#4:Virman FF*kyu DARD hai itna*part 28*pg. 123

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Afshan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Hehe nice update
bt seriously wanna knw whats cooking in virat n manvi's mind
i hope no more cnfusions n only n only love

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virumanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

wow loved it...

i m scared wat is going to happen...

plzzz continue sooonnn plzzz

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Wow Shilpa
superb update and when u write something it always worthy
everytime i liked manvi's character more in ur ff, just loved her
interesting too see what happen next
thanx 4 d pm in advance
waiting 4 d next part
update soon ❤️

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

loved it to the core...👍🏼

continue soon plzzz!!!😊

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sana1203

@sana1203

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Nice update shilpa ...
Looking forward for next part..,
Continue soon ...

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

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this update was really a huge shock its a complete changeover awesome update must say you are really working soo hard on this story to make it more entertaining interesting and fun to read am just loving it 👏👏👏

the sudden change decision in manvi is really a huge shock not just for her even for her husband and i dont feel she is faking she is doing it for real thats gonna be real fun ...😃

the way she dressed his wounds the way she was talking to him at tht time was like asthough she was dressing a small boy's wound and she didnt even hesitate a bit before removing his vest instead he was hesitating wowww manvi you are leaving the virat vadhera speechless with all these acts of urs...😉😉then she waiting for him at the dining table they again sleeeping in eachothers arms 😳😳 then the early morning breakfast thing woww manvi is behaving like a typical wife i mean shocks pe shocks and the biggest shock was wen she agreed for the suhaagraat thing oh god wats going on i mean virat is just testing her and he said that but she agreed 😲😲😲 that left virat in a huge trauma mst say 😆😆😆and now he upto testing her more the lingerie thing 😳 i still feel bad for manvi i mean she is trying soo hard to make everything normal but virat is still testing her ...

sanjay is such a cute bro can do anything to protect her even if it takes him to enter the lions den 😆😆

excited no actually overexcited for the next update wanna know how things will turn out to be ...update next part soon and thanx for the pm 😊

Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago

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minnu345

@minnu345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Want Update Right Away...

Cant Wait...How can u do this shilpa? by stopping here...

Waiting eagerly for the other one...

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ddljfan

@ddljfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Hi,
I have been a regular reader and commenter on your ff and have read you blog update also as you have sent me the link first time, but though I am not in you buddy list. I have sent you a buddy request to your new ac but its not accepted.
Will send you another request please accept it this time.
Coming to update it was awesome, you have writers head and you know how to keep all the readers hooked to the chapter and crave for more,

That is one fine job you do, gud luck and keep up the good work going
Thanks
I think you have my emailid deepalinarayan@ gmail.com if you can please send me the link for next chapter.