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Posted: 12 years ago
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VIRMAN OS: Density

It is Falguni Patak concert today how anybody can miss it. Two girls get ready for the concert. One of the girl wear denim blue colour short skirt and red short top which expose bit of her navel part and second girl wear a cool blue dress knee length and looking gorgeous as always at the same time look hot and sexy. Come out from their room and make way towards living hall to bid bye to their parents.

Madan: Where are you going?

Jeevika: I told u about concert yesterday at dinner time and you give permission and now you are raised this question.

Madan: No, you both are not going anywhere. Look i forget maybe that time but I was also told u 2 boys and their family were coming to see both of you, so can't go anywhere.

Jeevika: Dad we don't say NO but we want to GO. When they will come.

Madan: In evening 7 pm so you both cancel yours programmes.

a girl watching the drama in front of her and then she say.

Manvi: DAD as you say they will come in evening and we'll be back at 3pm so CHILLAX.

Madan: No means No.

Manvi: Okie if you didn't permission to go out than without seeing him from my side.

I can't missed Falguni Patak show just because someone gonna seeing us.

Perhaps same decision will Jeevika take.

Manvi: Tell me Jeevs.

Jeevika: She gestured No to manvi but she assured her just say yes and winked at her.

"Yes, Dad''

Madam: No, u can't blackmail like this.

Manvi: If you can then we'll.

Pinky: U love spoiled ur daughters, Girl is so desperate if boys will come to see them, she will getting prepared but in ur daughters condition it was opposite.

Manvi: Oh Mom Chillax Okie. . . We know you very well and ur acting skill so don't it in front us. we'll be back at 3 promise plz let us go.

Madan & Pinky: Plz come back soon sweethearts.

Madan: They are very big industrialist so plz, we want this proposal would happen soon.

manvi & jeevika: said in unison, 'okie' and kissed their parents on their cheeks and say we love you.

Madan & Pinky: We love you too and kissed on their forehead.

Manvi: Jeevs today i'm gonna drive, if u will drive then we didn't reach on time.

Jeevika: Mannu and lovingly hit on her arm.

Manvi: Diii pretends it hurts.

Jeevika: DRAMA QUEEN

Manvi sat on their respective seats in their red sport car which open to sky. Manvi starts engine and drive rashly And Jeevika: Mannu slow down the car. i'm scared now

But manvi is manvi, she only listens herself. . . Jeevs just chill yaar and enjoy the ride.

One open Jeep in which few boys seated also enjoyed the ride and stops their jeep at traffic signal.

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Mujhe bali umariya mein bali umariya mein

Kuch ho gaya ha

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Mujhe bali umariya mein bali umariya mein

Kuch ho gaya ha

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Manvi enjoying the Falguni Patak songs and dancing on her seat and sometime shrug jeevika shoulder and jeevika narrowed her eyes but how could she says her sister. . . and start smiling looking at her.

One of the watching them and poked at other boys and signalled towards the girls and pass smiling.

Manvi while dancing watched them and stops dancing and gives them angry glare but boys still passes smile.

Traffic signal shows green light and Manvi suddenly over her car in front of boys' jeep so boy abruptly stopped his car and then she put her thump down from her rear mirror and gave them smirk and drives as rashly as she can.

The boys still smiling at her antic.

They reached the venue place and park their car.

Stand in queue where they checked their passes, manvi key rings slips from her hands but she didn't realise, one boy watched it and takes the key ring from the floor and follows her. At the same time Manvi gave their passes to the guard and went from there. Without noticing her key ring is not with her any more.

manvi and jeevika try to cross the huge crowd and stand in VIP seats.

Falaguni came and start singing,

Koi muraliya madhur bajake mithi mithi

Taal sunake

Koi muraliya madhur bajake mithi mithi

Taal sunake

Mujhe bali umariya mein bali umariya mein

Kuch ho gaya ha

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Whole crowd start dancing and enjoys her songs fullest and dancing very enthusiastlly when Manvi watch the same guy while dancing, the same guy tries to come closer but crowd didn't allowed him and Manvi give him angry glare.

Poor guy stopped at the place thought he might talk her later.

After sometime the shows ends and everyone start leaving.

Manvi and Jeevika also want authograph from falguni patak so they go to place where she gives her autograph. . . They both again stand in a queue when the same guy came towards her and poked Manvi. . . When she watched him again m again her anger reached at peak and outburst at him without listening what he wants to say and poor guys listen all this, jeevika try to stop her but how could she stop Manvi, she is in her mode and tell to Jeevika she knows that kind of boys, when they saw girl and approached her and start flittering, the poor guy watched the whole crowd gave him angry glare and without saying anything grab her hand and give her key ring and went from there.

Now Manvi is very embarrass with herself now whole crowd watching her in AWWW.

Manvi really feel sorry for him but he was left the place long before.

Jeevika pulled her manvi and take her outside the place and scold her of her stupidity and feel poor for guy.

Manvi sat on her car and start the engine as they want to go home as soon as possible.

When the crossed the gate, same guys jeep crosses, manvi abruptly stop the car and pass a smirk but put her thump up sign and manvi is smiling and blushing at the same time, boy watched it from his rear mirror and went from there. . .

Manvi again start the car and went from there . . . sometime later they reached their home.

Manvi still smiling at the incident and trying to kept it away from her mind but seems it's not possible.

Now jeevika and manvi get ready for the boys who are coming.

At evening two boys and their family.

Madan and Pinky welcome them; they are comes inside the house and sat on sofa's. . . Some servants came and start serving beverages and other things.

Madan: shrug to Pinky and gesture her to call the girl and Pinky left.

Pinky came with the girls, manvi and jeevika wear dark green and mahroon anarkali suits with light make up and look no less than angles who decedent from heaven and they didn't look at them as they were so shy in the whole process (it happen whether the gals is too modern).

And come near them, now boys got shock of their life firstly the girls are same to whom they encountered today and secondly they didn't saw that beautiful girl in their lifetime, in morning they look hot and sexy but at the time they look out of this world.

Laj ka goonghat khol gaya woh

Man se man ko tol gaya woh

Laj ka goonghat khol gaya woh

Man se man ko tol gaya woh

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Mujhe bali umariya mein bali umariya mein

Kuch ho gaya ha

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Aiyo rama hath se ye dil kho gaya

Now they introduce each other Jeevika to Viren and Virat to Manvi their respective partner. . . Now it's time for girls to get shock of their life.

Manvi start hiccup when Virat give her water and manvi with trembling hand grab the glass but glass slip from her hand.

Family got tensed Madan say what is this but Vanshika stopped her and says it's happen.

Meanwhile Manvi says sorry this sorry is for two things

1st for morning incident and

2nd for ruining his dress.

Without thinking any further Virat and Viren says they are ready for the marriage.

Family is shocked, surprised at the same time but they are so happy.

Now both families curious to know girl answers.

Manvi and Jeevika shying and smiling in their agreement.

That called Density God gives us signal but we Human being didn't understand. Here in the case happen with them, from morning destiny give signal that they are same person who are together forever.

It is my very first attempt to write OS..

I know it's not good may be crap but still I give a try.

Sorry for grammatical and other mistakes.

Share ur views with me…if u liked it hit the like button and do comments.

Love Jannat



PS: I make a note on my ss hate and love story, reader of this ss have a look and ans my ques very frankly 😃


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Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i m big fan of falguni pathak..
Nd u use her albus idea nd fuse with virmaan was awesome..
Too good liked it...
Superbly ...
Fab work dear...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am a falguni pathak fan 😃
the OS was awesome cute and sweet 😃
manvi was again my fav character her little antics were fun and virat a sweetheart 😃
thanx alott for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i think it a nice try
you should write more i like it...
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is very nice attempt it was cute nd sweet os. I think u should try more in writing os nd i knw u will get huge response. Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS Jannat! ❤️ Very nice.. Loved Virman meeting at the concert.. Really enjoyed reading it 😃.. Do write more.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its was sweet os yr...I loved it...
I have listen dat song many tym bt now when ever I will listen dat song I will imagin dis os... now dis song seems nyc coz of virman...


thnx for d pm dr...nd Congo u r dazzler now...sry for being late latif...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice dear 😃
Tnx for the pm
Good luck
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS..!!! Thanks for the PM..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Appi awesome os and I loved this very much.
From begining to end he the guy whose proposal comes to her
Lovely story line and thank you so much for the PM

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