virman os __ Zindagi Ruswaa Kar Chali... part 3 (ii) updated pg 22 - Page 14

nice update now she decide
she will give chance there
relation update soon

Mind blowing... finally manvi will move on..
Update asap nainu..

awesome update

yr u r very good writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur all stories r amazing n fabulous next time plzzz pm me😊

Ok, warning, you may be extremely bored with the length of the comment but you deserve it! I owe you comments for all three parts of this story, I really can't believe that I missed it when you had posted it.

Part 1

You made cry with Manvi's state, I felt so bad for her and Kunal. Hats off to Virat for loving her so much, he is extremely supportive in this story. Virat's point of view was amazingly written, I could really feel his pain for his brother and his love for Manvi also, it was just too good. Manvi's point of view at the end was amazing, she was attracted to him initially but he didn't give her any attention so her mind was diverted to Kushal, aww but he likes her now, I hope she accepts him soon. Vanshika ma wanting the baby as the last token of her son, that was so sad. Kushal died and on top of that now Manvi is pregnant, I really felt bad for her, Virat's care for her was amazingly portrayed. His attachment to Kunal that Manvi described was too good. I really love this selfless Virat that you have in this story, he loves Manvi and his brother's son so much.

Part 2

This part was amazing, a big hug to you for writing it so perfectly. Virat's point of view was too perfect, he was in love with Manvi and missed his brother so much. The way you described Kunal was adorable, it must be so hard for Virat to see him every day and remember is kid brother, I really feel bad for him. He had to listen to his mom but he was also in love with her so he married her, he is really a gentleman. Manvi POV shocked me. She torn between Kushal and Virat, and doesn't know what to do. At one end she doesn't want to betray her first husband, her love Kushal and on the other end she is feeling guilty that Virat cares for her so much and she hasn't done a thing for him.

Part 3

Kunal is too cute, I just want to hug him for making Manvi realize that she should give Virat a chance. The virman moments were sweet, they are getting closer it seems like, Manvi seems so comfortable with him. Aww, Virat helped her so that she wouldn't get embarrassed in front of clients, he is really a sweetheart. Her point of view and how she is starting to give Virat a chance but doesn't want to betray kushal, you wrote it so realistically that I wanted to hug Manvi for everything that she went through. Her pain is really depcited wonderfully in the story, it is not over dramatic and it is not underestimated, it is the right amount of description to keep you interested but not make you cry the entire time, that is why I love this story so much, all the emotions are perfect, you really nailed all of them when you wrote it. The ending, OMG YAY, I literally was grinning at my laptop at this part, Manvi is going to give him a chance. I am so happy and excited to read more.

Overall this story is just too good. Really hats off to you for thinking of so many different concepts in your stories, you are really creative with them and I love that the plot in each story you write is original, I can tell you take a lot of time in writing these updates and thinking out the plot, thank you for doing that. Sorry for the delayed unres, I was gone for the weekend. I really hope to read more of this story. I think I have bored you to death with this extremely long comment but you really deserve it. Thank you so much again for all these wonderful stories, take care and keep writing. 🤗

awesome update..manvi wanted a sign... finally kunal solved her problem and made her get rid of all her confusion!! eager to read next cuz i guess it will be virmanish ..waiting for next part !