Joint Effort OS: Jealous Raghav: DONE!~

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JOINT EFFORT by many forum members... Started by @Veeranu, ended by @dreamyjennice...
and contributed by many other ... let me gather names..!!

Tis is my idea.. I want Kalpi to have a best friend who is a guy from the boarding school... He knows A to Z abt Kalpi and vice-versa.. He calls Kalpi as Pari and loves to tease her... He is also the project manager of Raghav's Alibaug land thing... He sees Kalpi and is super happy... Kalpi too is excited to see him.. This guy goes and hugs her tightly infront of Raghav, Maya and Sammy and Kalpi hugs him back tightly... Tis all is noticed by Raghav and he feels jealous... The project discussion is voer and they r all going back... Tht guy tells tht he would drop Kalpi since he wants to spend time on his own.. But Raghav gets super angry abt this and tells tht they have to reach Mumbai since he had promised Kamla Bai tht he will frop Kalpi at home by night... Thy guy gives Kalpi one last hug and Raghav controls himself... But the shocking thing is tht he kisses her on the cheek and Raghav had to crush Sammy's shirt to control his anger.. 😆.

Rags is super angry but as usual" miss jadav if ur over with this milaap let's go..u already r my responsibility now and I wouldn't have bothered but have promised ur mom" kalpiis hurt as she moves to go..the guy..say his name is abhay and he's as super handsome..stops her ..looks towards rags.." Excuse me Mr.singhaniya...she's no tension on anyone..plz get that right..as for her going well she isn't going with you ..she's grown up to hold her responsibility and she frees you from that..you may leave..." Rags, Sammy Maya are all shocked..confused ..rags yells..miss jadhav we r getting late..kalpi" but sir, I do free you ..he has every right to tell you on my behalf..I have given them tjs right..she takes abhay phone and calls kamla.aayi I will be coming with abhay.. Plz tell rags not to take tension" rags talks to kamala and is utterly shocked when kamla says..abhay hai wahaan..well u can go baba..kalpi is safest with abhay" and rags is very very angery and hurt at same time...he sees kalpi is smiling and his holding abhay hands...he storms off from there and Sammy and Maya just look at each other because none had ever seen rags do angry and frustrated before...

Next day, Kalpi reaches office with Resignation letter to put it on Singaniya sir's desk... But he makes sure, that Kalpi doesn't leave... He tears the letter in front of her..!!! and she is shocked... She decides to leave anyways.. and moves ahead saying he isn't her boss anymore.. she will not work, where she is not respected.. and he cannot force her... Raghav starts fuming...!!

She storms out... and Raghav follows her.. and holds her hands against wall..!! My last post for today.. He holds her against the wall leaving no escape for her... with Raghav in front of her, his hands on her sides against wall and Kalpiu in middle...

Kalpi watches him in fright and shock as he stares into her eyes.. He stares so intensely tht she could spot out the different brown colour of his eyes.. Kalpi exclaims,"Please, mujhe chodiye..." Raghav doesen't budge and keeps her at place.. He could c her struggling and he loved to watch her pouting face... He replies,"Miss. Jadhav.. Aapko yahaan one year keliye kaam karna padega... According to the offfice rules, every emloyee has to work here for 1 year before he/she resigns the job." Kalpi looks at Raghav in shock and Raghav smirks to himself. She finds herself trembling and feels tht her lips were trembling too.. Raghav stares at her lips and is too mesmerised by it.. Kalpi notices tis and pursus her lips and turns away.. Raghav orders,"Dnt turn ur face away Kalpi. Look at me." Kalpi obeys and turns and faces him. She looks at him wid fear and a pout and says,"Please leave me Sir..I will work here for a year." Raghav smirks and leaves from there..

While he moves away leaving her, She asks, what would happen if I break this stupid rule of yours... !!! I cannot work under you anymore... as I cannot stand you or your this arrogant attitude..~
Raghav looks at her.. right in her eyes, this time too gets scared again, and moves backward... while he moves towards her... step by step... he gets closer to her and she reaches the corner... He looks right through and says... You will have to pay 1 lakh rs. as a penalty.. and says, you had signed this in contract... which said.. till I don't kick you out.. you cannot leave me... Raghav smartly corrects himself, my company... And if you don't pay the amount and quite the job... I can take legal actions against you.. and put you behind the bars as well..

Kalpi is freaked out by now.. and realizes, that Raghav hates her, and would not hesistate to do this...! She pushes him away little, and returns to her desk in shock...
Raghav thinks to himself?? Why did I do this?? I want her out here, then why did I stop her?? He is lost.. and looks at kalpi... who gets a call on cell, she pics it up, and smile spreads on her face... Raghav goes near by acting as if he has some work... Kalpi, talks on phone.. *Ek toh tum Bina Bataye aa gaye.., and itni jaldi kaise milu..* Please Please Please lunch tak ruk jao..!!


Meanwhile, Kalpi sees Raghav and says but wait sir..can you show me the contract..rags" what u asking me for proof" kalpi yes sir cause u do want to show you a clause that states you can't insult ur employees... And if anybody feels like can leave the job..
Rags" o really so where would you go..u r a failure" before kalpu could answer abhay entered...with me...in my company..as my partner..right Pari" rags asks who's Pari? As abhay looks at kalpi..she's Paro my pari"😆


Abhay's words hit Raghav's head like a sharp edge that blured his vision for a moment... but soon he calmed himself down... Kalpi's hands were still trembling from Raghav's electrical grip ;)
Raghav, "perhaps you don't know Mr Abhay that she failed her exam and is not qualified for any job in your office" Abhay was getting a little angery... he pulled Kalpi towards his side and said, "doesn't matter, jiski wajah se hamesha main pass hua vo to kabhi fail ho hi nahin sakti.. she is the reason behind my success n now she's comming with me"... For the first time in his life Raghav found himself on the backfoot, he was looking for an excuse for Kalpi to stay back..." She can't break the contract or she will have to pay me big bucks"... he wasn't satisfied with his own line but that time he could come up with that only.. "whatever it is, put it on my bill," Abhay replied without taking another minute.. Kalpi was looking at both the guys in confused manner.. No Abhay, Kalpi uttered his name only to get cut off by Abhay.. "No angel, not this time, you r not working here anymore... No body can humiliate and hurt you at least not till I'm around," he looked at Raghav, their eyes were shooting daggers... Abhay dragged Kalpi out of the cabin leaving fuming Raghsv behind...!!
Who is this man to take Kalpi away.. there is no way Raghav Singhania is losing her to this miniac, he thought.


Raghav lose his temper and bang one's fists on the table as loud as that Sammy come in Raghav's cabin and say " What happened Raghav ? Why are you so nervous? i have never seen you like that ... are you fine ? " Raghav try to calm himself " forget it ". Then Sammy asks " is it a problem with Abhay ? coz i saw him drawing Kalpana by her hand out of the office " listenning that Raghav gets nervous and says " who he thinks he is ??? How does he dare to insult me like that !!!! He thinks that he has all rights on Kalpi, grabbing her hand ... then Raghav realizes what he is saying and continue quietly " euh... i mean he can't take Kalpana like that, there are some rules and they must be repected and you know very well i don't like when people break them ... " and he looks at Sammy a little embarrassed .


Abhay Takes her out, and asks her about her result Raghav and Sammy are watching this from up. and Seeing Abhay shouting at Kalpi, runs down to take closer look... and Kalpi cannot look into Abhay's eyes... Abhay says, "Bolo Kuch...", " Yeh sab kya hai???", Raghav reaches the place and sees and listens from but distance, Kalpi is hesitant, "Sachai apna ne behtar kuch nai, I have failed and couldn't clear my papers,... Abhay.."Ohh Sachai ki Muhrat... have you gone crazzyy to ignore such an crucial issues for soo many days...!! If we don't get this sorted out in two working days.. then You will even miss out on your convocations..!! Kalpi replies, "Par ab kya fayda..", but Abhay forces her to come come along, while kalpi shouts to accept the bitter truth, Abhay, says.. "If god comes and tells me this, I will not trust him.." Kalpi is shocked and Raghav is taken aback.. Kalpi asks, "How can you trust me soo much? No one else does,.." Abhay replies back, "No one knows as much as I know you.. and I always thought you are intelligent, but I was wrong.. you are just soo stupid.." Raghav is furious now looking at all this, while Paakhi enters the scene and is confused.. She asks Kalpi, and Kalpi is like... Nothing .. Let's go Abhay.. Abhay asks, Paakhi.. do you know where is her college.. Kalpi signs her not to say anything, but Paakhi blurts it out...
Kalpi explains everything about the past.. how she tried to get it sorted out, and she was caught in this huge trap of bribing.. ABhay is super shocked, "First you knew three supplements were missing, and now you are still not taking action, and like some dumb person you paid that idiot the amount..." and Raghav is again in shock to know that Kalpi's three supplemtnts went missing.. He says, now we have to go to your college and sort out things...
He asks, Paakhi, if he can borrow her car.. and Paakhi excuses herself, that mom needs it... Raghav comes from back, and says.. Take my Car! and I am coming along with you..!


both r surprised seeing rags..abhay" well though I hate this fakeness of yours but for me Kalpana is above my anger and you...so let's go right now...chalk Kalpana" rags is angry at abhay holding her hands but at the same time is very hurt and guilty ...
But Abhay asks him the reason for him to come, he says,...

Raghav replies, that kalpi is still his employee and he needs to make sure, that they don't create any mess on his name. I am enough as one bodyguard. ..
You can come as driver... I don't know how to drive.. Kalpi bursts out laughing at this thought... and Abhay says.. don't laugh.. Raghav agrees.. and Kalpi requests to Paakhi to join her as she is very nervous.. and Abhay is shocked at hearing this.. he pulls kalpi towards himself, and asks, d0on't you hate her?? then why shoul she join us... And Kalpi explains.. that she has changed her view abouit paakhi a bit. Abhay says that she had bvored him and our group hgroup to death with this pakav, kamla-paakhi stories and now you say you are fine with her.. anyways.. he looks ant paakhi and asks her to join raghav in front.. Sammy coms from back asks, what will he do all alone here he will too join in, and sammy and raghav sits in front.. Paakhi is upset,,, and abhay, kalpi and pakhi sits in back.. Raghav cannot stop himself from noticing, how Abhay wipes her tears and assures everything to be fine..!!


On d way abhay calls some of his friends working in media 2 also cum.. then abhay,kalpi , rags n abhay's friends reach d college...

After reaching d college abhay demands 4 d papers from d examiner n after lot of arguement d examiner hs no other way bt 2 give d papers 2 him.. Abhay checks n finds out tat 3 supplementary sheets r missing... He holds kalpi's hand n drags her 2 de principal's office.. Rags is literally shocked... Abhay shows d paper 2 d principal n tells him d whole story bt d principal is not ready 2 listen... Then abhay threatens d principal saying tat he hs d whole recorded copy of whatever happened there n is going 2 show it on television... then d principal gets scared n calls d examiner...

De examiner gets scared n blurts out d whole truth tat Kalpi stood first but Neetu bribed him 2 fail her n make pakhi 1st who had actually stood 3rd... D principal is shocked...
Abhay tells d principal 2 remove d examiner 4rm d job bt not hand him over 2 d police n then he tells his media friends 2 put the news of examiner's scam n kalpi standing 1st on all d newspapers...

Kalpi feels really v happy n hugs abhay v.tightly... Rags starts fuming... He tighten his wrist n then slowly calms himself... Then kalpi asks abhay why didn't he hand over d examiner 2 d polic... Abhay says tat d kapoors r v powerful n wil get out of tis scam v easily... Then he says tat d kapoor's r d biggest enemies of his lyftym... n He is going 2 teach dem a lesson using pakhi... Kalpi gets angry n says u can't use her... Ragav who is listing 2 all dis is shocked... Abhay says kalpi tat pakhi hs always taken every damn thing 4rm her n yet y does she support her... Kalpi says whatever it is pakhi can never think of failing me... I trust in my mother's upbringing... N hurting pakhi wil be d biggest sin of ur lyf.. coz she is nowhere connected 2 tis... Then abhay realizes his mistake n tries 2 console kalpi n holds her face...

This makes ragav v angry n then he also realizes that using pakhi will b a big mistake n decides 2 stop d plan of using pakhi...
Then unable 2 control his anger ragav shouts 2 kalpi ... Now tat u have passed u will b appointed as d pa of my company.. no need 2 leave...
when he gets all info about kalpi..how cone he believed that she could fail that there might be some ploy...me being the smart ass I call myself..hell..and who is this abhay..what's Kalpana to him..the way he talks to her as if owns her...how dare he..but first let's now solve this fiasco...till then I better be quite...he saw abhay holding kalpi face..she was crying and looked so nervous...and she was hugging abhay...hell..he couldn't see her crying nor could see her cradling to some other guy...it should have been his right..coz she was his kalpi and not that abhays..as a matter of fact she belonged to no one else other than him...and after this fiasco I will make sure she doesn't go away from me...abhay sorry buddy soon u will have to leave her..she's mine..and I will win her back...I was too blind in my ego...but not now...I tht I would be happy if she goes away...but..no I rather feel like killing anyone who even dares to take you away from me...I need u in my life just as fireneeds air to keep burning as a heart needs to beat..I know u r my beat..u r my peace my soul...and I will make you realize it too..."a soft smile placed on his face when he saw kalpi staring at him silently through corner of her eyes through the rearview mirror...he just heaved a rear smile and winked at her making her eyes widen in shock at the back seat...conveying clearly..he would get back to her and she can't run away coz he won't let it...

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Alteration from reaching to college by Soni:

Rags,kalpi n abhay reaches to kalpi's college..all get down frm the car n kalpi sees neetu while talking wid that same lecturer who said kalpi gave him bribe n she gets hell shock..
Abhay comes near her n says wht happened kalpi why r u so shock ..?? Kalpi : see abhay that neetu kapoor talking wid that same lecturer who blamed me for giving bribe... N wht they over hears whole convo of neetu n that lecturer now all was crystal clear that behind kalpi's failure all was neetu's conspiracy.. Rags was all red n calls the police.. Police comes n arrest the neetu n that lecturer while neetu asks whtz the proof that i failed kalpi by giving bribe..abhay comes front n shows video recording of whole convo of her wid that baster.. Police arrests both n university apoligize kalpi n declears her university topper n student of the decade 😊

Kalpi was on cloud nine n she gives the tight hug to abhay n he too gives back a tight hug which left jealous rags behind 😆
Rags puts his hand on abhays sholder n say buddy u r dialing wrong number 😆 this girl belongs to only n only me 😳 kalpi n abhay both hell shocks wid rags statement 😲
Abhay : wht did u say..?? This girl this kalpi belongs to u only..?? How man..?? U r soo maroon
Rags : Yess i said exactly wht u heard.. I love Kalpi n she is only mind n only i hold the all rights over her only i..get it...


Abhay : ohh i see..but wht if i say i'm her future husband, her soulmate..n wht if i say whithin 15 days our marriage gonna happen.
Rags : wht the hell r u saying..?? How can u marry wid kalpi..?? R u mad..?? No way kalpi can't marry wid u..she is only mine..she will become only mrs.singhaniya n my children's mother 😆
He goes to close kalpi n pulls her passionately 2wards him..n says look kalpi.. U r only mine..no one can dare to take u away frm me..no one..not even god..got it..
15 din ke bad shadi to hogi tumhari but dulha will be Mr.Raghav singhaniya n u'll be Mrs.Kalpana Raghav Singhaniya 😳 get ready for a engagement 😳 kal humari sagaai hai 😳
Kalpi was superr happy wid his confession n was on cloud nine
But this all makes sum1 laugh sooi hard 🤣 to who..ahaa none other than but Mr.Abhay Raichand ..yess he couldn't able to stop his laugh🤣🤣
He says to kalpi man ur Mr.Khadoos,Akdoo is damm desperate of u..😆 pure obsessed lover the great Mr.Singhaniya.

...hello hello.." Hey Mr singhaniya, r you hearing me.." Said abhay shaking him.." Bhamm...realized rags that it was a dream..god he was day dreaming ..he was day dreaming like a fool..it looked so real and I want to make it real. Rags " Mr.abhay will you now take ur hands off from her..u r in a public place..think what this would do to her reputation". Abhay" oh the great Mr.singhaniya now worries for my Pari repo, indigestible when few min back u were itself tarnishing it to threads..so much thank for ur car and help... My driver and Car is here..we font need any assistance from you now...the culprit is caught..my Kalpana is a topper now and this calls for party...and surely me and Kalpana need to celebrate this win alone... If you will excuse me"
A confused and worried rags looked at him" u have a car, just now you said you don't ride..and you r s meagre manager..how could u afford a car along with driver.."
Abhay " well ever heard of raichands...the big industrialists...well u will be glad to meet Its sole owner " abhay rsichand from dehradoon" well rags if you think u r a fat catch...well me too.on same level..so don't ever judge a person without knowing about him..come Kalpana let's go.."
Rags was very furious now...Kalpi was watching all this...she was somehow not able to face his intense gaze...his hurtful face was breaking her and something in her wanted to just run to him and hold him...she now could understand many things about him..and right now she felt his guilt..and she knew his ego wouldn't let him apologize to her.." Sir, I am a loyal employee and a woman of word..I have committed to work for you..I mean ur company and so shall I continue with my job...but today I need an off...I want to go with abhay..so..I will be reporting on job from tomorrow...and then she silently said..I WILL COME BACK TO YOU...she was staring intensely in his eyes and s was he...hearing this one line had reeled hope in him .hope to win her back and a shocking acceptance that she could read and understand his mind...and for first time in many years he smiled ..he felt happy ..he knew that moment that she would not leave him..and he's got an other chance.." Fine miss.jadhav...today u r free..but from tomorrow ur time is MINE.." WITH THAT HE LEFT..ABHAY" WELL WELL WELL..PIYA I MISS YOU..SEE AN OTGER ABHIYA IN MAKING...POOR RAGS..GID SAVE THIS MAN" KALPI" abhay kya back rage ho...its nothing like that.."
Abhay- yupp I know pura like that he hai..but kalpi an apbe akdoo KO mat chodna...kabhi bhi...he's madly in love with you..bas..change him with ur love and care.."
Kalpi- truthfully Mr. Abhay..well I don't wanna change him..ciz I really like him as khadoos only...just as you were to pia...OK now..an chale..hey abhiya that's you and pia are forever.but its about us..Raghav and Kalpana...this is our love story...and it has our own natural flavour...u were past..we r present..so yes..I want my akdoo as he is...and I will make sure that we too create a ragna never heard of...an chale..let's party to new beginning of ragna...suddenly she sees rags coming towards her...rags" what you think only u guys can play...common give me some credit..I know what mine is mine...thank abhay for making me accept my feelings...its time you ho to ur pia whose been calling you onur fine which got exchanged with mine...and so miss.jadjav..what say let's begin our journey as ragna..
Kalpi smiles ..." Yes Mr.khadoos sure" and they hold hands and walk towards their new destination..
😆😉More can be updated and changed... Please feel free to make changes...

WHat are you waiting for after reading this???? chalo chalo... Start your suggestion.. and add your own thoughts to this KHICHDI!!!!

can someone segregate the parts are by whom are they written from:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3931423&TPN=6


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lozz plz add the part I just updated...
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Oh add the part I just updated...
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I have done that Ana... and btw my name is Sejal...
i will do all the formatting later on!
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loved reading the whole waitng for more 👍🏼
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Awesome Job 👍🏼👏
Thanks Sejal & every one who contributed to the story 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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We need to arrange these ideas in proper format... it is all mixture right now...
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Thanks dear... itzzz awesum :) :) :)
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good job everyone !!!! beautiful os 👍🏼
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nicely rendred I also want kalpi's exam mystery should be sorted n everyone get know bout wat neetu did 2 kalpi .Atleast she doesn't have 2 hear dis frm raghav dat ur a graduate failure really want dat !!!😒

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