FF: Love, Revenge & Regrets Part 51only RagNa updt on Pg 152 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5 updated:

Singhania Chawl:

Pakya, Vitthal and Kamla in their home. Kamla is cutting vegetables and Vitthal is romancing with her. Eating cut vegetables of her plate. Kamla scolds him Vitthal kya kar raha hai tu? Mujhe sabji banaana hai. Kalpi bhi aati hogi. Bechaari kaam mein itni biji hoti hai.

Pakya: Kya aayi humaare le bhi toh kabhi khaana bana sirf Kalpi rehti hai kya is ghar mein. Ye sab cheating hai. Arre mein toh bolunga ki chal aaj apan sab baahar hotel jaate hain.

Vitthal: Sahi bola Pakya! Kamla chal naa chal tayaar ho jaate hain.
Pakya: Haan aur main Kalpi ko phone karke seedhe restaurant aane ko bolta hun. Kyun?
Kamla: (smiling) Haan haan Pakya tu Kalpi ko phone karna. Chal mein tayaar hoti hun.
Vitthal: aaj ekdum tip top tayaar hona ekdum heroine jaise 😉
Kamla rolling her eyes tu bhi naa vitthal kabhi toh sudhar jaa..
Kapoor mansion:
Al are fussing over Aakash, talking to him, asking about him. Saahil seems very impressed with him and Neet is all over him. Hain beta Hain beta...etc
Paakhi is irritated to see all this.
Paakhi: (to herself) Kaun hai ye jo sab isey itna importance de rahe hain? Kal se mujhe kisi ne nahi poocha. hmmm aur iske aage peeche sab ghoom rahey hain.
She comes out of her room and Prem calls her:
Prem: Pookhi I know tum Aakash se mil chuki ho but abhi mein tum dono ka formal intro karaata hun.(Paakhi interrupts and says its Paakhi my name is Paakhi). Haan wohi hum pyaar se pookhi bulate hain.
Aur Paakhi ye Aakash hain mera puraana dost. Kaafi saal London mein tha wahan uske dad ka business handle karta hai.
Yahan business expansion ke liye aaya hain.
He was about stay in hotel mom can you believe it? But I told him no way you have to stay here at our home..
Neetu is suddenly all greedy and like haan haan afterall ye meri best friend ka beta jo hai how can you do this Aakash beta?
You have to stay here with us hain!!! Theek hai beta?
Afterall Prem is your friend and your future business partner toh its better you live here. Aasaani hogi na beta? Achha you must be so tired and hungry, how can I be so careless? Wait haan beta main abhi kuch banwaati hun tumhaare liye. You want something Indian????
Aakash: Aunty, Prem really I am quite touched by your behaviour towards me. My mom did say that our friends in India are really so helpful. Actually I thought I will stay in hotel only aap logon ko khaamakhaa takleef...(while saying so he looks at Paakhi and immediately he pauses) uhmmm...mera matlab ab main aap logon ko manaa bhi toh nahi kar sakta toh just for you all I will stay here that is only if uncle and Paakhi also dont mind.
Saahil: Arre nahin beta humein koi problem nahi hain! Please isey apna hi ghar samjho. Aur hume bhi apna samjho.
Aakash: stealing glances at Paakhi says..zaroor uncle lagta hai is baar India mein baat ban hi jaayegi!
Paakhi: She is literally staring at Aakaash noticing every move and listening to his each word. She blushes when he had looked at her and decided to stay. She felt he was looking at her too, she felt very very strange as if she could feel his gaze and she gets very concious. She stands up and tells everyone I have to leave just going for a walk.
She gets ready and leaves to meet Kamla maa. On her way she calls her and talks to her asking where she is. Kamla is about to say when Vitthal nods his head saying No. But its too late Kamla already tells her the restaurants name and Paakhi says I'll be there Kamla maa.
Singhania constructions office:
Just as Kalpi is leaving office she gets a call. Its Pakya and he tells her to come directly to the restaurant. She says kyun kuch khaas hai kya?
Pakya: Tu aa rahi hain ki nahi baaki baad mein baat karte hain.
Kalpi: Okay daada main aa jaaungi. She looks tensed. Aai ko kya bolu unko toh mera shakal dekh ke hi shak ho jaayega. She moves when Raghav pulls her hand. She is surprised. Ye aap kya kar rahey hain Sir?
He pulls her harder till she collides him, he grabs her by the waist and locks his hands around her waist. Her hands on his chest and their faces inches away. They have a long intense eyelock. Suddenly Kalpi comes out of the trance and says Sir ye sab theek nahi hai, please mujhe jaane dijiye. 😳
Raghav is completely lost in her and comes back to reality when Kalpi says Sir once again.
Raghav: Kya theek nahi hai Kalpana? Mera tumhe is tarah apne paas rokna? Toh phir tumne bhi kal shyaam ko jo kiya woh theek nahi kiya.
Kalpi: Her heart starts banging against her chest. She thought it would come out of her mouth. She could feel Raghav heart beat faster too. It was as if both the heart were racing each other. She gulped, her mouth went dry and looked into his eyes thinking he can't remember all that no way! Oh No Kalpi isey kaise pataa chala.
Raghav: By the way woh tumhaara pink lipstick aaj tumne naa daal ke achha kaam kiya. Waise mujhe kaafi achha lagaa tha.
Kalpi: Was feeling feverish when she heard lipstick. She felt her whole bodyheated up and burning. Raghav's proximity affected her so much that she could lose her control. She saw his lips smiling naughtily at her. His eyes full of mischief and his hands tight wound around her thin waist. She moved her hands from his chest to his biceps, they work strong muscles from his gym workout. Her stomach was churning and she felt miserable as well as guilty to feel this passion towards him. All she did was close her eyes and bent her head. She stopped struggling and was enjoying all the attention Raghav gave her and all that he was doing to her.
Raghav: realizing that Kalpi is feeling the same towards him brings his face closer and whispers into her ears...Jaao maaf kiya! And releases her.
Kalpi is too stunned to react. She felt relieved and disappointed at the same time. and looked at Raghav with disbelief!
Raghav: Aao tumhe tumhaare ghar chodh deta hun...saying so he grabs her waist again by his left hand and they start going towards his car.
Kalpi: She is all turned on! And now keeps staring Raghav very very passionately and has a small smile on her face.
Restaurant:
The Jadhav family arrives at the restaurant and gets a table. They sit and wait for Kalpi when Paakhi arrives. Arrey kamla maa aaj kya special hai. Vitthal is shocked to see her there and looks at Kamla maa annoyed.
Kamla maa: is a bit scared of Vitthal but talks to Paakhi. Arrey Paakhi beta woh aaj Pakya ko bhi job mil gaya hai naa toh hum log sab woh kya kehte hain saaliberate karne aaye hain. tu bataa tu yahan kya kar rahi hain?
Paakhi: Wow Pakya cool. Congratulations!! phir toh celebration pakka banta hai par Kalpi kahan hai? Zaroor woh khadoos usse extra kaam karwa raha hoga. Koi baat nahi main hoon na chalo chalo order karte hain, mujhe toh bahut bhook lagi hai.
Kamla: Haan beta tu hi aaj order kar de.
Vitthal: A bit upset looks here and there and towards the door.
Raghav's Car:
He plays radio and the song Beintehaa plays. Kalpi feels shy and Raghav is all in a dreamland He is smiling. Kalpi steals galnces to look at him and thinks to herself. Sir is looking so happy, I have not seen him smiling so much all these days. Seems he has forgotten about the revenge and this is all because of you Kalpi.. He trusts you, respects you and above all he loves you. He is the one Kalpi he is the one for you. He is so bereft of love so now you have to give him all that you have and keep him this happy always! She smiles thinking all this and looks out of the window. They reach the restaurant.
Kalpi: Thanks but now you better go home dont keep waitin here please.
Raghav: If you kiss me goodbye then I will leave.
Kalpi: All blushing aap theek toh hai na main aisa kuch nahi karne waali and runs into the restaurant.
When she enters she looks out for her family and finds them.
She is disappointed to see Paakhi there. They all were laughing and eating and having fun.
Her eyes become moist and she thinks Paakhi ko bhi bulaaya and they did not even wait for me to order neither did they try to call me to know where I am.
She turns back and comes running outside. Raghav sees her and gets out of his car and goes to her.
Raghav: Kya hua Kalpi tum theek toh ho. she doesn't reply.
He goes in to check and finds the Jadhav family enjoying with Ms Kapoor. He is surprised to see this. He comes out and asks Kalpi, ye tumhaara family dinner tha naa?
Kalpi: hmm tha, Raghav Sir can I request you to please take me somewhere else I am feeling suffocated in here.
Raghav: Sure, lets go to my place.
They both go to his place and Kalpi is all silent in the car. Once at his place Kalpi excuses herself to use the washroom. She cries there silently and then washes her face and comes out.
She finds the lights switched off. She gets scared and she calls out to Raghav. She goes into a room and opens the door and finds the room full of candles...and dimlight and a table in the centre with a pizza. Raghav had ordered it before getting into the car.
She is mesmerized by the efforts taken by him and asks him
Sir Kya aap sach much mujhse itna pyaar karte hain?
Raghav: Nahin main tumhein isse zyaada pyaar karta hun. I cant live without you kalpi and hugs her.
She hugs him back and feels nice as she feels that there is someone to whom she is the most important person and his priority.
Tears flow from her eyes and she thanks her deva!
They both eat, and talk about each others lives. Kalpi shares her insecurities and how she landed in the hostel etc.
Raghav feels very hurt. I am sorry he says!
Kalpi: Why are you sorry?
Raghav: If I would hv been there I would never let this happen.
They both stand in his balcony which has a beautiful view of the city. Kalpi rests her head on his shoulder and feels secured and Raghav feels complete!
He wishes if she could be near him like this forever. He turns her around and brings her closer and kisses her forehead, her eyes, her cheeks one by one, her neck...Kalpi is all shy and turns around. He moves her hair and kisses again on the nape of her neck. Kalpi likes it and she turns again shyly and hides her face in his chest they both laugh and have a great evening of togetherness.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry thoda long update ho gaya...hope you guys enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Edited by priya_remix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: kanchan133

ausem update👍🏼...really love ur ff😳

Thanks Kanchan. You people appreciate it thats wat encourages me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lol...long update ke liye sorry😕 buddy I'd love reading this forever...please always write long chapters. I am greedy you know😉
Thanks for the beautiful update dear... this is so so sooo well written... I can see this actually happening in the show👏

Please continue soon 😊
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Itz really damn awesum...
Frankly speaking i ws so lost in reading tat i felt d update small...
Jus eagerly w8ting 2 read d nxt part... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow ...Awsome Updates Dear...
👏👏👏👏👏
I Fell In Luv With Ur FF😳😳😳
Luved Ragna Intimate Scenes And Pakhi New Found Love☺️
Waiting For Ur Next Update Eagerly...😃
Thanks For PM.
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I'm so loving this! Awesome!
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I love it! Great story! Tks sooo much! I love reading these ff! Awesome job!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi everyone,
Sorry Sorry Sorry to keep you all waiting! I was busy with my baby's school admissions, plus guests at home, had to be busy cooking and cleaning all day!! :(
So I continue...
PART 6:
Raghav's residence:
Both Raghav and Kalpi are lost in each other when Kalpi's phone rings. She comes back to reality. She checks the phone...it is Kamla maa...she doesn't answer and sees 10 missed calls..
She feels guilty, maybe Aai is worried. She calls back and Kamla answers.
Kamla: Kalpi beta tu kahan hai hum tera intezaar kar rahey the. hotel mein kabse tum phone kyun nahi utha rahi thi mujhe tumhaari chinta ho rahi thi.
Kalpi: Woh aai meri tabiyat theek nahi thi toh main thoda so gayi thi...
She never like lying to her mother but she always showed how strong she is and did not like being weak in front of others not even her Aai. She did not want her aai t know that she was hurt to see them enjoying their family dinner with Paakhi. She cuts the call, turns to Raghav and tells him that she has to leave.
He holds her hand and tells her that he would drop her home.
She agrees reluctantly. Raghav drives her back to her home and he stops the car near her chawl. They both look at each other and are quiet. Finally Kalpi breaks the silence and says goodnight and bye.
Raghav: Tum kal office aaogi naa toh see you tomorrow. Please dont say bye as I hate goodbyes.
Kalpi gives a faint smile and says theek hai phir, kal milte hain.
Raghav smiles and he leaves. Kalpi goes home changes and goes to sleep.
Kamla, Vitthal and Pakya arrive and see Kalpi has already gone to sleep. Kamla thinks yesterday she was so happy then what happened today. She touched Kalpi's forehead and checked if she is fine and covered her with a sheet and retired for the day.
Kalpi slowly opened her eyes, and thought to herself, I know you love me aai but then why is it that whenever Paakhi is around you never miss me!
She recollects her moments with Raaghav and feels happy and at peace amd sleeps well.
Kapoor residence:
Paakhi reaches home and the lights are switched off. She walks in slowly with her shoes in her hand. Suddenly she sees someone in the kitchen and goes to the kitchen. She finds Aakash in black tracks and a black shirt which is unbuttoned. He was drinking water from a bottle and hearing Paakhi in the kitchen he almost choked himself!!
He had water all over his face nose and mouth. He started coughing. Paakhi went near him and asked, are you ok?
Aakash: What!!?? You crazy?? You almost scared me to death. Gosh you look scary in the dark! Realsising what he just blabbered he bit his tongue and said Sorry I mean I did not expect anyone at this hour. The waterjug in my room was empty so I came here to have some. Now that I am scared all my sleep has gone.
By the way What are you doing here roaming as a thief in your own house?? he asked with a smile.
Paakhi sits on the kitchen shelf and looks at him with knitted eyebrows. This time in casuals he looked even younger, more handsome and boyish. His ruffled hair made him look cute and she noticed he had dimples when he smiled. She smiled back at him and said mera ghar hai main jaise chahe aaun jaaun.
Hmmm actually mujhe bhi neend nahi aa rahi.
Aakash: Toh lets have some coffee then? Shall I make it for you too?
Paakhi: You will make coffee???? Let it be, main banaungi mujhe kamala maa ne sikhaaya hai.
Aakash: Raised an eyebrow, Kamla maa?? Woh kaun hai I thought your moms name is neetu. Paakhi explains everything about her and Kamala's relation to him. She herself gets surprised that how could she talk to him about everything so easily. I mean I just met him today and I already have a feeling that I have known him for years. I feel so comfortable around him.
She thought he was a decent fellow for not once did he try to flirt with her when she was in the kitchen all alone with him. In fact she noticed that he wasn't even looking at her. Shyaam ko toh bada flirt kar raha tha and now he is not even looking at me??
Aakash in his thoughts: Gosh! Can't believe this? Am I dreaming or something? She is so beautiful and here in front of me. And she is so sweet and friendly, I better not do something stupid to lose this moment.
Paakhi gets down and start making coffee and this time Aakash is standing next to her leaning his back on the shelf facing her.
He just cannot stop himself from looking at her and thinks I must do something else to stop looning over her. He finds the fruit basket and picks up an apple and bites into it.
Paakhi thinks this fellow is cute, he is not khadoos like Raaghav but not overfriendly types too. He is sweet, he made me laugh and now he is listening to me. She says to him, you seem to be an interesting person. For a businessman like you, you are very down to earth. I think we can be good friends!
Aakash nods his head biting the apple and says hmm why not?
They both go out to the living room sit on the sofa and talk for a while. Paakhi is all chatter chatter chatter and after some time she looks at Aakash he is asleep on the sofa with one of his legs hanging down and his neck in an awkward position.
His unbuttoned shirt giving view of his bare chest and his cute face made Paakhi shiver for a second. She found him to be cute.
She picked up his leg and placed a cushion under his head and got a pink blanket from her room and covered him. She then went to her room and closed the door.
Next morning:
At Kapoor residence:
Aakash wakes up and find himself in the pink blanket. He is just coming to his senses from his sleep when Prem comes to the living room and sees Aakash on the sofa with Paakhi's blanket. He looks at him questioningly as to what was he doing there on the sofa?
Also follows Neetu who finds it very intriguing to see Aakash in Paakhi's blanket and in the living room. She starts cooking stories in her mind and smiling. Prem is about to ask something when she holds his hand.
Aakash is all embarassed and sheepishly looks at them and says I was not getting sleep so was walking around in the living room pata nahi kab aankh lag gayi. I dunno where this blanket came from.
To be continued------
Edited by priya_remix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...lovely update 👍🏼 please continue soon

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