awesome os dear

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