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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ArthyV

<font size="2">Waiting for your update di...😉</font>

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<font size="2">Take your own time...😊</font>


i will updated after dinner...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nixdix

I seriously wait for upadates...in dis story first !!!😳

I always used to tell u dis...
Plzzz continue!!!😊


thank u so much dear...
I will continue after my dinner...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-38
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MAanvi hell scared as he pulled her close to his hard chest nd tight his hold on her wrists behind her back..
She hiss in pain-aahh..
M-with struggling hard-virat..virat kya kar rahe ho chhodo..chhodo mujhe..pagal ho gaye ho kya?
V-full of anger nd madness-leaning close to her which makes her stop struggling-kyu?..tumhe nahi pata?..he said passinotly
M-gulped-karna kya chahte ho?
V-smirked..still angry-karna to sirf pyar chahta hu lekin tumhe woh language samaz me nahi ati..mere pyar ko meri weakness samaz ne ki galti kar Di tumne..
V-free her one hand nd turned her around with one hand pulled back her back hit with his hard chest..her one hand still he holding on her back..she move her hand back site to free her other hand but virat hold her both hands nd moved to her front side nd pulled her close by holding her both hands near her stomach..
Her bare back touching to his chest..2-3 buttons of his shirt already open..winds already flowing on open area..she struggling to free her self when she stop as she feel his lips near her ear..
V-rubbing her nose tip near her-kaha tha na..mujhe asa kuch karne pe majboor mat karna ki jisse tumhe taklif ho..
Nd with this he placed hard kiss on crook of neck..
M-cries-virat...tears slip from her eyes..
He placed another kiss on her neck..its not gentle or sweet kiss..its full of madness nd passinote..he biting her soft skin..as his lips widly moving towards her solder she cries more nd starts pleading him..
M-with pleading try to free her hands from him nd herself from his hold-ahh..v..vi..virat..s..stop it..plz..tears slips from her eyes..
She cannot believe..how her one rejection make him wild..before some hours he looks like he understand her every well..bcz of her one tears he makes that man hospitalize nd also just for her he planned with rahul new branch of his company in Mumbai..he want to take every responsibility of her family just bcz of her nd make her to with him..
Nd now..he transform in total differents nd old virat vadhera woh get mad with her one rejection..her cries her pain didn't effected him once..
She continue to pleading him to stop bt he didn't want to stop..the trance of his wild kiss move towards her solder to her neck again..he loose his grip on her hand nd make her turned again towards her..he pulled her close her by twisting her one hand again behind her back nd continue to kissing her to her neck to her caller bone..bt this time her one hand is free..with this she trying to puss him back bt like always he was too strong for her..nd this time he was in full of aggression nd madness..he leaving brushes of his bits on her soft skin..as she only wearing earnings..her naked neck open for him without any hurdle..as he moved towards her otherside of neck she pussed him with all strength which makes her nails dug in his bare chest through his open buttons bt this small thing didn't affect him..he continue to biting her..
As she fail to puss him back she starts hitting him on his chest nd struggling in his hold like fish without water..
M-cries-virat..stop it..its hurt..virat plz..stop..tears slips from her eyes..
Virat who starts all for makes her feel his power nd his madness for her love nd his rights on her..forget all things as his lips touch her skin..as he feel her heavy breath..as he feel her heart beats..he who carving for her from last five years..to make her his..to touch her..to feel her..to claim her..today when he get closeness with her she ruin all that nd told him..sorry worn him to not come close to her nd he has no right on her..this was the worse joke for him..even god also cannot decline this that she only...only belongs to him..
This time also..no matters he was in full of anger nd out of control to gve her lesson bt he lost himself in her touch nd her feel..
His wild kiss which almost biting her skin starts loosing..bt still he nuzzling his lips on her marks..
M-still pleading continuesly-virat...plz...plz virat..leave..tears slips from her closing eyes..
In few seconds she feel his face move back bt still close to her..he stop torturing her..she stop pleading him..her breath still heavy..she gulped nd slowly open her eyes with fear..
As she opened her eyes found him staring at her with full of poassion nd madness..
She getting scared with his gaze..his eyes looks like saying that..this is just starting..his expressions makes her feel shivering with that feeling which makes anygirl shivered..
V-come closer to her..his lips almost touching her lips-continue kare?
She clutch on his shirt nd her eyes wide opened as she heard this..
V-continue-mere touch karne se naraz hui thi na?..ab to is property pe apna claim karunga tabhi manogi right?..he said in looking into her eyes with full of passinote nd angry husky tone..
She stood like someone freeze her on spot..her heart like stop..to see her like this he smirked..she didn't know how to react..
As his hand move to her back nd hold her back doori she pussed him back..
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-39
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she was in shock what he said..no..he cannot..before she react or say something she feel his hand moving towards her bare back from her waist..she come out from her shock with sudden shiver with jerk nd loose her hold on his shirt..tears slip from her eyes..like her eyes nd tears pleading him to stop this..like trying to make him understood her pain..but she saw nothing affected him..she feel his hold getting loose on her..
As his fingers reached at doori of her choli she pussed him away nd pulled herself away from him..she stepped some steps back..her hands automatically moved to her upper body..
Anger more raise on his face..he saw his empty hands nd then he looked at her with deadly looks..
As he steps towards her she stars taking step back..
M-tearsy eyes-virat plz ruk jao..plz age mat aao..plz..
Bt he didn't stop..with walking back she reached near the swim pool site..she looks once back nd again looked at him who looking at her with desire eyes..
She is shivering in Fear nd she sweating with thought of result of this..she reached near the pool site wood Bench..
As she try to step back once again her leg hit with bench nd she fall on bench..which was flat on foot side nd head sided little up..
She scared with sudden hit..ahh..she scream..as she fall her hands automatically placed on her both sided bench..
She saw him come near to bench..as he reached near to her she imigeatly pulled her legs up nd pussed herself back with help of her palm..
M-pleading-virat please..
He stepped close to her nd come close to him..
As he come close her she scared like hell..she again try to puss herself back bt she cannot..she shivered as he placed his one leg on her lahenga..
She gulped..she imigeatly hold her lahenga ns try to free..
M-crying..pulling her lahenga-virat plz..virat..sobbing..virat plz chhod do..plz..
Bt no work..
Just then she saw him removing his jacket..
M-shouted with crying-nahi..virat plz don't..
He remove his jacket nd throw on side bench..
She scared more nd more..
He removed his leg from her lahenga nd before she move away he hold her hand pulled her up nd wrap his hands around her..her body hit with his hard body..her hands automatically leaned on his sholder..
M-try to stay back..away from him.-virat plz..tears slips from her eyes..try to free herself..
Her struggle make him irritate..he pussed her to nearest wall nd pinned her with wall nd he also leaned on her..
She try to puss him bt he hold her hands nd pinned with wall..
As he dug his face in her neck she sticke her head with wall..
M-pleading-nahi..virat plz..
V-nuzzling his face in her hair-kyu?..ab kyu ruku?..ab to sabse important part shuru hone vala hai..said in full of madness..
M-no..she scream..tum asa nahi kar sakte..
V-move to other side of her neck-kyu nahi kar sakta?..2 min nahi lagenge ye baki bache kapde uthar me main..
M-nahi...
V-pull his face little away nd move his face towards her..nd looked at her..just staring at her..her fear..her shiver..her weak body..her tears bitting him from inside...
M-looked at him with full of fear nd teary eyes-plz..asa mat karo..main..main nahi sambhal paungi..plz..plz..nd she close her eyes nd cries more..
He still holding her hands on her both either sides..
M-with sobbing..pleading him-plz..asa kuch mat karo..plz..i..i..m..i m sorry..sobbing nd crying..i m sorry..plz..plz ruk jao..plz..
She crying with closing her eyes nd pleading him to change his mind..bt she didn't knew that he never planned to force himself on her or cross that limit..yes he do something wrong before this bt..he cannot broke her..he didn't gve her reason to hate herself..to her life..
V-agr mere gusse ko nahi bardash kar sakti to mere pyar ko apna na shikh lo..
Hearing this she opened her eyes nd looked at him..
V-looking in her eyes..with passion nd aggressiveness-age se meri koi baat bich me kat ne se pahele ya mujhe rok ne se pahele ek baar is moment ko yaad kar lena..
Nd he removed his hands from her nd stepped back..she just looking at him..
V-har bar tumhe demo dena jaruri hota hai na?..to ise ek chhotasa warning demo samazna..agali bar no demo..only action jiska reaction tumhe bhugatna hoga..
Nd he walked towards bench nd bring his jacket nd again walked near to her..
V-aur haa..mujhe abhi bhi uchi awaz aur naa samaz me nahi ati..tumhara pyar mujhe soft majboor kar sakta hai to wild hone par bhi kar sakta hai..tai tumhe karna hai..tumhe kiski virat k saath rahena hai..kyuki aaj se..balki abhi se tum mere saath rahogi..
M-shocked to hear this..she abt to say when her phone rang..both looked at that direction where her phone fall from her hand..
He turned back nd looked at her..
V-gve her his jacket-paheno ise..
She looked at him nd then jacket..
V-angrily-i said wear it..
She didn't get other option she took jacket nd starts wearing it..
He moved from there nd walked near the phone nd pick from floor nd saw the ID..its rahul..
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sorry for stop..
I wrote in sleepy mood
hope u like..
Cover any mistake
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for being a silent reader...but love this.one n other one too...so plz update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Done with both part...
Hope u like...
As i say i wrote in sleepy mood so cover any mistakes nd all...
Continue soon with his madness...;)
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IMPORTANT NOTE PLZ READ -
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Thank u for making this story succeed like this...
But as my upcoming busy seduales nd looking intrest of readers i decided to complete this story in coming 2 or 3 parts...
Bcz of some special readers... Who like this story... I will make it complete otherwise i m ending this here...
I get many requests from my other ones... Nd as i get feedbacks on my thread i use to updating early... As u all knew...
I always try to update regularly without care that how many likes nd comments r coming for my story bcz each nd every aprisiatipons means a lot to me...
So sorry for ending this...
But
really really thank u so much for making my this new experiment successful...
Thank u...
Last some parts updated soon...
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a update.outstanding update.virat was totally mad at manvi.his every word was to passion.is it damo than asli movie kya hoge.but happy that he stop in midway.but i know that now virat make manvi go with him by hook or crok.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...yar ise ho ho kya gaya he? N this is not 1st time that she stopped him...then y so much angry this time...how cud he do this? He was never like that...hmmm shocking...but stull loved his passion...totally limitless...this is called chummeshwari updt...

Hwww hw cud u even think like this khushi...are i m going through this only 5 comments daily problem...warna me to smap kar kar ke tuze pareshan kar deti...plsss i beeging u khushi pls aisa mat karna...pls pls pls...we r ready to wait...there r so many twist n turns r still yet to come...pls dont end this like this..this is 1 d my fvrt story among all others...pls pls pls...its req...show is already going off air...aur upar tu itna achha FF band kar degi to kaise chalega...pls pls pls dear pls...*crying*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Update..!This is the real Virat...He wants her by hook or crook..n wouldn't take no for an answer...I was like please stop n he did...but then that little respect he had from Maanvi is washed away...Waiting for next Khushi..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates
loved it
plz cont soon

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