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Posted: 11 years ago
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"You never miss the water till the well runs dry"!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what a beautiful SS !!!! Well done, i love whan there are a lot of emotions and we can feel them reading your SS... I was reading your parts by listenning Kabira ... OMG !!!!! It was just perfect, the song suits perfectly their situation ( well, in my POV and what about you ? ) ... I was about to cry, but i'm speechless... it's one of the beautiful SS that i read !!! Keep it up Bubllydoll ( sorry don't know your name) 👍🏼
I just have a request plzz update the next part really soon can't wait...

An advise to all the readers, reading this SS ( especially parts 5,6 and 7) while listenning Kabira it's just superb !!!!

Edited by prishna_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: prishna_fan

what a beautiful SS !!!! Well done, i love whan there are a lot of emotions and we can feel them reading your SS... I was reading your parts by listenning Kabira ... OMG !!!!! It was just perfect, the song suits perfectly their situation ( well, in my POV and what about you ? ) ... I was about to cry, but i'm speechless... it's one of the beautiful SS that i read !!! Keep it up Bubllydoll ( sorry don't know your name) 👍🏼
I just have a request plzz update the next part really soon can't wait...

An advise to all the readers, reading this SS ( especially parts 5,6 and 7) while listenning Kabira it's just superb !!!!

i dont know wheather it is a co incidence.. because when i wrote 4th and 5th part i was actually listening to Kabira...

thank you so much for ur lovely comments...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Before i update.I want to thank you all for the lovely comments.. thank you all for the support.. I know its Late update.. But couldn;t help..Sunday family time.. So sorry everyone..



Part 8:

Its been a week since Ragav came to panchagani and five days since kalpi started working with him... But he didn't get a single moment with her.. If looks could kill all the male employees including yash would ve burnt into ashes for talking with his Kalpi.. Yes His Kalpi.. This time he ll make sure he makes her his in every sense.. Ragav is not the one who ll let go of the things which belong to him.. And Kalpi is his and he ll make sure of it...

Whenever samaira and kalpi talk with Yash.. Ragav burnt in jealousy.. Yash is khadoos.. Ragav is maha Khadoos.. So they both never discussed their personal matter with each other..So Ragav didn't knew what it is between Yash and samaira.. Most importanly he didnt know what kind of relationship kalpi and Yash shared... Whenever Yash gave bear hug to Kalpi .. Ragav wants to break Yash in to pieces...

Kalpi on the other hand, made sure not to stay with Ragav alone.. She was scared that if she stay alone he ll give some sarcastic comments.. Thet both are behaving like a strangers... she ll jump at every other oppurtunity to be away from him.. Ragav's patience is wearing off..He really is not known for his patience.. He wants to talk with her.. He wants to take her in his arms..And this time He ll make sure she listen to him...

Today is a lucky day for Ragav.. Fortunately for Ragav and Unfortunately for Kalpi, samaira went with Yash for some official work,they both struck in some traffic so they are late..Samaira called kalpi andasked her to start to Home.. That she ll join her there... Maanvi and Jay has already started, she has to go alone.. She doesn't know Ragav is still in the office..Whenever Ragav is in the office she ll never come out of her cabin...

When she came out of the office to hire an cab or auto to go Home.. She didn't notice someone came and stood next to her...
So,Miss.Jadav going Home? asked Ragav...
Kalpi became scared to hear his voice but masked her feelings and said Yes,Mr.Singhania...

Ragav's heart twiched to Hear Singhania.. Becoz he heard her calling everyone in the office by their first name... He knows that its his deed that they both are standing like a strangers... When they could ve been normal just like others... He came out of his Guilt ride when he heard her voice...

Kalpi stood watching him.. His eyes showed so much of pain and guilt... She felt pain seeing him in pain.. But she was not sure wheather she has right to ask him the reason for his pain.. So she tried to divert his attention from whatever he is thinking... So she asked him about Sammy...He didn't hear her.. when he heard her he said Yeah, he is fine...He ll come once the project moved to the second stage...He answered her absent mindedly..

He asked Kalpi to come with him.. He ll drop her in her house... Kalpi was shocked at his request.. Yes Request.. She cant beleive Ragav Singhania requested her.. He didnt order her like he always do with some pretext.. But she is scared to go with him.. with the new found feelings.. Alone in car...
He saw her thinking a lot for just a car ride,, He can't take it.. Does he became a stranger to her that she is thinking a lot to come with him.. Has the distance between them has grew this much,that she doesn't want to come with him..

Both thinking in their own world..Ragav came out first from his world.. Pulled Kalpi to his car and made her sit in the passenger seat.He didnt give Kalpi a chance to protest.. Even if he did..She wouldn't have protest.. Becoz she saw the emotion in his eyes it was pain and guilt and finally it changed to determination when he pulled her... Kalpi knows better than to mess with determined RAgav...

The car ride has started with just the sound of the car ...the occupants in the car remained silent with just kalpi telling him the direction to her home...

Will this car ride change the destiny of two people.. one who is determined to take a chance..Other one is scared to get hurt...





Edited by bubblydoll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow lovely plz plz cant wait more continue sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its really nice... 😊
w8ting 2 read d next update... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Lovely!
Car ride can brin in sum happiness n light ragna moments. ..eagr for next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hope he takes her so he can c da life she is leading, awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its lovely... Do continue... 😳

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