RagNa FF- I Finally Found Someone, Update on Pg 107- 1st November - Page 53

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Nandini!!! I am missing this FF!!! Please update na. 😭


Awww...will update in few mins. Thanks for being so kind 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hii friends 😃!!

How are you all doing?? Hope things are great at your end. Am extremely sorry for the long absence, it wasn't a conscious decisions, just happened and before I realized time flew away rather quickly Thanks you so much for the overwhelming love and support you guys have showered on this FF. Special thanks to all those who took out time to drop messages on IF & FB🤗 Its indeed amazing and I feel totally blown away😃

Before you guys start throwing good chunk of rotten eggs & tomatoes, guess I should get back to work😉. Pata nahi kitne log ko iss FF ki story yaad hain (koi gal nahin, aap hamesha line ke aage mujhe hi pavoge😉 mujhe bi kuch kaas yaad nahi hain🥱🥱😆) Still am daring to update 😳. Apologies in advance for typo & grammatical errors...Thank you once again!!

Part - 19

Rest of the night passed unadventurously both Kalpi - Raghav trying hard to avoid each other; failing bitterly as they bumped into each other repeatedly, getting even more embarrassed. While Sammy & Maya enjoyed their nervousness covered under timid smile, a pair of eyes is green with envy; needless to say it was Pakhi Kapoor. She couldn't believe her plan to impress Raghav fell flat on her face as she hardly got to see him in the whole evening, forget impressing while Kalpi ended on dance floor with him. How much ever she tried, couldn't help envy Kalpi for being in Raghav' good books, a feat which she failed to achieve. But she is not someone who gives up and made a plan to make Raghav, her chauffeur for the night.

At the same time far away from the crowd Kalpi is trying to call someone on phone; restlessness & anxiety seeping from each of pore of her. Dressed in ankle length flowing gown with minimal make up, bathed in moonlight she is cutting a pretty picture. Raghav unable to find her in the party came searching and stood in tracks drinking her beauty. He couldn't figure out what's making her more endearing; fitting dress which hugged her like second skin or exposed slender back glistening under moonlight or stray hair falling on her forehead which she lazily tucks behind her ears something which his fingers itched to do, or little frown that embraced her forehead...she is looking like a dream. Raghav was staring at her agape. God knows for how long he stayed like that, jolted to reality with her voice "Sir you here?? Aap ko mujse kuch kaam tha". She looked bit surprised not to forget conscious too. It took him a moment to collect his incoherent thoughts. Is everything fine, he asked hiding her embarrassment of getting caught. Earning a nod...how you are going home, he continued while checking watch that showed half past 11. She informed him about a colleague offering to drop home but after an hour & her failed attempts to get a taxi. Part of him dearly wanted to spend some more time with her even that means being her chauffeur; he readily offered to drop her home. The very idea of sitting beside him alone was enough to turn the poor girl crimson with shy and she nodded "No" followed by a feeble reply. Raghav was amused by this side of her, which is unknown to him & pleasantly surprised knowing the reason behind her demure form. Before he tried calling Sammy, Maya came with Sammy tailing behind. Raghav can you drop me home, asked Maya. My car has flat tyres she added before he enquired further. But Maya...Raghav's hesitant voice was interrupted by Sammy. Kalpana why don't you join them...your house falls on the way enquired Sammy. She looked hesitantly but Sammy cajoled her to get into the car. Maya sleekly got into front seat not before exchanging a wink with Sammy.

Drive was almost silent with three of them lost in their own thoughts. Raghav rehearsing lines to apologize Kalpi for impromptu dance; Kalpi trying hard to shut wandering thoughts about her khadoos boss and Maya planning to bring the duo closer. As planned before she got down in the middle mouthing some lame excuse (to be picked by Sammy) making room for Kalpi to join Raghav in the front seat. Rest of the drive was absolutely silent and the silence slowly grown thicker making them even more uncomfortable. She could feel his eyes roaming on her form and he could sense her stealing glances. Needless to say both of them wanted silence to break and wished other one to do the onus. As the silence became unbearable he called her "Kalpi", his voice unusually husky. Surprise is too little word to describe her state hearing Kalpi from his mouth but she quickly composed herself looking at him expectantly. Little did she know it's one of those days when her khadoos boss is left for words forget making a conversation He felt like an idiot in early teens who shutters to ask a girl on date. The silence was broken by shrill voice of her phone. She quickly picked up the call to hear worried voice of her dad. Instantly a smile adorned her delicate petals as she lovingly calmed her baba; she informed him about Raghav dropping her home and before she could cut the line, Kamala grabbed the phone. She scolded Kalpi for being late while Pakhi baby has reached home a while ago. "Aai did she called you to inform about her where abouts?? Kalpi asked meekly. She very well knew it will be other way round but as always the hoped against the hope. Nah re Kalpi, tujhe pata hai na mujhe pakhi baby ki chinta hain, raat bi bahut hogayi aur uss se baat kare bina mujhe neendh nahi aati...Kalpi cut the line half way unable to hear her mother blabbering about someone else. The colour from her cheeks faded away instantly!! Raghav felt a sharp pain in his heart; couldn't help curse Pakhi & Kamala for hurting Kalpi. He couldn't fathom it's the same girl who was dancing with him a while ago; blissful, full of life. He badly wanted to return colour to her cheeks & smile on her lips, not just for the night but forever, something which will soon become his sole aim to live.

Drive was painfully silent as both are engrossed in deep thoughts. Just 20 minutes before reaching her home, he found a reason to break the silence. Kulfiwala on the beach road, who he despises any other day, looked like an angel in disguise for the night. He quickly brought the car to halt calling the vendor to stop. Kalpi's thoughts broke with the screeching sound and she woke up to a shocking surprise of Raghav Singhania, brand conscious, cleanliness freak buying Kulfi from street vendor. They both savoured different kulfi's & ice creams without hesitation. Raghav's dark humour & sarcasm was new to her, something she enjoyed to bits; she laughing whole heartedly was a sight to behold for him. Raghav & Kalpana enjoyed the little moments walking along the beach & settled near the shore tasting heavenly Kulfis. There was no status quo, etiquette, brashness, urge to revenge or prove the worth; it's just Raghav and Kalpana, two kids who lost their childhood & innocence to harshness of life way before. They talked and talked from solving maths problems to favourite Kulfi flavour rediscovering their childhood friendship. Amidst this, Raghav was watchful enough not to bring Kamala or Pakhi in between. Their talks seemed endless as time flowed from minutes to hours. The night was just perfect, it was one of the best days of their life; none of them is willing to move as everything else in life felt useless except their company. May be nature has something else planned for the night; something more to make the moment special forever. Suddenly Kalpi felt a drop on her face and so is Raghav; before they could make way to the car it started raining heavily and in no time they are completely drenched. They ran towards a shabby tent nearby as the car was parked almost 1km far. The tent was no shelter from heavenly outpour and soon both of are washed completely. But getting wet in the rains hardly bothered them as they cherished every moment and what mattered the most was their togetherness.

Soon Kalpi started shivering and turned in molten pool of shy feeling conscious of her dress which by then is perfectly showing off her assets from drenched clumsy fabric. Raghav was quick to understand her uneasiness and draped her with his wet jacket; in the process his fingers lightly brushing her skin and wiped away water from her face using other hand. She felt a jolt pass through her spine. He could sense the slight quiver she felt under his touch and taken aback for a moment; unknowingly a tiny smile came on his lips remembering their dance. Unpredictable monsoon poured hard coupled with thundering & lightening as if washing their sorrow, pain, angst and loneliness pushing them close; no one knew who made the first move but she is standing close to him hiding her face in his chest, his hand wrapped around her protectively and other hand caressing her head lovingly. God alone knows how long they stayed in each other's embrace. After a while Raghav broke the trance, cautious enough not to make her feel awkward. Strom has passed and it's drizzling lazily. He slowly made way towards his car taking her along. Suddenly she stumbled on something and lost balance; he caught hold of her tiny waist before she kissed wet ground, in the process he held his forearm for support. Her dress is still wet with water dripping from tips and he is no better. The smell of the sweetness of her breath mingled with smell of her hair and skin has awakened something deep inside him; a need, a thirst that has taken over the very core of his being...!! His narrowed gaze devoured her body while his breath lingered over her passionately. She felt her skin burning under his gaze a feeling which is rather new to her till that day. He kissed her on the neck ever so softly.

She felt a jolt pass through her body with velvety touch of his lips and she forgot to breath. His lips are still on her nape...his breath caressing her skin. His strong masculine odour filled with cologne is driving her crazy. A part of her mind is slamming her for allowing him ...but her heart felt it right and her body responded to his touch on its wish. Raghav slowly raised his head and moved to the crook of her neck. He caressed her neck with his hot breath and nuzzled his face in her crook making her go jittery in her lower limbs. He is holding her shoulder with one hand while the other hand took its position on her waist. She was blushing heavily and he is enjoying the effect he had on her. A wicked thought crossed his mind and he slightly nibbled her ear lobe making her insane. Unable to contain the feelings she flinched and snaked her hand around his neck for support. This was the first time she was touched by a man intimately; his touch made her alive as if she was dead all along. She is breathing unevenly with her heart slamming wildly ready to break any moment and her virgin body shivering under his touch. She couldn't bring herself to look at him, so he put his finger beneath her chin and lifted her face to meet his eyes. The sarcasm that was usually present in his eyes was gone, replaced by deep yearning. His one arm around her clasping her to him and the other one softly tracing her cheeks. He is staring into her eyes...and she holds his anxious burning gaze for a moment...eventually her attention is drawn to his mouth...for first time in 22 years she wants to get kissed. As if he read her mind, he leaned in and starts to kiss her, softly, sweetly, tugging at her lips with his. She was stumped at first but recovered soon as the waves of passion broke over her; she clutched his collar to steady herself and opened up to his quivering lips. Her hair flew from the breeze, covered both their faces as his hands started on an independent caressing journey from her face to shoulders to back and beyond...he broke the kiss and buried his face in her neck, nuzzling it softly. She shudders with passion and held his arm for support. Gripping his upper arms, she feels his biceps, he's surprisingly strong... muscular. He starts kissing her again; his kiss is demanding, his tongue and lips coaxing her. She moans, and her tongue tentatively meets his. Their mouths and tongues explored each other; His one hand remains in her hair, the other travels down the spine to her waist and flexes over her backside and squeezes gently. She shuddered at his intensity and broke the kiss panting for breath. It was scary how powerful and overwhelming his need for her was. He wasn't just kissing her; he is possessing her; her mouth; her body; her very soul. Her eyes met his gaze. He is staring at her with eyes full of yearning, love and angst. She looked at him for a moment and pulled his head to her and kissed his lips ever so gently; a butterfly kiss pure, gentle, fleeting, delicate and tantalizing. She walked away quickly leaving him flabbergasted; he followed the suit lazily. The night was one of the best things that ever happened to both of them. They walked together towards a new horizon silently thanking almighty for everything that transpired. Neither of them knew what is in store the very next day; nor about the chink in their external armour or changing relationship...all they knew is it's the best day of their life, something their savour, cherish and treasure for eternity no matter however worse or ugly life turns on them !!

P.S. Lately I realized nothing can turn worst than this update but still bear with them. As they say practice makes one perfect who knows some day I might surprise you folks with near perfect update. Tabtak ke liye issi se kaam chalalena specially the last bit...hope it's passionate enough to calm down all you angry birds.

Thank you once again for the overwhelming love you guys have showered on this crazy piece of writing. Take care and stay hooked till I get back brushing my writing skills, till then no rotten eggs😉😆😆!!


P.P.S. Phew...am updating this FF almost after an year🤢🤢 you guys are indeed awesome. Kis pede ka phal kateho tum log?? Itna sabar kiya ek stupid FF ke liye ?? Thank You So much !!

Edited by nandinidavid96 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Am I dreaming ...have u updated in real ???? (*pleasantly shocked)
Ohk ..ohk ...I can decipher that later


RES !!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maarushkaa

Am I dreaming ...have u updated in real ???? (*pleasantly shocked)

Ohk ..ohk ...I can decipher that later


RES !!! 😳


LOL...kabhi kabhi kuch galtiya hojate hain, update is one of them😳😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
😲 😃 Really? An update? Yeeaah... this was one of my fav FFs. I still remember last two updates so well. Now getting to read an update is so so fab. I'd logged on to update mine; and got stuck in reading yours. 😆 You're a fab writer and welcome back. Hope you stay for long now. 😃 Superb update, loved the way you portrayed passion and beautiful moments; definitely one of your fortes. I was lost in the update and realised it ended, it was so beautiful. Do please try to update soon. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏 claps is not for update yet, but for "Updating"

😆 and meanwhile, I will wait for weekend to re-read last two chapters and get back the flow, before reading this one...

I am so happy you have decided to continue your stories Nandini 🤗

till I read it, thought to just express my happiness.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for continuing your stories.
Really awesome update. Pakhi being pakhi tried her best for Raghav but all in vain 😆😆.
Sammy and Maya are true friends. Love ragna moments on the beach.
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW ! An exhilarating story !!! BTW is it an 6 monthly update story ??? I had missed it but enjoyed reading since last few days ! Thanks for giving such a lovely story . Now I will have to WAIT another 6 months for the next update !!! Though your updates are long and lovely , it will be a REAL treat to the readers if you can update sooner than 6 months period ! Well written , keep it up ! I don't think anyone will think of eggs /tomatoes after reading such a Romantic update ! In reality, all RagNa fans would have 'migrated' to dreamland of RagNa !!!!! Thanks again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update dear..


U know what i thnk months ago i asked someone about this FF nd she said that ur last update was the end of this story.. I was like really.. Why.. Why did she ended this FF so early.. I love this story.. But today when i read that u updated i was shocked.. Was happy.. No..no no.. Very very very happy..

Anyways now tym to peetofie that frnd of mine jisne mujhe jhooth bola..


Plz update nxt chappy soon..
Waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
After ages, but worth a wait... Beautiful Update! 😃

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