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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

amzing update

loved it

very emotional

loved mannvi and kids convo

plz cont soon

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Plz dont make him die. ...
Awesome update...
Missed virat in this update...

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Oh my gosh it was so emotional update! I was so connected that I felt the pain all the past dialogs the whole journey of virat's protectiveness toward his family n the promise made me so emotional! Indeed it was a blasting update. N once again loved the kids section thier 6 senses r powerful man.. God n the ending don't tell me he died :/ will be excited if he returns but a bad news will be an aweful thing for sure god can't wait for the next update ^______^

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eman-khan

@eman-khan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

suuuperbbb updateee.. 👏

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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

*tears.. My precious tears and u made them flow at this hour of night.. God! Wat an update just amazing.. Every emotion was so heart piercing and i ended crying along with manvi, nikki and ria.. Pls don't torture and update asap.

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Miishii

@Miishii

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Oh man! How can you end it there! Eager to know what happens..I hope Virat is back! I figured something was going to happen Virat..and I know he's probably not dead..but still can't stand the separation..it hurts so much to read! That's how good the story is..that every word affects me as if it was real. Very well written. The pain of the kids is portrayed clearly..their crying..their fear..all in their innocence. Wow. Thanks for updating & please update again soon! Very impatient to read more. :) 😊

Edited by Miishii - 12 years ago

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NourinNiShal

@NourinNiShal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

ahhh!!!! I'm speechlesss!!! you did portray every damn thing so beautifully!!! manvi's concern,pain!!! and the line " I feel like I have been dropped into a never-ending horror story - a punishment for having deprieved my husband of his rightful share of love and happiness." it touched me the most ❤️ can't wait for next part!!! my writing queen!!! ur making us greedddy 😆❤️ muahhh!!! u rockkk 👍🏼

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

anu!!!! im just not in a good mood to comment properly so bare with my stupid blabbering... its just i mean i dont know what made me cry the way u wrote it or the way u desribed manvi's pain... emotional stress and fear of losing a loved one drains u out...

hats off to u the way u wrote about manvi feeling paralyzed...it happens it was soo realistic i dont know whats gona happen next but ive experienced it and actually it all happens in a blink of eye..when ut destined to lose someone u dont have any control over it... reading it was such a wonderful experience...its not ur fault i guess the story needed to show the pain and anxiety at this point but it made me cry maybe becaz i can understand it or just becaz of the mere fact that we connect to ur story soo dammm much...honestly speaking i cant give highlights today it was completly highlighted...each and every dialogue emotion the stress the children it was all bang on!!! but manvi's part was splendid but im being a bit biased on the kid's part becaz i know what they must hv felt like it just made my eyes wet!! they had that fear in them...all i know is this was one amazing update which surely will be the highlight of addicted 👍🏼

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

*res

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How can you stop it at that... Wonderfully written... great cliffhanger

Maanvi disappear, feelings, joy and sadness

Virat is missing and then the family comes for surprise visit...

SUPERB!!!

Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Awesome yaar..

Loved it..

I loved the kids part... They are soo young and the understand the importance of Virat in there life... They didnt want to goo sleep without meeting him..

Feel sad for Manvi...

And in the end hope Virat will be fine...

Pleasee dont make them suffer more..

I hope Virat is come back safely..

Thanks for the PM..

Pleasee update soon..