Virmaan : U hve 2 come bck-Idnm : 3rd : PART-105 + IMP NOTE-148 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-80
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M-in mind-ab..ab kya?..ye to dekh bhi nahi raha..baat kaise suru karu?..nahi maanvi Dar mat..ye vahi purana virat hai jise tu kabhi bhi mana sakti hai..
She smile nd stepped inside the room..she walked towards him..his back facing to her bt he can hear her foot steps which coming close to him..
She just reached near the bed which was in middle of door nd wardrobe bt stop as she hear him..
V-vapish chali jao..he said while searching something in his clothes..
M-stop at that place-virat..mujhe kuch baat karni hai..plz..
V-mujhe koi baat nahi karni..plz chali jao yaha se..jitna tumhare karib rahunga utnahi kal jane me taklif hogi..
M-to mat jao..
Hearing this he imigeatly turned towards her..
M-plz..kumse kum is tarah to nahi..
V-yes..he also didn't want to go nd hearing this he cannot be more angry or stay on his decision bt he control on his emotions..
V-turned back-maanvi plz..mere liye ye sab aur muskil mat banao..ab jao yaha se..mujhe packing karni hai kal k liye..with saying this he bring his bag nd placed on bed nd starts placing his clothes in bag one by one..
M-come near to him-virat plz..stop this..ek baar meri baat to suno..mujhe humare bare me baat karni hai plz..
V-humare bich baat karne jaisa ab kuch nahi hai..he said with placing shirts in bag..nd again walked towards wardrobe..
V-now leave..
M-meri baat to sunlo..plz..
V-get some clothes nd come near to bag-maanvi leave..he said this time ruddly
v abt to put clothes in bag bt maanvi hold his arm..
M-virat plz..asa mat karo..plz mujhe ek moka to do..
V-angrily pulled his hand away from her hold nd threw his clothes on bag-shouted-i said leave..sunai nahi deta..ya samaz me nahi aa raha?..kyu khud ko aur mujhko taklif de rahi ho..
Hearing this she feel hurt..this is first time when he shouted on her in full sense..he do this before when karan entered in their life bt that time he was out of his sense..now he said that harsh words in his full sense..tears slips from her eyes..
She stepped back nd run out from room with tears..to see her like this he also feel bad nd hurt..his anger grew more..he threw bag on floor angrily nd sit on bed with moving his fingers in his hairs..
She passed from hall nd stopped at dining table nd sit on chair nd cries..
Here in room..tears also comes in his eyes..he looked up nd starts looking here nd there when his eyes fall on sparking Item..which fall off from his bag..he stood up nd walked near it..he bent down nd go on his knees..he picked it up in his hand nd starts cressing with his thumb..its his grandmaa's anklets which he takes with him from chandighadh for her..which i narrated in first part..
V-i m sorry dadi..maine promis kiya tha ki main ye use vapish pahenauga..lekin shayad ab..ab ye kabhi nahi hoga..i m sorry..nd tears slips from his eyes..
* u can image here song...ya rabba dede koi jaan bhi agar...*
Here in hall..
Viren makes jeevika sleep nd get call from his client..he just finish his convo nd walked towards his room when he saw maanvi sitting on dining table chair nd crying..he imigeatly rush towards her..
Vn-cupped her face..worriedly-maanvi..kya hua?..maanvi..
Maanvi looked at him nd imigeatly stood up from chair nd hugged him..
Vn-more worried-maanvi..kya hua..tum roa kyu rahi ho..he said with rubbing her back..
M-with crying-i love him..i really love him..plz use rok lo..
Vn-maanvi?..kya bol rahi ho?
M-parted away nd looked at him-viren..sirf woh hi mujhse nahi main bhi usse bahot pyar karti hu..aaj se nahi..naahi kal se..jab se usne mummy-papa ke baad mujhe sambhala tab se..
Vn-thik hai..pahele Rona bandh kar..
M-wipe her tears nd take water which viren gve to her..he took her in her room..
Vn-ab baith yaha..nd he makes her sit on her bed..nd also sit next to her..
M-viren..
Cut by him..
Vn-shh..main sab samaz gaya..tu usse pyar karti hai..jaisa jeevika ne mujhse kaha tha..aur jaise ki woh idiot sab ko announce kar chuka hai woh bhi tumse pyar karta hai..to problem kya hai..
M-woh..tumhare Jane k baad humari bahes hui aur..nd she told him everything bt not abt his big mistake..
Vn-ok..ye to koi problem hi nahi hai..
M-mtlab?
Vn-abhi woh naraz hai right?..to tu abhi rest karle..kal holi hai..kal usse baat karlena..woh holi party me to jayega hi..
M-lekin agr woh nahi ruka to aur party me bhi nahi aya to?
Vn-smile-woh main mom se kahe dunga..woh sambhal lengi..
M-sachchi?
Vn-haa..
M-smile widly-thank u..nd hugged him again..
Vn-chal ab so ja..kal use patana bhi to hai..
She pulled away..
M-haa..lekin tum to use pasand nahi karte phir..
Vn-actually pahele pasand nahi karta tha kyuki mujhe ye lagta tha ki woh tujhse pyar nahi karta..aur ab shayad is liye pasand nahi karta kyuki woh tujhe mujhse jyada pyar karne laga hai..
M-smile..
V-chal ab soa ja..main chalta hu..
He abt to go bt she stop him..
M-viren..
He turned
M-i love u..thanks
Vn-smile-me 2..chal ab soa jaa..good night
M-good night
Nd he left the room
M-place her hand on tummy-aap papa ab jald miloge..aur woh bhi..i promis...
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES
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thaaanks for the update!!:D
finally viren has also accepted their love!:D
Continue soon!:D
Edited by sweets1126 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks niaksharma 4r updating it is great story and my interest is increasing day by day after reading ur parts well 1ce again gr8t update 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
i love it...
now i'm really can't wait to read next...
i hope everything will be fine in next part...
plzzz plzzz update it quick...
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Posted: 12 years ago
virman part was kinda sad especially how hard virat was trying to hold himself he is really hurt ...
but viren and mamvi part makes me soo excited
finally viren accepted their love
and now excited for the holi
update soon
and manisha thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update~~~
feel bad for both virat n manvi:((both were hurt!!!the song was nice!!!
so finally viren have to accpet their love😃...great~~~looking forward for next update...manvi manoaying virat😛...will be waiting for the update...tc khushi🤗n thank u so much for the pm manisha🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww lovely shovely updt...viren manvis bond is so adorable...i hope manvi confess very soon...cont asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww it was awesome i hope holi party mai sub set hojai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooow superbbb update..
Plzz update asap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Khushi!!⭐️⭐️ Virman part was emotional 😭.. Virat thoda bhao kha raha hai but I'm sure he won't be able to stay away from Manvi for too long 😛.. Loved the song.. Nice choice.. Finally Viren accepted their relationship 😃... Now eagerly waiting for the confession!! Thank you for updating Khushi and Thank you Manisha for the pm.. Take care 😊

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