#4:Virman FF*kyu DARD hai itna*part 28*pg. 123 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for your 4th thread...

And awww the teaser was damn good...
Pleasee continue soon...
And pleasee PM me alsooo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyo

^__________________^
I am back...
with new thread...i am bringing new twist in story... hope u like it...!
i am very thankful for all my readers to make this story reach this thread...which it never deserved!!!!
thank u very much!!!
but now with growing threads my expectations are growing too... hope it gets 170 likes for this update...
lets see how much this update is worth...😉
without any delay here u go with next part...
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PART 23
TRUST in our knot!!!!

Virat entered in their room. He saw manvi was crying silently…..standing in front of window.

He walked near and called her to grab attention…

"Biwi…."

"Please leave me alone…!" she spoke straightly back facing him.

"I want to talk to u…NOW!!" virat said pressing on last word….

"Magar mujhe abhi koi baat nahi karni. so please leave.."

Virat was more adamant than her. He wanted to know why she supported him….lied about their relation in front of her parents…..he wanted answers from her at any cost.

He swiftly moved forward when at same time manvi turned around and bumped her head on his chest where he was wounded.

Virat: Ahh….

Manvi caught his shirt in her fist looking at blood stains on his white shirt.

Manvi: hey bhagwan… khoon… (Wiping her tears)

She ran towards drawer in just two steps and came back with first aid box.

Manvi: aap itne laparwah kaise ho sakte hai. Aapne aaj subah dressing nahi kiya na.

Virat: biwi…actually I…

Before he could speak anything further…..she pushed him back and made him sit on bed. She didn't let him speak a word.

Manvi: (getting angry) aapko koi bachee hai kya jo har waqt mein aapke piche first aid box leke ghumti rahoon. Why don't u take care of urself…!

(are u a child to behave so careless...i cant wander around u with first aid box all time...why dont u take care of yourself?)
Virat was amazed seeing her. Just few seconds before she was crying and suddenly now she was behaving like a strict mom who is scolding her child. Nobody dared to talk to him in this tone before……and if ever anyone did…..he used to turn their life into living hell. But today he was mum…totally tongue tied looking at his wife…admiring her innocence.

Manvi started removing his shirt button and took off his shirt.

Manvi: remove Ur vest…

She said taking cotton and antiseptic bottle from first aid box…

Virat: huh? (Shocked)

Manvi kept the cotton and antiseptic bottle aside which she was holding and removed off his vest by her own.

She didn't look embarrassed or awkward doing all this…which shocked him more.

Manvi: thoda dard hoga…

She said softly before applying the medicine on his wound. He saw her dressing his wound very carefully and enough slowly so that it won't hurt him. Her hairs were flying lose with breeze while some strands were disturbing her vision to his wound. He slowly tucked them back looking in her hazel eyes feeling the rush of affection for her. She raised her lashes up to see him and gave a smile before continuing her work.

What is going in her mind? He was getting more confused seeing her so calm and quite…which was not at all like her.

Manvi completed dressing the wound.

Virat stood up wearing his vest and shirt back and walked out or better to say rushed out from their bedroom as being around her was making his head go heavy…thinking repeatedly.

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It was night. Virat came by 10 pm back to home. He had keys….so he unlocked main door and entered in. he was tired attending back to back meetings at office as well as struggling with his mind to not think about his wife anymore…..but little did that happen. She was driving him crazy all day!

Shrugging of all thoughts virat moved up to his room and saw manvi wasn't there. He looked balcony...bathroom every corner but he didn't find her anywhere.

He ran out checking every other bedrooms in house and even terrace, but she wasn't seen anywhere. Now he was getting worried. Did she leave? Has she gone back to Delhi to her parents…? No…she can't…! Thinking, his anger started rising. He ran downstairs towards living room when he saw dinning lights on. He walked in and found all his anger mellowed down in second seeing his wife sleeping there resting her head on dining table. He looked at Food kept on table…it was untouched. He realized she dozed off waiting for him for dinner.

Virat was surprised. It was unexpected as she never did something like that for him before. He was going hell confused thinking why she changed herself all of sudden? Was it real or just faking…? And seeing her doing all for him…behaving so normal with him was confusing him like hell.

Virat caressed his forehead and decided to shrug off these thoughts for today as he was very tired after long day. His body was badly begging for some rest. He picked up manvi in his arms. She immediately buried her face in crook of his neck feeling warmth in his arms and clutched his shirt tightly just the way she always held whenever he carried her. Virat felt her lips touching his skin which ran a chill wave of cold in his body. He didn't dare to look at her and walked upstairs carrying her in their room.

He placed her on bed and laid himself beside her as he knew she will not leave his shirt and if he tries removing her off him she will wake up. So he slept there to experience the peaceful sleep he had last night taking her in his arms…..again!

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Next day morning, virat woke up to see his arms empty. He saw around but she wasn't in room. He looked at bathroom but the door was open that means she had her bath and was downstairs already. It somewhat shocked him as she never got up before him.

Virat woke up and moved in bathroom. After having shower, he came out and saw his clothes were laid on bed. His files...watch…and all other necessary things were kept neatly on dressing table. Manvi was again nowhere to be seen in room.

Now this was too much for him. He had to know what exactly was going in her evil head. He knew she wasn't from those people who sit back and accept whatever is served in front of them.

He got ready and came down.

Virat: where is she?

Virat asked a maid….who was working in living room.

Maid: sir, mam'm is in the kitchen.

Virat entered in and saw the most beautiful form standing right in front of him….his wife. She was back facing him but still he could say that she looked damn beautiful in her red plain saree. Her hairs were still slightly wet and their fresh fruity smell was drugging his senses. On top of that, her hairs were resting on one shoulder….revealing her sexy bare back through her blouse. Virat gulped and looked elsewhere.

*manvi's saree*
Virat composed himself before remembering his motto that he came here to know what exactly is going in her mind…not lose his own one!!!

He moved forward and asked….

"What do u think u are doing biwi?"

"Preparing Breakfast for us!" she replied plainly without turning back.

He walked beside her…and saw her pale yet beautiful face. She was looking calm and quite….like yesterday.

Virat: why are u doing all this?

Manvi: because I think we are hungry. Actually I don't know about u but I am.

She said concentrating on her food….

Virat: stop it. (Holding her hand) We have maids for all this work. U don't need to do prepare anything for me.

Manvi: no it's okay…! (Pulling her hand back from his clutch)

Saying she turned with plates in her hands when virat moved forward and pinned her keeping his arms on slab.

Manvi: please hatiye. Hume plates arrange karni hai table pe…

Virat took plates from her hands and kept them beside and held her both arms…..tightly.

Virat: (getting irritate) what's going in ur head? Huh?

Manvi: what do u mean?

Virat: u do know what I mean Mrs. Vadhera!

Virat said raising his brows.

Manvi pushed him back and walked a step to move away from him…when he caught her wrist and twirled her back, crashing her on his chest.

He was mad on her. He wasn't expecting her to behave so calm and quite.

Virat: when I am talking to u….don't u dare….walk away from me.

Manvi stood there…..preparing herself to answer him back.

Virat: so tell me what's with u from yesterday..?

Manvi: I am trying to be a good wife…..and fulfill my all duties towards u. Is there any problem with that?

Virat: oh really?

Manvi: yes!

She said firmly…with confidence.

Virat: stop acting biwi. U don't need to do all this. No one is seeing us.

Manvi: no…. I am not acting Mr. Vadhera. I am just trying to make our marriage work.

Virat: marriage!!! What made u think it will work?

Manvi: I know… (Pause) it will work! I will make it possible!

Virat saw an unknown confidence and trust in her eyes. She looked determined. There wasn't any doubt or hesitation on her face.

He moved away leaving her hand. The way she said those words so confidently made him sick worried. She looked hell determined to break the wall between them which he was trying to hold on from last one month.

Manvi: I think we should get on breakfast table. Food is ready.

Saying she moved out with their plates while virat stood there thinking……before coming at the breakfast table.

Breakfast was a silent affair. Virat liked her cooked food. It tasted way better than their chefs in his house….and why not she herself was one hell good chef. How can he forget that.

Manvi got up taking their finished plates and walked inside kitchen when she saw him coming towards her. This time he looked quite relaxed and a naughty smirk was playing on his face.

Manvi got little nervous seeing him approaching near. She was feeling scared with that smirk but still she managed to bring a cool and calm mask on her face.

Virat: biwi…

Manvi: hmm?

He pulled her closer….circling his arm on her waist and leaned forward but she didn't move back or resist him as she always did.

Virat: I have a thing to say…..

He said with in his husky voice…which automatically raced her heartbeats and made her breaths longer. Virat saw his effect on her and smirked more.

Virat: I am ready……

Manvi: huh?

Virat: let's make our marriage work.

Manvi looked up at him surprised.

Virat: and we will start it by celebrating our first night ….here….today!!!

He whispered near her ear.

Manvi stood frozen like a statue looking at him….without blinking her eyes.

Virat: I will come back home early….

Virat waited for her reply. She was now looking down holding his shirt in fist. He wasn't able to see her expressions. So he moved her face up holding her chin.

Virat: should I?

Manvi: ok!!!!!

Virat: what!! (Leaving her hand…moving back)

Manvi: I will wait for u. (Smiling)

Saying she walked out. Virat was totally stunned by her answer. He thought she would deny and spill out real reason behind sudden change in her behavior…but it looked like she was tough nut to crack.

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Virat was disturbed all day. He barely worked at office. Sanjay noticed his restlessness.

Sanjay: sir….. Are u alright?

Virat: hmm?

Hearing Sanjay, virat came out of his thoughts.

Sanjay: is something bothering u sir?

Virat: no I am fine Sanjay!

Sanjay: but u don't look like sir!

Virat got irritate hearing same question from him since morning.

Virat: (angrily) I said I am fine! Stop questioning me and do some work Mr. Ahuja.

Where the hell is Madison's file I told u to prepare? I already warned u that I want it completed before noon….but I think u are---

Virat stopped in mid as he saw Sanjay giving the file kept right in front of him on his table.

Sanjay: sir I gave u Madison's file this morning. I think u forgot.

Virat: oh… I….

Virat avoided eye contact with Sanjay….

Sanjay: (getting worried) virat….are u worried about manvi?

Virat immediately looked up and spoke in one breath.

Virat: no..! Why should I be worried for her? She don't affect me. I... I… I am perfectly fine!!

Sanjay smiled looking at his friend's condition. He was actually hell affected by her.

Sanjay: I didn't say anything about manvi affecting u… virat!

Virat baffled. He was caught in his own words. It never happened before but lately after marrying manvi…he was changing... His life was going out of his control. He got up from his chair fuming and stormed out…..

*
Sanjay and Lavanya were having coffee in their cafeteria.

Sanjay: lavi…. How is manvi?

Lavanya: just the way we expected….. Totally confused……no control on her mind…. Behaving weird… in short she is behaving just like virat.

Sanjay: I don't know lavi….but I am sensing something big is gonna happen.

Lavanya: I am worried for manvi Sanjay. She had already suffered a lot. I don't want her to get hurt anymore.

Sanjay: (holding her hand) don't worry lavi…this brother will not let anything happen to his sister.

Lavi: I love u jaan..!

Sanjay: I love u too!

Just then they heard one of their colleagues talking about manvi and virat.

Sanjay: Mohan…. Kya baat hai?

Mohan: nothing sir.

He looked bit scared while talking which didn't go unnoticed by Sanjay.

Sanjay and Lavanya walked near him…

Sanjay: look Mohan… I know u were talking about virat and manvi…. so tell me what's going on…

Mohan: Sir...…Please… I can't tell u otherwise virat sir will fire me.

Sanjay: Mohan just tell me (angrily) u don't worry about Ur job. Let him fire u….

Mohan: huh?

Mohan's eyes went wide open…hearing Sanjay…

Lavanya stamped her heel on Sanjay's foot for scaring poor soul.

Lavi: Sanjay meant…. He will not let him fire u and if he does Sanjay will take care of it.

Isn't it Sanjay?

Sanjay: ya…ya…. I will take care of it. Now tell me what's going in Ur boss's evil head?

Mohan: nothing much sir. He asked me to pack white lingerie from our exclusive lingerie collection of this year and warned me strictly that this news won't reach to u and lavi mam'm at any cost.

Lavanya and Sanjay: what!!!

Sanjay: so where is that packet now?

Mohan: I gave it to sir.

Lavanya: okay Mohan thanks for telling us. U may leave now.

Mohan: sir…mam'm aap meri job….

Lavanya: don't worry Mohan Ur job is secured.

Mohan: (smiling) thanks mam'm.

Mohan left….while Lavanya saw Sanjay sick worried.

Sanjay: lavi… I am afraid thinking of Virat's intensions.

Lavanya: what! Why? He had just told him to pack one dress. What's big deal in it?

Sanjay: what's big deal in that?! Lavi that's not just any dress…its lingerie. Do u think he is packing that for himself… no it's for manvi! He is definitely planning something big for tonight. That's why he was restless and manvi… u said she was too. Now I get it. He forced manvi to stay back with him and now to keep her with him for whole life he is going to force their relation on her.

Lavi: what! Sanjay I think u have gone nuts. Virat won't do that.

Sanjay: no lavi… I know him very well. He can do that. And didn't u hear Mohan… he said virat didn't want us to know about it. So that means he was scared thinking if we know about his plan we will stop him. That's why he is keeping this thing a secret from us.

Lavi: Sanjay I think u are thinking so much.

Sanjay: no lavi… I am thinking right. We have to stop him. Let's go to his cabin.

Saying Sanjay dragged lavi with him. But for their bad luck virat wasn't there. He came out and asked his assistant Linda.

Linda: sir just left back home.

Sanjay: what! So early…!!!! (Loud voice)

Linda was taken aback by Sanjay's reaction. Lavi saw it and dragged him with her.

Lavi: Sanjay stop over reacting. Its 9 pm. he must have got tired and left back home.

Sanjay: lavi... I am going farm house.

Lavi: no…! Are u mad! Virat will kill us if he finds we came there to check on him.

Sanjay: don't worry. We will sneak in without his knowledge. I have keys of his farm house. So don't worry… lets go…

Lavi: Sanjay u have lost Ur marbles… (Nodding her head negatively)

Sanjay: it's for my sister. I am just doing my duty.

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so how was it?
worth reading?
i have taken lots of efforts like our viru boy in my work...
See how hard he is working...lol... *i like this gif...isnt he cute in this😳*
NOW IMP ANNOUNCMENT...
next will be a blog update..so today i am filtering my buddy list... i am going to remove silent readers and this time strictly... i will NOT send links for readers out of my buddy list.
SORRY GUYS.. but i had already told u... so cant help!!
please dont ask for links...
till then...bubye...
love shilpa:)
Edited by shilpa09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
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now manvi want to give a chance to their marriage and want it to work!!!and virat thinks it to be a strategy of hers or something hidden behind her this intention! would love to see how the story progresses and does manvi's behavior is for real! ohh shilpa u really fulfilled my wish of manvi for once being the one leading in the relationship as what ever i had read till now in the stories it was mostly virat taking lead in mending the relation but this was really beautiful! virat heel bent in maintaining the wall around him and manvi hell bent on breaking that wall!!!

Even though I too like virat doubt manvi's behavior!!! I too feel something is cooking in her head!!!!!!

lovely upd8! will w8 for the next one!
Edited by abbay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
SUPERB SURPRISE.
LOVED IT.
THEY ARE GOING TO BECOME REAL HUSBAND WIFE.
THANKS FOR THIS AMUSING TWIST.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome update..
thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

now want the next update sooon... pls update nxt part as soon as posble...

nd why the hell is this Sanjay going to their house???😡 he know that they're husband-wife.. so why is he so bothered abt them... it's ok that he is going to check whether Maanvi is alright or not, but Virat is not going to kill her... so why is he so bothered?????😡

hope their plan won't go in vain... and have some love-ly moments b/w them😳

Anyways, update was amazing... nd pls pls try to give us regular updates😃

nd pm me the nxt blog update😊
Edited by mkkpb_fan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
wow nice update plz pm me ur next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome one...
Liked it...
Superly supoerb...
Like maanvi very much...
Hope no more hurt nd painfull time for virmaan...
Cpntinue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
actlyy i want to snd u buddy requst bt i dont know to do this plz promise me tht u will pm me ur nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hawww shilpa y do u stop at wrong place everytime han???...but inspite of that loving this new twist ;)

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