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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

Double updates!! YAAY!! :D Superb update Khushi!!⭐️⭐️ Thank god Virat didn't cross his limits.. It was quite scary.. But still his actions were wrong.. His passion and anger made him cruel to some extent.. He made her hate him more.. Manvi won't be able to forget this incident easily.. Feeling really sad for her ;'(.. Virat himself made the situation more complicated.. Now he is going to take her with him at any cost.. What will Manvi do now?? Very well written Khushi! Thanks for updating..Take care :D

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eman-khan

@eman-khan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

wowww superbbb updates...👏

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

awesome update...

plzzz plzzz try to update soon...

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sha19

@sha19

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Superb update 😊
Waiting for the next one

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

wow khushi
Mind blowing update
Virat anger n passion was super hot
Loved it
Waiting to next part..

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

hey dnt end this story here khushi... This ff gonna more interesting one... But its upto u and ur wish
But plz makes more chp in this

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Strikhedonia

@Strikhedonia

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

The update was awesome didi...👏

But I just don't love this Virat... I didn't say I hate him... but I don't like him either...😕

He is just proving that he's more powerful... And he is forcing Manvi...😒 But why don't he understand that force can never create even a single drop of love in one's heart...😔

And he was saying that this is a demo...😡

He thinks that he won't do anything that would make Manvi hate him all the life... but what he done is not right...😲

I love his passion... but...

Love is about loving di not hurting...😊

Whether he agree or not...what he done is wrong...

Love is not about overpowering... it is about understanding...😊

And di... this is in no way offence to your writing or this ff...😳

Its just my point of view on Virat...

And as I already told I love this ff and the update was fab...👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by ArthyV - 12 years ago

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monikaksl

@monikaksl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Amazing update👏

Virat is so passionate😉Are manvi ab toh accept karlo

Kya demo tha😉

Update soon

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#669

WHHATT????😲😡

YOU'LL END IT IN COMING 2-3 PARTS?

BUT WHY??💔

WHAT MADE YOU THINK LIKE THAT?

YAAR, THIS IS THE MOST HEART-THROBBING

STORY OF YOURS!!!!👍🏼❤️

PLEASE GIVE IT A GRACEFUL END!!!!

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Puru-luv-khushi

@Puru-luv-khushi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#670

Part-38 +39...
Both parts r superb... Awesome... Mindblowing... Outstanding... Out of world... No words...
U write superbly... I loved it...
Superb...
Yaar he was too scary... Poor my mannu... How he behave with her... So so so bad...
Thank god he stop...
He didn't want to cross his limits then why he hurt her...
So so so sad for her...
Plz;plz;plz;plz;
continue soo...
Nd
nd
nd
plz don't stop this story...
I knew u thinking that u r not good with this kind of story but saw our msg ... U r fab one...
U can write very well...
So plz don't feel bad or else...
Ur story going to be fab...
Plz
;plz
plz
plz
continue soon...

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