Ragnalicious momentsupated 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is during holi
Pakhi takes raghav away from kalpi just when kalpi is about to pick color from plate
Kalpi is thinking : yeh mey kya kar rahi hu ragha sir aur mein ... Kabhi nahi ho Sakta woh kya sach mujhse itna pyar karte hai ..kya woh yaha sirf mere liye aye hai ... Kya ye hamesha mere liye kuch bhi karenge isi tarah ... Kya woh mujhse hamesha pyar karenge ...jab unhe hamari iss alag hasiyat ka ehsaas hoga kya tabhi yeh dooriyaan mita payenge... Kya karo mein mein kyu unki taraf keeche jaa rahi hu ... Kya meri kismet raghav hai, aisa kyu lagta hain ki koidor hai no mujhe unse bandhe huye hai ek dard ka rishta ... Mujhe unki taklleef pareshaan kyu karti hai ... Kyu intezzar hai unka kya unke liye Maine aaj kisi se rang nahi khela ... Mey unka intezzar kar rahi thi ?pehla Rang lagane ke liye ? Bappa aap hi koi ishara dijiye ... Kya raghav meri kismet hai
Downstairs pakhi is about to put color on raghav but kalma maa stops her
Kamla : nahi pakhi raghav baba ne rang lagvane se mana kiya hai
Paki: par kalma maa aaj holi hai Sab chalta hai
Kamla : nahi pakhi Hume aisi zabardasti nahi Karni chaiye unki icha ka maan rakhna chahiye aur agar bappa chahenge to raghav baba khud hi rang jayenge
Meanwhile Kalpi bringing down the thall of rangs and kids running up and down push her and she trips and falls rolling down the stairs
Everybody shouts kalpi and raghav runs up and he holds her but they fall together down raghav bumps and starts bleeding and in tussle to save him kalpi touches his face but colors him
Raghav feels his wound and sees blood on his finger and kalpi lands up on him smearing her maan with his blood and basket of gende ke flowers falls on them
Ragna open eyes and sees they landed on bappa feet

Cont later
Time stopped for both of them kalpi on top of raghav her long dark tresses covered both n lost in eyelock
Kamla and chawl ppl: kalpi raghav baba aap theek hai...
Kalpi gets conscious of there closeness and raghav smirks and faint smile turns into happiness when he realized and sees her color on him and her shy smile
Kalma vitthal help them to get up but b4 anybody could see her kalpi runs up to her room
Kalpi stds in front of mirror is lost in thought : yeh kya ho Gaya looking at the maang there is knock on the door and kamla enters with raghav baba
Kamla looks at the lady sleeping on the bed and pulls the curtain in between the room
Kamla: woh kya hai naa Inhe sone dete hai , raghav baba aap kalpi se marampatti karva lijiye mein neeche sambhalti hu woh kuch shararati ladke kahi thandai mein bhaang na Mila de, kalpi beta tum raghav baba ka khayal Rakho
Kamla leaves and kalpi turns to see raghav
Raghav walks towards kalpi and kalpi turns to see in the mirror
Raghav behind her holds her waist and turns her brings her close comes near her and whispers in her ears : ab toh kismet bhi meri side par hai kalpana ... Jadh...raghav singhania
Kalpi close her eyes and remember how raghav fought goons for her how she took care of him on rainy night how his closeness affected her his coming to chawl for her and smile starts to appear she looks at him she raises her red colored hand and touches his heart and feels shy and turns to face mirror
Raghav kalpana reflection in the mirror her mang with his blood and his heart with her color both smile
Kalpi turns and leaves to get a first Id box raghav holds her hand and brings her closer kalpi smiles and says : aapka khoon beh raha hai
Raghav : iss waqt mein sirf tumhe dekhna chahta hu tumhare paas rehna chahta hu ...
Kalpi : nahi sir aapka ghav
Raghav puts finger on her lips : mein theek hu tumhare paas hu and he closes in on her
Kalpi : sir maa aayengi aur mujhe Bohot bada lecture mil jayega and smiles to see him disappointed
Raghav gets the bandage done reluctantly and pakhi comes
Pakhi takes then downstairs
Kamla : thanku baba aapne kalpi ko chot lagne se bacha liya
Neetu fuming in bk
Neeetu : arre yeh kya holi party koi gana shana bajao nacho ... Arre pakhi raghav ke saath dance karo
Raghav angrily looks at neetu and walks away
Pakhi : neetu aap jao yaha se please aap kyu ayi hai yaha ... Mujhe mere famy ke enjoy karne dijiye aap khurana ki party mein jaye
Neetu thinking khurana ke party mein 100 crore kaha
Music starts and Sammy comes to Raghav and says : kya hua itna smile kyu kar raha hai
Raghav looks at kalpi and Sammy understds
Sammy : isse acha mauka nahi milega kalpi ke saath waqt bitane ka music hai vazah bhi hai
Raghav smiles , Sammy takaes him to dance floor loud music starts playing and Pakya brings kalpi and paki to dance paki goes to dance with raghav and raghav stds there looking at kalpi
Kamla kalpi Pakya vithal dance together and Sammy looks at raghav he pushes him near kalpi and takes paki away
Raghav holds kalpi and water showers starts from the top of chawl and everybody dance to the tune forgetting their surrounding
Raghav takes kalpis hand and walks away
Cont
Raghav brings kalpi up on the terrace
Kalpi : sir aap mujhe yaha kyu laye hai
Raghav kyu Bharosa nahi
Kalpi : nahi sir woh yaha koi nahi ...
Raghav : toh .::: achi baat hai
Kalpi : sir aap ... Aai dhund rahi ho gi
Raghav stds between the door and her kalpi closes her eyes and ... SPLASH
He puts water on her and starts laughing kalpi is awestruck and runs to him he splashes more she runs behind him with pichkari and they fall into hug on ground
Raghav : yeh tum hamesha mijhpe kyu girti ho
Kalpi tries to get up but fails his closeness affecting her
Raghav brings her closer and puts her down and is lost in her eyes
Kalpi tries to shift but raghav stops her and picks her hand and brings to his lips
Kalpi starts to breath heavily and pulls her hand away and gets up
Raghav on the ground gives his hand to pull up
Kalpi smiles and throws water on him and runs raghav behind catches her at the door closes it b4 she gets there and smirks
Raghav : ab to yaha se aasani se Jane ko nahi milega
Kalpi : sir ab baas agar koi aa Gaya toh Bohot pareshani hogi
Raghav : tum darti Bohot ho ...: mey hu naa sambhal lunga tumhe kabhi musibat mein aane nahi dunga
Kalpi remembers how raghav had saved her when prem had accused her of stealing and during the restaurant bill and to save the chawl she looks at raghav he was there smiling waiting for a hug
She looks at him wideeyed at this gesture and shy std there
Raghav: it's okay don't worry chalo and he opens the door for her
Kalpi walks and reaches the door she steps out and stops turns bk and walks bk to raghav very near to him almost touching him to hug but hears her name called out
She backs out and turns runs away smiling looking bk at him

Contpart 3
Next day in the office
Raghav reaches office to see kalpi already on her desk working on a project
She looks up to see raghav smiling at her
K: GM sir and stares at him
R: kya dekh rahi ho ... Rang utra nahi Bohot soap use kiya
K: smiled mischievously and kept working on her computer
Sammy : GM guys
Raghav turns to see Sammy
R: what tumhare chehere se bhi rang Gaya meri mtg hai how will I go
Sammy : kalpi tum hi help kar do
K: Sammy sir mein
R: haa tum
Kalpi calls ramu kaka and tells him to get some things
Raghav goes in the office fuming picks up file and reading it
Kalpi knocks and comes inside with a bowl and towel
K: aap iske saath ...
R: tum iske saath Jo karna chahti ho karo rang tumne lagaya hai ab tum hi yeh fix karogi
Kalpi fumes makes a face
K: uthiye isse mein yaha toh nahi laga sakti na...
Raghav gets up and goes to other side and kalpi turns to the door
Raghav looks bk
R: waha kaha jaa rahi ho
K: restroom
R: iss taraf and opens the blinds and there's a door to a office break room of raghav
Kalpi surprised to see a room ther
K: mujhe nahi pata yaha room hai
R: Comeon
Raghav closes the door behind them
K: sir door kyu band kiya
R: miss kalpana yeh mera pvt rm yaha mere siva koi allowed nahi
Raghav removes his blazer and kalpi gets uncomfortable looks here and there
Then he removes his tie and wraps a towel and kalpi takes a sigh of relief and raghav smirks
Kalpi comes to him and applies paste on him and stares at his closed eyes his long eyelashes sharp features and his extremly handsome face his fragrance his attitude his caremaking her forget herself ,
She wanted to go in his hug but no ... Her teri meri duniya diff still worried her
Raghav slowly opened his eyes to see kalpi lost in him
R: kalpi
Kalpi startled and drops the paste on his shirt
K: sorry
R: kalpi it's okay I am used to yours blunders now infact mujhe achche lagte hai
Kalpi shyly smiles at him and turns to get a shirt for him from the closet , she chooses a nice sky blue shirt for him and turns to see raghav bare back ... wiping away the paste on his face and slowly he turns around and kalpi gasps and looks down
Raghav closes in on her she walks back to the wall and raghav takes the shirt from her
Kalpi closes her eyes and stops breathing his manly scent playing havoc inside her
R: meri shirt kharab karne ki sazaa toh milni chahiye while wearing his shirt
K: kya
R: waqt aane par ...
Raghav sides himesself and lets her go she runs smiling to him and raghav walks bk and asks for a hug
Kalpi nods a no and closes the door raghav smiles at her and closes his eyes , and suddenly door opens and kalpi runs into his arms but quickly steps bk and runs out again
Raghav smiles to himself and says to himself kalpana raghav singhania ... Sounds good ...perfect

Cont 4
A couple days later
Raghav and kalpi go out for a mtg little away from Mumbai for site selection in a remote part of a village
Raghav was still waiting for kalpana to accept their relation without any inhibitions and wanted to hear those words but she still kept a barrier of shyness , boss emp difference made it worse for her to fully accept him he tried hard to mk her realize his love is above the status or poor vs rich duniya . Sometimes he felt she had overcome that barrier with his effort but was just using it as a bahana to cover her shyness and her guilt that she was almost getting into reallyikn with him without family knowing
But he just wanted her to accept and he would take care of rest but that confession was not there
He was lost in his thoughts when kalpi knocked on his door in the hotel
K: sir woh mr khan aa Gaye hai woh hame location par le jaa rahe
R: okay let's go ... Sammy kaha hai
K : woh aage chale Gaye
R: tum yaha comfortae toh ho naa
K: ji sir yaha Sab theek hai
Raghav and kpi follow mr khan in car they arrive at a most beautif place lush greenery small lake mountains and plot in middle
Kalpi eyes just lit seeing that
K : yaha to ek ghar hona chaiye cottage ki tarah naba wknd par apni family ke aya jaa Sake
Raghav looks at her in admiration he turns towards mr khan r: cottages it is
Sammy : raghav yaha mall or country club with hotel soch rahe the
R : yes but ab chg karte hai yaha sm ctg banege affordable bhi not too big and I hv idea ..::
Kalpi looks at this man who she never wanted to see and talk whose att drove her crazy and now she was slowly falling for him or had she already , his time and again saving her his confession his quirky behavior his handsome chiseled features his care concern his loneliness his dard his love for her had turned her world upside down
Kalpi thought yeh mein kya soch rahi hu agar maa ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe maar hi Degi ... Ab mein raghav sir se kaise kahu ke mein bhi unse ... Aai kya soche gi nahi kalpi
Edited by Barunash - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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haila so filmy...aapne to shaadi hi karadi !!!!
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Thoda Deere Deere aage bado... Maang bharna kiss aur din .. Which festival is next ?
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interesting !!! looking foward the next part !!!
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wow..awesome update soon dear 😳
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Wow, that's really nice. Ka ash kuch aisa hi ho.
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Superb update
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very nice and this is for u🤗 for ragna's accidental marriage update soon
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Updated
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Loved it awsome great work

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