RaGna ss: A dreadful life

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Prologue-

Kalpi- Kalpi is an 18 year old girl. She is a poor girl and loves her mother Kamla dearly, But unfortunately, Kamla doesn't love her because she's adopted. Her mother always tell her that how she's a curse to her. She is very smart in studies but needs to drop out from school because her Dad, Vitthal is sick from Tuberculosis. Kalpi always dreamt of a happy family. When she was a baby, Her biological mother sold her to Kamla for the sake of buying a gun to kill his biological father. Kamla tricked her to work at a restaurant but It turned out Kamla sold her prostitution. This made Kalpi very furious to Kamla and wants to seek revenge at any cost.

Kamla - She is a very selfish woman. She is around her early forties. She bought Kalpi when she was a baby. Because she was unable to conceive a baby. She now hates Kalpi and treats her like an animal. She told Kalpi to drop out from school as she has no money to pay for her school fees. Her main goal is to move Kalpi away from her and make her work as a prostitute at a nearby club. She is now the target of Kalpi.

Vitthal- He is a very loving father and a very kind-hearted person. He is around his early forties. He loves Kalpi very much like she's her own daughter and he's the only support Kalpi has in her life. He suffers from Tuberculosis and cannot go to work. He is unaware that his wife, Kamla forced Kalpi into prostitution. His dream is to make Kalpi successful in her life by giving her good education.

Pakhi- Pakhi is Kalpi's friend. She is a year elder than Kalpi. She met Kalpi at the club. She is also a prostitute. She had a very bad childhood. They friendship started when she first saw Kalpi crying and went there to comfort her. From that day, they became friends. She supports Kalpi and wants to get her out from the club. One day, she and Kalpi thought of a plan to escape from the club and were successful. She is Kalpi's one and only support.

Mrs. Cruz- She is the owner of The Pub where Pakhi and Kalpi are working as prostitutes. She's runs an illegal racket. She and Kamla made a deal to never let Kalpi escape from the pub. She always punishes Kalpi for not doing her job properly. She has an Italian boyfriend named Luigi. Her bodyguards are Ramesh and Suresh.

Ramesh and Suresh- They are Mrs. Cruz's bodyguards. They are hired for watching Kalpi's each and every step. But they were not successful when Kalpi and Pakhi escaped from the Pub one midnight.

Raghav-He's a very kind and sweet boy. He is 22 years old. He is in love with Kalpi. But Kalpi thinks he's just like other boys and rejected him. He proved Kalpi that he isn't like other boys and Kalpi started to develop feelings for him. He loves painting and has his own art work shop. He loves painting Kalpi's face.He promised Kalpi that one day he'll marry her. He understands Kalpi's pain and knows about her depressing past. He supports Kalpi's each and every decision.

Sammy- He is Raghav's childhood friend. He always supports Raghav and Kalpi. He is like a brother figure to Kalpi. He is in love with Pakhi and always pleases her and gives her gifts.


I made this ss very different from EMA serial. But the names of the characters are the same. Some words that occur in this ss such as "prostitute" may not be suitable for all readers. Readers prescription is adviced.

Guys, I really suck in writing ss. I hope this is understandable. This is inspired from a documentary that I watched yesterday. So I hope you like it and I'll only continue if you guys will say so.😊

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IfritAmbrose thumbnail
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wow..interesting n different concept..would love to read further..continue soon :)
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Wow a very hatke concept please do continue
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yup its interesting plz continue dear
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interesting and different at the same time good job update soon😛
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Part 1:

It was Sunday morning. Kalpi was sweeping the floor. She can hear Vitthal coughing very badly. She went beside her dad and gave him medicines.

K- Dad! Are you okay? Please take your medicines. You're coughing so badly!

V-(Coughing hardly) Yes Kalpi, Im absolutely fine.

K-Dad, how can you say that you're absolutely fine when you are coughing so badly. Please get up quickly and drink your medicine. If you need anything else, just let me know. I'll just sweep the floor before Mom comes home from the market.

After Kalpi gave vitthal his medicine, She immediately continued to sweep the floor. After five minutes, Kamla came inside the house from the market to purchase vegetables for lunch. She got mad at Kalpi because she's not yet done sweeping the floor

Kamla-Hey you (strangling kalpi on the neck) Why are you still sweeping the floor? You have been sweeping the floor for the past one hour and you're not still done with your work?

Kalpi- But mom, You're lying. You told me to sweep the floor five hours before..You're exaggerating.

Kamla- Oh really, now im lying? Let's see who's lying now.

Kamla strangled kalpi until she went very dizzy. Vitthal was screaming Kamla to stop all of this and was trying to stop her, But in vain. Vitthal atlast stood up from his bed and helped Kalpi to stand up.

A few minutes later, Kalpi woke up and she noticed that she was lying on the floor. She saw her dad infront of her trying to help her. She was crying.

Kalpi- Dad, Why is mom so bitter? Why is she like that?

Vitthal-You know princess, Your mom loves you. But her nature is just like that. Maybe she was stressed today.

Kalpi- But dad, By strangling me? I've never heared of a mom who loves her children and strangle them..She needs therapy, she's gone mad!

Vithal- I know Kalpi, sometimes she's mad. It's okay, next time i won't let anything happen to you, I promise.

Kalpi smiled at vitthal and hugged him and told him, "I love you dad, I'll always be with you"!

But will she always be with her dad? How will she deal with her psycho mom?

To know more read my next post!


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Nice update
Plz plz continue soon
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UPDATE SOON DEAR ITS REALLY NICE😛
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Itz nice... 👏
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Part:2

It was midnight. Kalpi was laying down on her bed with lights off. She's thinking of various methods on how to escape from her house. But as she was making a plan on her mind, A sudden pity came out of her heart. She's thinking about his sick dad. He can't leave him. And he has done a lot for her. How could she just leave him like that. Kalpi was very tensed thinking about her dad. But, that feeling of wanting to go out from jail can't just be resisted. Her thoughts became deeper and deeper and at last she fell asleep.

It was morning 6 am. Kalpi woke up with fear. For her, It was another day in the prison. She went to the bathroom to have a bath for school. After a warm and cozy bath, she stepped out of the bathroom and changed her uniform. With all of a sudden, Kamla was coming towards Kalpi's room to check on her. But, Kalpi had heared of her footsteps and closed the door. Kamla was furious. She was standing outside Kalpi's room and began to taunt her in the early morning

Kamla- Hey young lady, first of all, Why did you shut the door?

Kalpi- I was changing my uniform. Why do you have a problem?

Kamla- ( With a stern look on her face) Oh okay. Be quick and come downstairs for breakfast.

Kalpi- Okay.

Kalpi was ready for school. Kamla was placing the food on the dinning table. Vitthal was still asleep. Kalpi went downstairs and smelled the yummy food her mom made for her. All of the food she can see were all of her favourites. There was Aloo ka parantha, boondi raita, Bhindi, Bhaingan ka Bharta. She was surprised and gave her mother a surprising look.

Kamla- What? I made all of these for you!

Kalpi- But today isn't any special day, Not even my birthday. You don't even know when my birthday is. So why all of these? For what..You need something? (Giving kamla an attitude.)

Kamla- (Putting her hand on Kalpi's shoulder) Kalpi, I know im bitter, This is my nature. And I know you think I hate you, But it's nothing like that. You know that for the past 3 months your dad has been suffering from TB and we need enough money for his medicine's expenses. So, can you please drop out of school and start to have some job?

Kalpi- I know that dad is sick and you're not the only one who's worried about him. Even I'm worried about his condition too. But can't I do both? Schooling and job.

Kamla became silent for a minute and started to think of a new plan to persuade her from dropping out school.

Kamla- Darling, please try to understand. We don't have enough money to pay your school fees. It's not possible to keep you from sending to school.

Kalpi- (Trying to realize what Kamla is explaining her) Okay, I'll give it a try.But this is just for dad's sake.

Kamla- (Became happy) Okay!

Kamla- You know my friend Kanta, she has a friend who owns a restaurant. I think you can work there as a waitress.

Kalpi-(nodding her head) Okay, tell me address and I'll go there by myself.

Kamla-( Scared and dumbfounded) A..A...Actually, You don't have to go there today.

Kalpi- (Fearlessly) Why? will there be a lion who'll eat me up?

Kamla- ( Making excuses) No, not at all but It's better if i'll come with you after school so that you can talk to her more about the restaurant.. And so that she'll identify you. Because if you'll go there alone, She wont recognise you.Am I right..

Kalpi- Fine..

Guys I hope you like it and please don't forget to hit "like" Only if you like it.

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Part:3 coming soon

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