Virman :Meri duniya hai tujh mein Part. 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2
Virat and manvi separated from each other
Virat kissed her forehead, then eyes,cheeks...came down to her lips...he was abt to kiss dem wen beeji called manvi from outside..
V: kya yr...kitna khrab time hsi logon ka...
Manvi was abt to leave but virat held her hand ...she pleaded...but virat dint listen nd pulled her towards him ... Holding her from waist
M: virat plz Jane do ...beji bula rahi hsin
V: noo
M:plzzz
V:pehle kiss
M: nooo
V: theek hai...phir main tu hain nahin chod ne vala
Beeji called manvi agin
Manvi kissed his cheek and ran out of d room
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Virat was smiling in his room wen viren entered d room
Vi:kya baat hai mere bhai ...aaj tumhari cheer ki smile ki itni wide kyon hai
V: bhai aaj main Bahut khushi Hun ...Bahut khush
Finally Maine apne pyaar ka izhaar kar diya
Aur aap sahi the bhai manvi bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai ...
Aaj meri life ka neatest day hai
Vi Kamal hai bhai...mubarakan mubarakan


In manvi's room
Haan di Maine virat ko apni felling s bata di
Bata Diya usse ki main usse pyaar Kari Hun
J:manvi main tum Donno ke liye Bahut khush Hun
J: chal ab tu packing puri kar varna beeji Bahut daantegi

It was dem manvi realised dat she was going today ...

Virat's room

V:plz bhai kuch karo na ...manvi ko plz rock lo na
Aaj hi to Maine usse alone pyaar ka izhaar Kiya hsi
Plz bhai Romeo ko apni Juliet se alag mat karo ..p,zzz bhai kuch karo na

Vi: are bas kar...manvi ka kitna asar hai tujh par ...itna melo dramatic ho Gaya hi tu
V : bhai plz kuch socho na varna manvi ki yaad mein main majnoo ban jaunga
Vi: Han kyon nahin ab to kuch sochna hi padega varana dusri devdas banne mrin time nahin lagega
Tabhi jeevika enters
J : kya baaten ho rahi hai bhai yon ke beech
Vi: are jeevika acha hua tum aa gayi
J : kyon kya hua
Vi: manvi ko aaj Jane se rokna hai ...kuch idea socho na
V : haan bhabhi plzzz
J: par beeji ko kaise manayenge
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Msmni 's room
M: beeji plzzz bas kuch din aur rehne Dejiye na ...plzzz beeji ...
B:nahin manvi ...pehle hi Bahut din ho chulkey hain ab aur nahin
M: par beeji ..
B: mujhe kuch aur nahin Sunna
And beeji left
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...beeji was in virika's room
J: beeji plz manvi kuch din rehne dejiye...meri delivery issi mahine mrin to hai ...uske baad usse main vapas bhej dungi ...aap to jante hsi na main manvi ke bina kuch nahin kar pati...plzzz beji...mujhe uske zaroorat hsi ..plzzz
B: Lakin beta yahan Sab kya socenge
J: are beeji yhan par to sabko Bahut khushi hogi agar vo ruk gayi
B: theek hsi beta
J : thanku beeji

Beji was leaving and manvi still dint knew dat she beeji had agreed for get stay..
M: bye di ...Bahut miss karungi aspko ..apna dhyaan rakhna and chutku ka bhi
It was difficult for jeevika to countrol her laugher ...






Next part in few hrs...





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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Sounds Amazing!!
Luved both the parts!!!
Update soon!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
very nice update viren, virat n jeevike getting together so cute n funny wonder wat will manvi's reaction becontinue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

Manvi hugged jeevika...
She luked for virat ...but he was no where to be seen
She was very sad dat virat dint even came to say gudbye to her
Tears flowed out of her eyes
Beji: chaliye ab hum chalte hain vadhera ji
All went outside
Dere luggage was kept outside
Viren asked dere servant to keep d luggage in d car

M: are jiju mera saman koi bahar nahin laya...kamre mein hi reh gaya
Vi:ohhh...ruko main le aata Hun
M : are nahin jiju main khud hi le aati Hun
M; beeji main abhi aayi
She went inside to bring her luggage


B : jeevika main chalti Hun ..manvi a dhyaan rakhna aur apna bhi
J : beeji asp befikar hokar jaiye
Beji went
Manvi came outside wid her luggage
But beeji had left
M: di ...beji Kahan chali gayi ...
J: beji to chali gayi mannu
M: mujhe chod kar kyon chali gayi
J: kyon tujhe nahin rehna yahan mere paas...nahin theek hsi main vapas bula Leto Hun ...abhi Zada door nahin gayi hungi...ruk main abhi call karti Hun
:m: nahin ,nahin rehna hsi ...kaisi baat kar rahi ho di...main to iliye Bol rahi thi ki beeji man kaise gayi

J: aisa ho sakta hsi ke meri behen kuch chahe aur main usse na dun ...she told her everything
M: wapooo di ...I love u ...( jumping in excitement) I love u
Main am rahungi aspko pas ,,,.aapki delivery tak...waooo diii...
J bas mannu ab chal andar

All went inside
M: to herself) virat ke paas jati Hun
Muh fulake Baitha hoga
She went to his room...but virat was not dere
She went to virika room.

M: virat Kahan hai ..????
J: manvi apne room mein hoga mannu
M:nahin hai di ...Maine pure ghar mein dekh liya...
J: viren ji aapki kuch pata hai
Vi:nahin .ruko main call karta Hun
Virat tu Kahan yr ????
V : main ghar par nahin Hun bhai ...main manvi ko bye nahin Bol sakta tha
Vi:bye???
V Han bhi ...manvi me mujhe bataya tha ki usne beeji ko manane ki Bahut try ki par beeji nahin mani
Ab usse ate nahin dekh sakta tha ..isliye bahar chala gaya...and cut d call
Vi: virat meri baat to sun ..he kept his phone
Viren to manvi

Vi: virat ko lagta tum chali gayi ho vapas isliye vo tu din jate hue nahin dekh sakta tha ...and bhar chala gaya
M: kyaaa????? Di apne usse bhi nahin bataya
J: vo mannu mein batna bul gayi ...sryyy
M: nahin di koi baat nahin ...vaise acha hi hua ...ab uska reaction dekhne mein aur bhi maza aayega

Vi : jeevika aaj humein ek mrg pe jana hsi ...tum ready ho jao...
J: kaun kaun ja raha hai viren ji.???
Vi: dad ji, mom tum aur mein
Badi ka ko kissi charity function pe jana hai aur chachi chachi to bahar hain ...
J:mannu ghar le Akeli thodi rahegi viren ji
Vi: manvi ko bhi saath leke chlenge na
M: nahin jiju ,,,,plzz mera man nahin hai ...ye shadi mein main Bahut bore ho jati Hun
Aap log jao ...mein ghar par hi rahungi plzzz
J: par manvi...

M: di main koi bachi thodi na Hun ...aur aaj na fab. Movie bhi aani hai plzzz
J: theek hai ..par tu time pe Khana khaliyo aur so jaiyo
M: jo hukam




Precap: virat and manvi alone at home

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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice update
i just watched all the prts
they r awesome
waiting for the desperately
plz plz plz give some romance between virman in next prt
waiting for desperately nd plz plz add me to ur buddy list nd pm me
nd plz plz pm me ur other stories which u wrote before
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
both part was nice waiting next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Teaser
M: virat plzzz
V: manvi plzzz
He kissed her forehead .her cheeks,came down to her lips, ...he luked at manvi ...her eyes were closed she was braathing heavily..,,,he kissed her lips first softly mn then pssioanlty...she stoo strted reacting...thee kiss become gently manvimove her free hr to his hair n strted ruffling...which make virat more crazy.dey broke d kiss
Manvi was abt go wen virat held her hand and got her back
Her back facing hi,
He hugged her from back

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg such an awesome update even i cnt wait fo virats reaction wen he finds out oh yh the teaser gave us an example of virats reactionhayeee virman alone n kissy 😳 ooohhh!!!continue soon plzzz😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
plz plz plz update next prt waiting for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
plz plz plz plz update next prt really waiting for it desperately nd want to know what will happen next

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