I never expected u to comeout with the next part so quickly... VERY HAPPY about it..
I'll jump to the last part.. coz i am so happy as i discovered something..
"Bye Blanco. Do you want a gift too?" he teases him.
dats OLD virat!!! Manvi's Virat!!! the one who was lost three years.. manvi is succeeding in bringing him back isnt she??
he turned out casual & is teasing Blanco,, he's acting calm & playing cool after such a fiasco... Now isnt he the same old virat??? the virat manvi wished to see????
i was sooo happy wen i read dat sentence & also was amazed dat u always keep track in ur story..
U never forget!!!
haha,, um proud at my memory!!! so she's d one virat mentioned in some phone call long back.. she has a kid & now the ultimate victim...
poor girl!!
then the mission starts!! if the kid can be saved den the mystery lady can appear... sounds easy but a tough task, i wonder how u are gonna make things clear..
um going crazy suspecting every girl dat enters ur story.. i mark dem & try to find some loop hole to match dem with the 'mystery lady'
swetha is out of the list..
cherry is not the one...
u may wonder y i suspectd these two, clearly innocent & has nothing to do with the plot,, but i am not ready to trust u.. not after meredith, who was just introduced by u as a blonde & his employee.. but what is she now??? u are capable of turning one among these as worse as day cud be,, & um 100% sure of being judgemental...
now why did u bring a lady in blue dress??? is it to induce some past memories?? or has she any role too???
I have the feeling dat u showed dat mystery lady somewhere in the story, i mean v know her already BUT at the same time, i think u didnt introduce her to the field yet.. CRAZY nah?? so u better reveal the secrets soon!!!
now thanks for delivering our questions thru manvi & giving satisfactory answers..(i dont want to quote anything about this, i wont be able to finish it, so better take the safe path :p) den again an amazing answer was "Because I need to gain her trust! I need information from her." (i'll stop vt this)
i am sooo overwhelmd at the undestanding between this couple..
''I immediately know she must be one of those girls he was with before. It pricks me deeply and opens up an unhealed wound. But I decide not to follow it further. Some things just have a way of going round and round – in a vicious circle – in a never ending hurt game.''
"Manvi! Don't go there. It means nothing."
now here,, he doesnt tell her, but she gets it & she doesnt questions him further, yet, he get it!! he gets watever she is thinking.. how awesome the couple is!! mannn made for each other, equally contributing for THE BEST CHARACTER.. sometimes i feel dis mannu is lucky in getting him & sometimes it this virat who is lucky in getting her..
now again u dont forget things (pllsss dont get bored at this dialogue of mine)
"Tell Ria that I will get her magic wand and Nikki that I will get him a boxing glove."
u just have this wonderful track in ur story,, i loved this moment..
bringing in swetha also showed that u are in track..
now um not satisfied at him leaving the place, he wudnt leave her after such an incident, if its such an important thing to go, den it makes me to think... let me see wat is dere in future..
again u cameout with wat is necessary & gave a complete update..
their romantic moments were perfect,, her feelings, her thoughts are just magical & revealing the exact situation... splendid!!!
& um hopefully waiting for the next part, as it'll be morning, so kids, swetha, manvi sometimes virat MAY rock the next update.. can be judgemental again, i dont know wat is dere in ur brain..
there are certain things, they are minute, but dose never fail to amaze me.. i mean certain description, certain path u take, certain words, etc dat add more beauty to ur work.. i think i can pick some from this update..
''Martin was standing outside the roof house and keeping my guard as I had forced Blanco to go back to Virat''
by this,
1.u showed me dat Martin exists,
2.u showed d fear in manvi, u showed d care in her, her tension & her complete state after such an incident.. interesting...
now the uniqueness here is,, u cud have just let blanco to guard her, u need not bring a Martin here,, but u didnt, u took an extra effort, forced blanco out & brought martin in,, thus it delivered the above 1 & 2... U are Unique & have ur own style!
''Virat signals him to release me and I run into his arms and hug him tightly with all my life''
here again,, u made Martin to stop her, not listen to her wen she pleaded, but only on virat's gesture did he free her.. I am Amazed!!! i mean u make urself different by giving this touch ups u know.. one wud expect manvi to run at virat & give him a tight hug, but u give a pause for her actions by the antics of martin & reveal us dat she's being secured, she's still under guard, protected from dangers & most importantly virat can be her only saviour,, a guard is not ready to accept her tears, fear & plead but virat's orders.. simple, virat is her only saviour!!
this can be ur flow, can be something dat comes handy for u,, but for me,, this has an immense impact... these are things dat make me to forget about the story for a minute.. things dat make me to reread wat i read, dat make me to get amazed at ur excellency, dat give me a chance to build up d bond vt u, dat makes me to honour u,, as a whole get ADDICTED to ADDICTED
here again um awestruck at the beauty of the topic of this story,,,
Brilliant dii.. U really are an awesome person to possess such immense & beautiful art of writing...
there's more here to talk about but i cant grab more space, so let me conclude with my hugsss, kisssesss & love & love only..
Hats off to u di!!!! get going!!!! ❤️❤️
