VIRMAN OS: VIRAT'S RETURN FROM FOREIGN CONCERT

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi friends... this is my first writing and if there is any mistake please forgive it. I saw Virman's roka anniversary post and instantly this idea came to me. Ok ... Let me start...

It is the day of Virat's return from his Musical concert after two months. Everyone of their family including buaji, vanshika ma and all came to rishikesh on Virat's demand to see them there. Everyone are eagerly waiting for his return. But two souls are very damn excited that is our Mannu and her chutku. Last night, during their phone conversation, Virat told her about his arrival on next evening. She was very dreamy and curious on meeting her love after two months. She can't sleep that whole night and morning she went to Ganga maiya and prayed for the wellness of Virat and their baby...

She decided what to wear in the evening and decorated their house for her wish. She is talking to her child, " Chutku, you daddy is on the way ... We'll meet him today and ur mumma is very happy... not happy... it's beyond the words my feelings are' What he is gonna say on see my little bumped belly? Will he tease me? No no... he will hug me first and then touch you and feel you... Hai na?"

Meanwhile, Jeevika and Viren came there and laughing over their dreamy Mannu. Jeevika teases her saying "You wanna hug?" Suddenly Manvi realizes their presence and blushed. Viren also teases her saying "May all ur deams come true today dear saali ji'"

Manvi controls her blush and says " Sure di jiju".

Evening came, and everyone are waiting for the return of successful Singer of India. Manvi goes and stand near the entrance of the house waiting for his arrival. She continuously blabbered and says "This Virat na... Always want me to wait for him... come soon na... You know from when I am waiting?"

"Don't worry beta, he might caught in traffic. Soon he come... ok?" said Vanshika ma laughingly.

Jeevika is in kitchen doing some work... Meanwhile, she got a call from Virat. There is a secret conversation between these Babhi and Devar. Jeevika went outside and gathered everyone and explain their secret plan to her family members. This is not noticed by Manvi as she is busy seeing outside and checking her mobile continuously. It is 8PM now... Dadaji called angry Manvi inside to have her dinner. She said she is not in a mood to have dinner. But everyone convinced her to eat little for the baby growing in. She eat little and went inside her room scolding Virat inside her.

After few hours, her anger turned to worry... She went to Jeevika and noticed that everyone are talking secretly something. But suddenly Buaji saw Manvi and changed the topic. She went to her di and asked her "Is everything fine?" To which Jeevika replied, " Haan, everything is fine. What happened meri Mannu?"

"I am really worried di... Virat still not came and I am scared' Nothing would be wrong na? Please say something and I saw u all are hiding something from me" said Manvi with tears.

" No Mannu... It's not like that... we just talk something and nothing to hide here. May be some delay in his departure and soon he'll come to see u. ..Now go and sleep. It's getting late . Ok? " said Jeevika in a convincing tone.

Manvi went inside her room. Now it's around 11.45 PM. She took Virat's photo in her hand and tears fell down from her eyes continuously... "Where are you Virat? Why didn't you come? Are you alright? Don't you wish to see me? I want you in front of me now... Please... Please Virat... I am dying to see you... Come soon", said Manvi in a crying tone.

Soon see turned around with a wide smile hearing, "I am here for u Manvi". She just can't believe her eyes. Wiping her tears she goes to him and asked, "Really..., really you came Virat". Virat smiled at her question and cupped her face saying " Ya... I am here to see my love... my Manvi'"

"Then, why are u so late? Is ur flight late or Traffic'" She is now cut by Virat saying "So that I can arrange for the surprise". Manvi confused and asked "I can't get u Virat... What r u..."

Immediately Virat blindfolded her eyes and take her to the place where he was planned before. When he removed his hand from her eyes, She saw everyone shouting SURPRIZZZEEE.

"It is our first wedding anniversary Manvi... And this is my gift for u" saying this he gifted a beautiful diamond necklace which he brought from London. He kissed her forehead and said " I LOVE YOU".

Manvi is now beyond her words... She can't speak in that happiest moment.

"THANK YOU SO MUCH VIRAT... FOR THIS GIFT... FOR THIS LOVE AND EVERY HAPPINESS YOU GAVE FOR ME... AND... AND... I LOVEYOU TOO"

Everyone standing there were over-whelmed with happiness seeing this pair. Virika wished Virman and hugged them. Manvi asked her di "So... This is what you all hide? Haan?" Jeevika replied cupping he face, "Yes... I always want my baby sister to be happy... I know only my devarji can make u happy"

Viren interrupted saying, " This Devar and Babhi made my saali to cry? Haan? But I forgive you both becoz you finally made her laugh". "Haan Jiju" said Manvi and had a cute Jiju-saali hug. All the family members joined them and make Virman to cut the cake. They all feed each other and left the spot to have some sleep.

Virman alone standing there now. Virat go near Manvi and said, " Sorry Manvi, I made u worry a lot '" Manvi sshhed him with her fingers and hugged him tightly saying, " I know you Virat... My love never fails and it won't cheat me... In this first anniversary we are with our baby in my womb... How lucky I am! And one more thing... You should never go away from me from now onwards... " and kissed him saying I LOVE YOU ...



So...How was it friends? Do you like it...Post ur comments... If there was any mistake please forgive me... pls...



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Viru_Neutrogina thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a beautiful OS dear...too good!
Loved their surprise...cute devar bhabhi and jiju saali...
Pleass do write more...you are really talented!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viru_Neutrogina

It was a beautiful OS dear...too good!
Loved their surprise...cute devar bhabhi and jiju saali...
Pleass do write more...you are really talented!



thank u so much for ur comment and wishes. It really means a lot for me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: abishan



thank u so much for ur comment and wishes. It really means a lot for me😊



You are welcome dear..if you get time do read ma story as well... 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viru_Neutrogina



You are welcome dear..if you get time do read ma story as well... 😛




sure dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os dear 😊 😃 👏
loved virat surprise and jeevika involved in it ❤️
U write very well dear
thanx 4 d pm dear
do write more 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jannat89

awesome os dear 😊 😃 👏
loved virat surprise and jeevika involved in it ❤️
U write very well dear
thanx 4 d pm dear
do write more 🤗



thank u so much Jannat for ur comments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww this is amazing ya...you have written is soo welll👏
this is a cute and sweet little os 😃
thanx alott for thye pm and do write more 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww it was beautiful...CVs shud read this...
madhuharini thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

woww this is amazing ya...you have written is soo welll👏

this is a cute and sweet little os 😃
thanx alott for thye pm and do write more 😊



thank u so much kulsum... Sure I'll write a lot

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